Take an Invincible Clone into the Chat Room

This book is not a white novel, there is no abusive protagonist, and the characters are flesh and blood. What is worth watching is that the side stories are well written and the supporting characters are also meticulous. This is something that some great writers cannot do (or are too lazy to think about). I hope the author will keep his original intention and not just for the sake of numbers. Come on. I like the kind of protagonist who turns into Long Aotian when he sees a person, turns into a licking dog when he sees a woman, and the supporting character who has no brains to make friends can be in the upper left corner~

Fortunately, there are all kinds of clueless foreshadowings starting from chapter 50. The protagonist is a ghost king + a time traveler. It is obvious that the protagonist can know everything but pretend not to know (pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger) to unfold the story line of Lanruo Temple. The result is that the protagonist has to be brainless. The protagonist only saw the part where Nie Xiaoqian commanded the bird and had no doubts at all. It wasn't until he chatted with Nie Xiaoqian that he became a little suspicious. Later, when I knew that the gods and Buddhas were dead and I should have guessed that the gods and Buddhas were not there, I was very shocked. But the book has 800,000 words. I hope that I can see the improvement of the author's writing style after enduring the poison at the front.

Many people criticize it, but in fact, the book seems to be okay, but the author made a novice mistake. There are two story lines, neither of which have any characteristics** and have been too bland. Although the author himself said that it is a farming novel, then the author should not use the current title of the book to give the feeling that the text is wrong. Since you said invincible, author, did you describe the feeling of the ghost king being invincible? No, so many readers are dissatisfied. This is a shortcoming. Of course, the character description is too simple. With so many words, the one I remember most is the little carrot spirit. Maybe it is because the number of words is too small. I hope it will get better and better in the future.

A small complaint. I read it because the idea was interesting at first, because I have wanted to read this kind of small invincible novel for a while, and the background is also interesting, but I can still see some of the small flaws at the beginning. After all, the author is said to be a newcomer, but I feel that it is a bit overdone after more than 400 chapters. The main reason is that the plot is too slow. Many plots are arranged very deliberately. I think you can get home in a few steps, but you have to take a detour to increase the number of steps. For example, I am reading it now The disaster relief plot, even after skipping three chapters, is still a subplot, and the plot is extremely vulgar, and the protagonist's approach is even more extreme. There are so many books on faith propagation nowadays, and you can borrow a little bit from it, but it is so blunt. I don't know if the author has read the passages he wrote consecutively. To be honest, I feel that two chapters at most are enough to end the plot of the Wen family. The drought incident can be solved almost quickly within five chapters. If you eat a bowl of rice for three days, the readers will starve to death.

The name is awesome, but what is the content? Is this considered an invincible article?

I have read about ten chapters, and to be honest, it is very boring. There are many unreasonable parts, and I feel that it is not very smooth. But it only represents my personal opinion.

The author himself said that this book is a farming novel, a daily novel. Please spare those who say there are no explosive points or toxic ones. Everyone has their own ideas. After all, there are many people who are following it. If you think it doesn't look good, you can go and read other books. With so many works, you can definitely find what you like. Don't force the author to change this or that. And now that there are so many free coins, many people don't spend money to read books, so don't make so many requests.

It's very interesting. Come on, write well. Don't stop updating, update frequently.

🙂 I've finished reading it. Overall, it's okay. It's not a noob, it's not Long Aotian, it's not pretending to be a slap in the face, and it doesn't have so many bad street routines. I hope the author can update it well, otherwise I will forget about this fast-paced life in a few days.

No matter what, this book at least makes me feel comfortable. I followed it a few days ago. A born liar traverses the fairy world. It's the rhythm of becoming a god. I hope we won't be disappointed in the future. Come on😊

After a few months of raising about a hundred chapters, they disappeared after a few times.

It's extremely poisonous. Do ghosts have bodies? How did you take over the body of the Ghost King? The ghost king is also a ghost, okay?

It's a farming article, and it's an ordinary farming article.

Who brought that 40-meter sword? This new book is very good, but Fa Bird, if you look at other people's new books, they don't have four or five chapters a day, which makes readers happy.

