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The subject matter is very niche, but it is a subject I like. This may give me the motivation to continue reading Because it is a new book, the current world setting has only been revealed a little bit. Regarding pollutants, the mysteries of the old world have not been revealed yet, which has a certain appeal to me. Well... The story is still well written. But 🙂, there are too many flaws in the character creation, especially about the Dissenters. This should be a non-governmental organization, right? Without the support of the National Alliance, how do funds operate? A non-governmental organization can be exchanged for millions casually? ?🤔🤔, and the settings of the Secret Society are very loose. I hope the branch headquarters, team settings, character abilities, magical items, level divisions, etc. Can be more detailed and rigorous. As for the members, the elite team feels no different from an ordinary team? It feels like I have a very low IQ 🤫🤫. The function of the Lost Society is actually to secretly control and kill ghosts and maintain the order and stability of the world. It is just an elite team. It can sacrifice the lives of ordinary people casually? Do you despise the lives of other teams? They all have the same mission and engage in class discrimination??? I feel that the framework of the Lost Society is very loose and there is no internal meticulousness and rigor. The rules can support it, anyway, that's how it feels to me (I don't know how to describe it🤫) By far, the most annoying character is Lin Wanqing. When she first appeared on the scene, I felt like she was a cannon fodder but because she has an intersection with the protagonist and her name is so serious, she will definitely survive on the protagonist's aura 🙂🙂. Secondly, when she mistakenly thought that the protagonist liked her, she gave the impression of a common woman. Thirdly, when I went to the ruins with the protagonist, I felt that she was a loser... A delicate little woman 😅😅 who knew nothing, and I don't know how she became an action team? This kind of psychological quality will kill you in minutes. Do you also have the special ability of the old man? A lucky physique, avoiding bad luck, and surviving to the end??? 🤔🤔🤔 (If it is true, just pretend I didn't say it). The character Lin Wanqing is that kind of silly and sweet girl. Maybe you think that fear of ghosts is normal human behavior, but she is in the action team. With this kind of psychological quality when facing ghosts, she is just dragging her teammates behind and becoming cannon fodder. Doesn't the Strange Society have to train ordinary people like this in advance? It's normal to be afraid. I didn't say that it would look rubbish, but the identity should match the character of the character. If you encounter a ghost next time, you will go crazy, cry, and run away. Don't you have the ability to think and react at all? Come to be cannon fodder? How many people in the world can be cannon fodder for you? 🤔🤔🤔 It's really fascinating to see all the supporting characters giving me this feeling. The only normal people in the Secret Society may be the captain of the second group and Shen Suxian. Although the man named Liu Hexin is rarely described, I feel that he should be a very powerful person. I think Shen Suxian is the most suitable character for the Lost News Club. As the captain of the team, he has special and strong abilities. He can think calmly when encountering difficulties, is wise, brave enough, strong, and thinks about the team members. Isn't this normal?! To be honest, I still want to continue reading. I hope the author can continue to work hard and vote for you every day. For me, there are quite a few poisonous points (I am picky personally). It is also the end of the month, and I am hesitating whether to give you a monthly vote 🤫🤫

FaNiao really doesn't have a little JJ

I vomited out a mouthful of old blood and after reading the previous ten chapters, I stepped on all the thunder that I could step on. .

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I suggest you travel to Fengdu. There is a couplet on the judge's palace, which says, "Rewarding good officials without selfish bribery, punishing evil officials with fairness and justice." The underworld is an ideal world where things are done purely in accordance with the law and there is no human kindness. Good and evil have their own standards. Maybe someone is a good person in this life. If he has virtue, he may be a bad person in the next life and be riddled with karma. Therefore, Taoism divides this into good deeds and negative virtues to judge the good and evil of a ghost, rather than a certain ghost or god self-identifying the good or evil of the ghost. The underworld is an idealistic world that is absolutely fair and has no human feelings.

Although I said that, I still support you, because I have seen very few of this type now. Come on, author, I think since a judge should be fair when judging forbearance, this should be justice that is above others, and it should be absolute justice. Otherwise, is the judge still a judge? But I still support the author.

