The Day of Drawing Cards at Hogwarts

This is my first book review. It talks about many points and may contain some spoilers. However, due to my personal reading habits, I am still reading books and I saw the beginning of the Phoenix volume, so the review may not be complete. I will break down the points 1. Male protagonist: Tom Yoder, a member of the Qidian Orphanage, is most likely to be transformed by Lao Deng into the "Dark Lord" of the White Devil. He is added by the system (it seems to be Genshin Impact, I kind of forgot about it, but Jin The fingers are relatively reasonable), my favorite should be the title "Little Sun" (because it is very similar to Lao Fu's name and talent, sometimes it can be confusing. This makes me think that the male protagonist has his own personality), the heartthrob of the Yingyuan (well, my test is 🦅, and the mobile game is also a big favorite) 2. The heroine: Hermione is one of the few books that challenges the HP single heroine Hermione, and the writing is relatively good, people The character creation is based on other film and television stories (it seems to be in Steel. When I first discussed the sorting with the male protagonist, I was so sweet. Of course, my aunt laughed throughout the whole process. This is indeed a sweet novel), and then the author very deliberately created the relationship between several roommates and Hermione (I was not isolated but teased and gained friendship. It made me very happy. It is separated from the original work into an independent personality. As a pretty girl and I like the film and television version of Hermione, I will be more biased. Love it a little, and as a Chinese child, I envy and admire the top student), and the new patron saint is a bit surprising, well, I haven't read much later, so I won't comment much 3. Plot: As for the main plot, of course it still follows the original work but not much participation, but the author has added his own ideas, such as: replacing Lockhart. This is the first time I have read a book that I didn't write down (probably), it is very exciting. The section about getting the ring and decrypting it is also innovative, and the new trio are indeed worthy of being reckless little lions. The descriptions of other supporting characters are also interesting, and they are not just used as a tool to show off. Then the branch plot: What impressed me deeply was the love-making part of the holiday desert travel, which describes the magical world based on the legend. The focus is on love-making and the new time converter (it seems to be another movie and TV story!? I kind of forgot about it). In my opinion, it is pretty good. Then it seems that a "bad seed" supporting character was added to strengthen the Dark Lord's side and create a new boss in advance (Old Fu is indeed a bit stretched compared to the previous generation). At the time of writing, the author consciously buried the plot (praise) and has not yet read the plot behind it. I am looking forward to it (continue to support, the author is too short) 4. Finally, let me talk about the shortcomings: Well, maybe it is the copy story that I am not used to, and I can't understand it. For example, that Nana girl, as a copy brought by the system (Genshin Impact or something), is a bit confusing to me who has never played the game. It's difficult to sort out the relationships between the characters by telling the background story (the chapters are very short). There is also a story where the male and female protagonists play roles and then miss it. It also makes me uncomfortable to watch, which will make me disconnect from the original image of the characters. So I say that the writing in the desert is okay because the actions of the male and female protagonists are logical and consistent with the characters. Finally, there is another point. The author is a foot control, emmm. I think people who follow the book may not have any ideas (I can understand Mr. Huang's book friends), but as a girl, reading a book and reading a lot of descriptions in one volume is a bit too "too much"! Let me sum it up in the end (good guys, I wrote the book review like a short essay): This is a daily love story with not so much intrigue and frequent pretentiousness. The author has many new ideas and a sense of expectation. Then, come on, the author ୧⍢⃝୨

Although this may discourage the author... Come on, if there is another book, I will try it again Hey... I don't know how to evaluate it... I just know that it's time to go. I can't believe it, I only read a few chapters, and the dialogue gave me goosebumps... To be honest, I couldn't read this book after the first few chapters. I could still hold on to the "similar" paragraphs of "Jobless Reincarnation" in the last book, but I was defeated at the beginning of this one, and I just scanned the rest of the book... It's not that the setting of this book is not good, the starting point is quite interesting (if it is not a fanfic). In fact, for HP fan fiction, this card design is terrible... The original characters have been modified a lot... Just to give a few examples: Professor McGonagall would be bored with counting money in person... Ollivander would actually praise the horns of the horned water snake... Hug Hermione, who was sleeping with the Encyclopedia Britannica, actually had something she didn't recognize... There are even more things that are not in line with British culture, such as entering a casino under the age of 21... The emotional communication between parents and children... Come on, if there is another book.

