Tokyo Freak Taught Me About Falling in Love

This beginning is a bit lacking! At the beginning, we tried hard to create an atmosphere where the protagonist was lonely, and used several words such as "separation", but the description could not express the protagonist's loneliness and sense of separation from real life. Later on, the protagonist's temperament became frivolous. When he first saw Horai's maid Tamamo at Konoe's house, he directly attached himself to Tamamo's ears and called her a cunning fox... Brother, isn't your character a cold-faced paralyzed man? Later, Tamamo said that the protagonist is gloomy and dull at school... Anyway, it gives people a... Chaotic feeling! ! Maybe the author originally wanted to write the protagonist as a fairy boy who doesn't eat fireworks from the world, just like Natsume's style. But looking at the protagonist's series of data, I feel like I could use some Long Aotian... Anyway, it's a bit of a hodgepodge! I hope the author can seriously set a direction. As an adult, this is really not advisable.

The title of the book does not match the plot. There is no ghost at all except the beginning. If Yan Mosen is excluded, the author should change his name.

I think this book is very good.

Come on, work hard and move forward!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Well... Author, where are the character cards?

Emmm, cut it? 🙂

It is recommended to modify the plot where Chizuru's exam affects the same group. Perhaps the author wanted to create an ordinary yet strong character, but Chizuru didn't give readers a good impression. Obviously the next day is the most important exam, but he still works while sick, without even clearing up the most basic priorities. People can't help but feel that this character is not very bright. Well, after all, he is only a high school student, so it is not outrageous to do such a thing. But the exam part is so disgusting. I didn't see where the burning was, I only saw that she had caused seven other people to fail. Chizuru has the help of the protagonist, so he has a chance to be reborn. What about the other seven people? It can't be said that only Chizuru's efforts for the exam are efforts, but the efforts of the seven people are not considered efforts? It is recommended to change it so that Chizuru's solo performance failed and did not affect others. Otherwise, it is really hard to sympathize with a character who fails because of his own willfulness and brings other people into trouble.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~😚😚😚😚😚😚

I seem to have read this plot and rhythm before. I have forgotten what the novel is called, but the author's writing is still very good.