It's a flaw to enter the underworld's rules with favors. So ~ this is another problem. It is a little different from the previous similar book, but a new mistake has been made. Why integrate human feelings? Because the protagonist is a human being, the author is also a human being. If you want to directly write that the protagonist is recognized by the underworld, he will not be recognized by his relatives. It is fair and just, but if you do this, you will be criticized by people who think differently. How to deal with it? It's actually very simple - the rules of the underworld restrict the protagonist and prevent him from doing anything rash. For example, if you retaliate without reason against someone who has not attacked or interfered with the rules of the underworld, the protagonist will have his merit deducted according to the proportion. Can the protagonist still go around pretending to be someone (female?)? He didn't want to. For example, if someone doesn't do anything that hinders the functioning of the world, and the protagonist doesn't like him, and makes a subjective assumption, he wants to attack him. Sorry, buckle! If there are not enough deductions, you will be severely punished, such as thunder tribulation and difficult almost certain death missions. Seriously, kill the protagonist directly. In this way, the protagonist acts fairly and is not inhumane. Until step by step, the rules of the underworld teach the protagonist that the underworld is not your underworld, but the whole world. You are in charge, and if you want to wear the crown, you must bear its weight. There is a legend in ancient my country: Someone practiced Taoism and wanted to be a god, but he couldn't do it until he died of old age. It happened that the underworld was short of people, so he found him and wanted to recruit him to be a Yin god. This man thought he had finally attained enlightenment and immediately set out on his journey. However, when he arrived in the underworld, there was still an entrance exam - he saw his parents and wife who had died early and were being tortured endlessly in hell for various very reasonable reasons. He also saw records that his children had also committed many crimes and had to be reincarnated as cattle and sheep after death. Yin Chai said: Want to be a god? You have to pass this test, not by going up mountains of swords and by seas of fire for the sake of divine status, but by... Doing nothing. You just sit here and watch. During the inspection period, all your relatives and friends will arrive in the underworld after their lifespan is exhausted. You don't have to do anything, just watch and watch them be cruelly tortured forever by various hell punishments because of their various crimes! And you will, and they will also know that you have a power - as long as you ask for mercy, they can be pardoned and reincarnated as new people! But once you open your mouth, you can no longer be a Yin Shen. Ending? Relatives and friends kept screaming and wailing, asking for help endlessly. They kept saying, "Although we are guilty, we will not let you down..."... "Dad committed the crime that year, wasn't it just to give you new clothes and meat to eat during the New Year?" "Mom has worked hard to pull you for more than ten years, why are you turning a blind eye now?" Brother, I cheated for personal gain to keep your family's reputation. In the end, are you going to burn bridges? ""Dad, my daughter is in pain. Didn't I make you angry? Save my daughter..." Faced with this, the person who wanted to be a yin god felt like the torture of Class 18 was being used on himself. If he doesn't ask for mercy, wouldn't he be unfaithful, unfilial, and unkind? How else to be a human being? He spoke, he lost his qualifications, and Yin Chai said to him: If you want to be a human being, you can't be a god. You'd better be reincarnated as a human being. This is how the story ends. When writing a book, the protagonist should be a Yin Shen? What does the protagonist need to pay? Are you just tired of catching ghosts? There's a lot to dig into.

To be honest, I really like this kind of subject matter, but after reading a few chapters, it feels different from what I imagined. What I want to see is that the protagonist keeps getting stronger, keeps choosing people to become gods, manages construction, and farms with peace of mind. Either form Yin soldiers, kill all kinds of ghosts and monsters in the Yin and Yang world, destroy mountains and temples, and engage in battles. Either in various processes of catching ghosts, punishing evil and promoting good, talking about the meaning of life, and promoting truth, goodness and beauty. I want to see the horror and depression before the underworld was rebuilt. After the underworld was rebuilt, the ghosts were no longer scary. Otherwise, if we were bullied by ghosts before the reconstruction, and still bullied by the ghosts after the reconstruction, wouldn't we have come to the underworld in vain? In these ten chapters, you can see that the protagonist is constantly seeking death, just like playing a game. If you don't level up, buy equipment, or learn skills, you just go to fight the BOSS. If you can't beat this one, switch to the next BOSS. You can obviously recruit a younger brother to work and become a capitalist who can win, but in the end, you see the protagonist wandering around alone, growing up, and pushing around with a bunch of underhanded soldiers and ghosts. Isn't he cool?

In fact, it is more difficult to deal with the protagonists of this kind of mythological fantasy who have relatives and family members. It is not without reason that the protagonists are all orphans at the beginning. The first is the issue of lifespan. The protagonist will definitely live forever in the future, so how to deal with the protagonist's mother and sister? Live forever together? The protagonist's sister will have a boyfriend and a husband in the future. Do they want to live together forever? The protagonist's mother urges the protagonist to get married. He has a wife. Do you want to get together? What about the wife's parents and relatives? And what about the protagonist's son and daughter? If these relatives change their character, act evil, or do things that violate the laws of the underworld, how will the protagonist deal with it? Is it really going to turn into a family underworld? This is a question I have always had about this subject matter. Although other authors either ignore this issue or hide the issue I have always believed that morality is not matched and must be corrected by it. Immortality is also a kind of personality Of course, this is just my opinion. The author does not need to pay too much attention to it. I wish the author to write better and better🙏