I feel that the protagonist is too understanding, and understanding is as good as pretending, which makes me instinctively impatient with the subsequent plot. It seems that there will be a lot of secondary settings, but the levels of Hogwarts and the protagonist cannot be broken through and cannot be unfolded. It also makes me feel a sense of expectation, but the idea of ​​​​still wanting to read the story of Hogwarts will emerge, because I don't know those historical stories, and the development of the background is often only slightly understood after the protagonist completes it: I understood the Celtics after reading some, and I was still confused by the others. I personally think that the story of the second setting is much better if it is more modern, such as the disintegration of Hongsu. I have read one before. Compared to the Celtic ones, I will look forward to the character cards of the third generation of Dark Lords more, because they are more attractive and can also develop the main plot within the scope of Hogwarts. The Celtic stories would be more like another book, with the occasional appearance of Hermione and the protagonist's magic. It's hard for me to see the connection with the wizarding world. The effect of the card drawing system is not shown. My feeling is that the protagonist is very strong, and then draws cards and draws gold. It should be stronger, but I don't see where it is stronger. I think this setting can be replaced by learning a new spell or trait that is difficult to learn in school. For example, Dumbledore's Phoenix Affinity, Snape's Shadowless Blade, etc. Compared to the system, I think the ring will be more like a golden finger. Personally, I think that the ring's ability combined with the other treasures of the Big Four of Hogwarts can be written as a complete golden finger. In comparison, the function of drawing cards will be more difficult to show. Overall, I feel that this book is okay. I can read it, but I would like to read it again when it is exhausted. What I'm looking forward to is the romance with Hermione and the second setting of the third generation of the Dark Lord.

The author said that he wants to update a hundred times

When I saw that the heroine was Hermione, I clicked in quickly.

This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever seen. I hope it won't be a eunuch. It would be better if it could be expanded to use a time turner to go to the timeline of the Fantastic Beasts series and the founding of Hogwarts. That would be even more perfect.

Have you ever yearned for that magical world? I wonder if you have ever thought about taking the place of the little boy with glasses and a lightning scar, coming to platform nine and three-quarters, boarding the Hogwarts Express, and heading to that magical and coveted school? You must have regrets for many characters in the original work, Dumbledore, Sirius, the Weasley twins... We cannot save them, but we can create our own stories and change their destiny. So, there are fan fictions. In a sense, basically all fan fictions are because of the difficulty of letting go. It is difficult to write Harry Potter fans well, because this path is basically mature. It is nothing more than following the main plot line, or exploring the magical magical world outside the main plot of the original work. So if you want to continue to write good results in this environment, you must be innovative. The reborn protagonist is as always, the Dark Lord module is as always (Deng's favorite), and the single heroine Hermione is as always. However, the creation of Hermione in this book is relatively successful, the emotional line is very good, and the author is very good at making love. Of course, this is not the highlight. The most important thing is that the protagonist never knew that he was a time traveler before. Finally, at the age of eleven, he awakened to the original God card drawing system of a giant Kryptonian (non-chiefs are not worthy), and started his magical journey. Just imagine, but everyone in the magical world is obsessed with drawing cards, shouting "One more shot!", What will it be like? However, from the current point of view, the protagonist has always been a great African chieftain, and the European Emperor is our white, rich and beautiful heroine Miss Hermione. In this way, the relaxed and cheerful writing style, the smooth plot development, the addition of new card drawing elements, and the successful character creation make this book achieve good results. However, some of them are not friendly to those who like the original works. The author has quite a few original plots, but they are quite imaginative. Overall, they are quite good. There are not many good HP fan fictions. I hope the author can bring us better works in the future. {"TopicId":"733686575023718400","TopicName":"Contemporary Youth Reading Illustrated Book"}

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After reading dozens of chapters, here are my thoughts. The overall style of this article is more relaxed, which I quite like. Moreover, the author's overall writing style is online, or more suitable for my taste, so I felt pretty good about it. Then let's talk about the overall plot. As a Harry Potter fanfic, the entire work is embedded with a card drawing system similar to Genshin Impact. At present, the system does not destroy the balance too much, which is rare and valuable. And compared to most fans, there are more original parts by the author, which feels more suitable for me. Because I have read many fanfics before that do not consider logic, and the original plot effectively avoids this. Let's talk about the characters again. As the heroine in the original work, Hermione's overall character is more independent than being subordinate to the male Harry, so I felt it was okay not to be with Harry at the end of the original work. At present, it seems that Hermione has a crush on the male protagonist, but I hope the author will not erase Hermione's own independence and charm because of this. PS: Please update the author more