While I'm recovering, wait for a hundred chapters. The author will write well. Don't wait for me to come back and the book will be gone.

This is a romantic novel disguised as a fairy tale

When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was a cool novel. When I came in, I saw that it was actually a torture novel, a double one. 😪😪😪I slipped away.

Regarding the comment that said this book is abusive to the author, I do not plan to delete it at the moment, leaving it to you to make your own judgment. Although the plot of this book is bland, I think the protagonist is still very carefree. There is no mention of the abuse of the protagonist. I don't know where the book friend was abused. If you are interested, you can take a look at the specific plot. If you read some reviews and think it is not worth reading, please don't give it away. The new book itself is for newcomers to practice writing. Compared with the rhythm and plot, I feel inferior to those good books. If you have to judge it by the standards of sacred books, you are bound to be disappointed. In short, I think the comment area is a place for everyone to discuss. It doesn't matter if you think it doesn't look good. Everyone has different tastes in reading. If you tell me what doesn't look good, I will change it if I can. If I can't, it will be a pity to lose a lovely reader. If you just come in and get scolded for no reason, then I can only delete the post and drive people away. If you have any comments, you can reply to me in the pinned post, and I will reply as soon as I see it. Thank you for your support!

Embarrassing, I originally wanted to get four monthly passes for sperm, but I could only get two in 24 hours... Can I still get sperm after being given a 50% discount by Qidian?

Selling dog meat on sheep's heads. It says Invincible, but both clones are rubbish. One is physically useless, the other is seriously injured, and his power was almost destroyed. Do you have any misunderstanding about Invincible? Abandon it, delete the book, it's all rubbish.

The writing is very vicious. I don't understand it and I don't have much strength. I don't know where I got the courage to lick someone named Invincible on Facebook.

I was so disgusted by Chapter 282. The scholar in front killed so many people for his own power, and the protagonist was let go. Now this spider spirit is destroyed just because his benefactor was killed. It's so disgusting.

Forced wisdom, really convinced. Is he a monster if he knows magic? Then the immortal master also knows magic? Why should you trust him? With so many powerful monsters, couldn't they just turn the Bird Immortal Master into a monster? Can't you say that you are the spokesperson of the immortals, coming to distribute food and help the poor? Some people believe that Po Immortal Master only makes money, but no one believes you giving out free food?

The setting of the ghost king's clone does not revolve around this development, but just writes some messy plots, and also learns from Haoran's righteousness, which is Confucian. Without studying Confucian classics at all, Haoran's righteousness can be cultivated by having clear thoughts. If it is not funny, you can just create a literary setting and copy some modern articles. It is poisonous.

Attention book lovers who are bestsellers, this book is extremely poisonous and I don't know how long I can survive. But I can help someone one by one, and the writing is like shit

Isn't this book extremely poisonous? A man comes and asks you to leave your wife. He wants your wife to make a baby for him. The protagonist still pretends to be calm and calm. A son-in-law who knocked on the door upside down said to himself that if he didn't find Nie Xiaoqian, he would kill me. A useless scholar who hasn't done anything yet. He also said seriously that he was no worse than other yamen. Your business was donated to you by other yamen because they liked your wife. Oh, it doesn't even belong to your family. You just stepped in the door.

Damn, there are a lot of Invincibles. Since they are not Invincibles, why would you mislead people with the title of Invincibles? It's rubbish.

Fortunately, I came back alive. The river crab master is really scary.

After reading Chapter 282, I decided to give up the book. It's poisonous. You can only let others kill you and you can't fight back. The definition of pig's feet is probably as hypocritical as the author 😡😡 Look at the fire.

Author, your interpretation of Haoran Zhengqi in Chapter 22 is simply fart. If you don't know what Haoran Zhengqi is, can you please read the Zhengqi Song carefully a hundred times? Tell me about my interpretation of Haoran's righteousness! Living high in the temple, I worry about the people; living far away from the rivers and lakes, I worry about the king! The great righteousness of a scholar lies in practicing the way of a saint in his heart, serving the country and the people, having a loyal heart, and having the world in mind. Although this is just my insignificant opinion, it is a hundred times better than your so-called as long as you have a clear conscience! I despise you ¬_¬｀