This idea from the old era is okay, but it's a pity that it's in the hands of the author. He can't write about the majesty of the underworld. He will feel aggrieved when he meets anyone. If you don't want to open the head office of Invincible 64, you have to talk about human nature to join the lore society. After reading the first ten chapters of the twenty chapters, I felt amazing. In the last ten chapters, my sister was paralyzed and my family was bankrupt. I joined the organization and didn't do anything before I was mocked by other team leaders in a weird way 😰. Anyway, this post will be deleted. I took it as a rant and ran away 🤔

Ghost messengers from the underworld shouldn't interfere in human affairs. Why would the human government do anything when the underworld investigates everything? What the underworld should do is to stop ghosts from harming people. As for the evil people in the world who do evil, the human government should control them. Even if the human government is corrupt, he will die one day, right? When the time comes, just go to hell. Pig's feet won't interfere with everything. By then, all the eighteen levels of hell will be empty.

Find a job in a factory. Anyone who has read supernatural novels for more than five years will never write something so poisonous.

It feels so poisonous to see pig feet joining an organization. Gods join human organizations.

Will ghosts be afraid of the existence of ghosts? What a joke. At most, I feel like I can't beat him and I don't want to die. Fear because of the unknown. So do ghosts exist because of the environment and fear of ghosts? . .

As a defender of rules, if you make exceptions everywhere, then what else should you do with the rules?

When I saw Chapter 46, it was quite strange. When I became a ghost agent, there was basically no plot to catch ghosts. I couldn't beat the resentful ghost like a baby, so I didn't rush to catch some ordinary ghosts to improve my merits, and I didn't do anything serious all day long.

The male protagonist has such an IQ and would have died ten thousand times if it weren't for his identity.

Writing about the underworld, human nature is greater than rules, playing with that

I have read almost 70 chapters, and I feel very frustrated from the beginning to the end. The protagonist is a ghost from the underworld, and he is always startled and frightened by little ghosts. He is not as good as a ghost. Moreover, his strength increases too slowly... He can't defeat this ghost, and he can't do that ghost. As a Yin god, is it really okay for the protagonist to continue to be weak like this? Forget it, stop complaining, I have abandoned the book, I wish the author better and better

The plot is dragging, and you write about emotional dramas that you are not good at. Plus, you become a god but you want to be a human being. How come you can have all the good things? Do you really have the power to have sex for free? There is also the setting of hell. Is it folk custom, Taoism or Buddhism? The main point of complaint is, what are the legal rules of hell on earth? If you don't understand, just look up Nvqing Ghost Law and Fengdu Beidi Law, there are ready-made ghosts and laws! Don't be ignorant and write blindly

In terms of archaeology, it feels dangerous to go down, so the protagonist didn't even consider going down as a Yin official to have a look (you can wear whatever you want without worrying about collapse). Those who are weak do not upgrade themselves and just wander around every day without doing anything serious.

The underworld belongs to me, not me. When I saw this sentence, I ran away. It was very toxic and not suitable for me. (Do not spray)

Not to mention other things, the description of the character Lin is really very pale. Her experience is not described in the early stage, so there is no evaluation, and it is barely watchable. Later, it is mentioned that her family is haunted by ghosts, her parents live and die, and she lives alone. I wonder if her personality changes drastically when encountering such a thing, at least she is not as ignorant of the world as described in the article, right? Especially after watching her previous experience of encountering ghosts, and then looking back and thinking about the details of her previous interactions with the male protagonist, it seemed so awkward. In the last scene of coming out of the tomb, instead of reflecting on one's own shortcomings, it jumps directly to liking the male protagonist and regretting his previous rejection. It looks like a silly Baitian who is full of love. Does this really look like a combatant dealing with ghosts? Even if you are a newcomer, can you really be so white?

Ah, are the ghosts in this world so awesome? Or are they too crotchless? I feel like a ghost has medium to high combat power, so what's the use of an ordinary ghost 🤔.

What kind of ghosts are there? Except for the first few chapters where they are very powerful, the rest of them either run away after being beaten, or they play around with people who are weaker than themselves. They hide those who are weaker than themselves and can't find them. Dude, don't write about ghosts. It's rubbish to write about ordinary people with props.

I have a question about the setting. Are the ghosts in the underworld at the beginning herding sheep? When the protagonist throws in a new one, does it need to be distributed or should it be kept in the same place?