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In recent years, the development of online articles has been particularly rapid, adopting diversified development methods. The rise of small video software has also attracted a large flow of online articles, making more and more people like online articles. Several major categories that are already very mature at this stage are constantly innovating. Among them, there will be breakthrough works almost every once in a while. Countless masters of masterpieces are born, and the offensive of fan fiction is becoming more and more fierce. "The Day of Drawing Cards at Hogwarts" by Emperor Ha is a fine piece of fan fiction. The protagonist Tom Yoder is a refugee and a "Muggle". During these years of wandering, I got to know the cute little Hermione and had a pet cat who "depended on each other for life". In the "dangerous" world of Harry Potter, of course, the system is indispensable. It is a wishing system and a card drawing system, but it is obvious that Tom is not very lucky. Nine+ black magic, it is still very uncomfortable to introduce this at the beginning of the plot. Wrong, there are not too many excessive "descriptions" and plot intervention points are very good, and the various stitches in it are also good. It can be regarded as a staple of Hogwarts! Being a card drawing master at Hogwarts, but this master's luck seems to be not very good. Mr. Harry Potter walks together in the "back garden" in the safest "forbidden area". Forming a new Iron Triangle brings a different experience, and the emotional scenes in it are also very good.

Hermione

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The more I looked at the back, the more I realized that the name of this book should be changed. It should be called "The Day I Draw Cards" and should be called "I Fall in Love with Hermione at Hogwarts". Hermione is indeed a top student, but she should not be a myth. If a top student can become stronger, then Ravenclaw's strength should be №1 of Hogwarts. After seeing 600 chapters, Hermione's strength is almost crushing the entire school. However, the protagonist's strength is crazily suppressed. Really, starting from the time when I fell in love with Hermione, there were more and more love chapters, and later on, the love chapters accounted for half of each chapter. Although there is supposed to be love, how old are the characters in the plot of the novel and there is only so much space for love? Don't talk about European and American precociousness, the protagonist travels through time, and does as many things as he is at his age. Putting aside other things, just looking at the writing style is nothing. At that age, there is no sister Li. The title cutting is also incomprehensible. The title theme of the previous chapter can be seen in the next chapter. Overall, there is nothing wrong with it. To sum it up, it can be regarded as a romantic Mary Sue novel about a traveler who travels to Hogwarts! It is considered good among many Hogwarts novels.

Hello, professors, my younger brother, Ip Man, is studying at Hogwarts for bachelor's degree, master's degree and Ph. D., With perfect scores in N. E. W. T., And his graduation project is to kill Voldemort alone. Now that I have returned from my studies, I am going to start a preschool training class for little wizards in our Diagon Alley. Please give me your guidance, professors.

The advantages and disadvantages of this book, written for those who will follow, are obvious. The advantage is that the writing style is okay, not very good but at least it doesn't make people feel uncomfortable. The emotional scenes with Hermione are also very well written. If you don't really care about the plot and only read it for the emotional scenes, I think this book is still worth reading. Moreover, the logic of the characters was okay until the second grade, and they were still in line with the original characters. The rest is the shortcoming, and it is my main purpose, or the poisonous point, which is to play Lockhart for the whole second year, just to screen the readers. I can't stand it anymore. I came here to complain about everything in this part. All the things can be attributed to the male protagonist himself, if he does not know about Horcruxes. Forget about the dangers of the Horcrux. He knew the dangers of the Horcrux, but he didn't even need to seal it with magic or carry it with him. He just put it in the drawer. Later, when I saw that he expected the Horcrux to turn into a demon, I thought he had a back-up plan. He did some tracking or something, but it turned out that there was no back-up plan. He was passive throughout the whole process. He followed the diary to do something. Besides, he is as stubborn as Harry. He knew the dangers of the Horcrux and refused to tell Dumbledore when it was discovered that it was missing. It would be fine if he was prepared to bear the consequences. If not, it would just be lost. This is the author's trick. If a student dies, what can he do? Instead of being led by the nose, why, Hermione's life is her life, and the lives of other people are not? Not anxious at all And that Peggy noticed the problem from the beginning. Later, she showed up before the fight with Riddle and had no doubts. It was absolutely ridiculous. In the end, she had the ability to fight back and still held back. It was outrageous. In any case, she was a person who used the curse without mercy and it was effective. What else do you care about? I know there will be an explanation later, but why do you keep this kind of harm? Is this holding back to express how holy the male protagonist is? , But the problem is that to leave the bad guys alone means to be irresponsible to the good guys (I will explain here, the Death Curse in Harry Potter is not used casually. First, it is difficult, and second, it is an emotional issue. It is difficult for ordinary people to have such a big hatred for other people who have no hatred to drive the complete release of this curse. Here, it is used casually in the first grade, which shows the talent and harm) There is also a diary. I really don't have to worry about losing it. What about playing Lockhart while falling in love with Hermione? Using Lockhart's face to do so many things, this kind of semi-double literature is really evil. Moreover, when intercepting Horcruxes and using them as bait, he treated himself like a fisherman. He didn't even bring an insurance, just for the resurrection hook in front. Judging from the time he and Phoenix came over, the three of them were really able to run To put it bluntly, he understood the plot, and he played a very safe game into a narrow escape. Just like your child, he usually behaves very steadily. Let me tell you about the exam soon, I haven't learned half of the content, and then I spent the night cramming. Really, why did you go there so early? You can't develop like this with snacks

Professor Snape!

So Peggy's rape is a secondary fiction, right? Because of this, we won't kill her? Because she was raped, she doesn't have to die to kill, right? What kind of bullshit logic is this? She was raped, which was pathetic, yes. But could this be the reason for her killing? This is the same as explaining when a corrupt official was caught that he was very poor when he was a child. Is that the reason?

Ha, adult version of Tom

The protagonist hasn't studied by himself since the middle period, right? I didn't learn anything about the Patronus Charm, but I was forced to lower my intelligence and force points a lot. I basically couldn't do anything except transform.

Note: The real actors are the same age as in the book, the movie is better than the photos

There are so many plots other than Harry Potter that I can't stand it anymore. I suggest the author watch Bloodline Wizard. With so many original plots, why should he read other fan fiction?

The plot design of the second grade is really bad. I have no idea what the purpose of pretending to be Lockhart for a whole semester is? Mask flow? It was really frustrating to watch. The protagonist taught in Lockhart's face to get the limelight, and then his image fell to the ground and became the only hospitalized student in the entire grade. In the end, no one else knew the truth. The students didn't know the protagonist's efforts, and the professor didn't know either. The author was quite happy with what he wrote and thought he was ingenious, right? There was no excitement or fun at all.

A very interesting fanfic, but the card drawing system is useless. And the author is definitely a child fetishist and a severe patient with foot fetish!

To be honest, the author's writing is good, and it ranks at least in the top five Harry Potter fanfics I've read, but the large number of stockings in the text made me feel extremely uncomfortable. . . So, sorry, I have to give up. . .

It was a good book at the beginning, but by the second grade it turned into a mess💩.

Professor Snape!

The plot started to go crazy in the second grade, and then directly changed from the lawful camp to the chaotic camp. The protagonist's combat power increases too quickly, the plot changes too much, and the original character behaves illogically when the excitement is not enough. For example, Lockhart is too bad (this is normal) The protagonist suddenly changes from lawful good to chaotic neutral and evil without any major changes. It's okay to box others directly. Lao Deng turned into the Riddler, (everyone knows you are Lockhart, but there is no Lockhart, so you will be asked to teach for a semester?) Besides, the protagonist's plug-in is similar to guidance + reinforcement learning, and then you can teach sixth grade directly from the second grade? Lao Deng doesn't know about your cheat, so why should he directly let you teach sixth grade? Hermione, a child who fought for the freedom of house elves, saw you kidnapping the professor, even if Lockhart was the prisoner, she would ask you to report it to the Ministry of Magic, wouldn't she?

After reading a few chapters, the first question is: Is it possible that the second-year-old Rohart's substitute literature is actually a fan of green literature? Second question, is the person named Peggy really deliberately put in to make people disgusting? Third question? I found out that the protagonist really doesn't know any spells, but he transforms whenever he fights?

No sleep tonight. No sleep tonight. Dream back to the boy. Dream back to youth. Excited, nervous and excited. Excited, nervous and excited. Step on. Step on. Magic Steam Train. Magic steam train. Go and find it. To pursue. The other side where the dream begins. The other end of the dream. Originally thought. I thought. Meet. Meet. Legendary. it's said that. The savior of the wizarding world. The Savior of the magical world. Just in life. In life. The most special encounter. The most special meeting. The moment you open the car door, The moment you open the car door, I understand. I understand. In my life. In my life. The biggest expectation. The biggest expectation. It's you. You are the one. To this day. Today. I can still remember it clearly. I can still remember clearly. Your smart eyes. The look in your eyes. Like a deer in the forest. Like a deer in the forest. Into my heart Into my heart. Poor I was young and ignorant. Pity me for my youth and ignorance. Mistake provocation as an expression of affection. Mistake provocation for an expression of love. We spent the ups and downs together during the seven or eight years. We spent seven or eight years together. Often made you angry. Often makes you angry. Now I finally understand. Now I understand. I regret it. I wish I had. So. So. What I want to say is. For Harry's sake. For Harry's sake. Can you please forgive me? I beg your pardon.                                                                                                                                                                                                  .