Cultivating Immortality Begins with Forging

It was out of pity for the grandfather and grandson that I rescued him at the beginning, and there was nothing to say. But later on, the ambiguous plot with this woman was always written, which made me speechless😒.

Qiu Xing's grandfather and grandson were not handled well, let's just talk about the character. The character of the little girl Qiu changed too quickly. Before, she was a little girl who was a hyacinth on the street, and in the blink of an eye, she turned into a coquettish and cute character.

It's so nice to have just met the Qiu family's grandfather and grandson, but I'm too defensive. It's best not to have a situation where you can't take your eyes away when you see a beautiful woman (and then have a lot of sexual feelings in your heart), have no concentration at all, and are very erotic. This kind of situation is disgusting. The gold finger is opened a bit wider, I like it very much. Come on and update.

The grandson surnamed Yue really doesn't want to see this, he just thinks it's super unreasonable.

I feel like the main character is so awesome! He hasn't even started practicing yet. He only has a clone of the Ghost King. He wanders around and confronts the big guys. He is almost a novice when it comes to cultivating the protagonist. He doesn't even know what special methods there are in the world of cultivation. He can be killed by anyone casually.

Without the Qiu surnamed grandson, this book would be considered a good book, but unfortunately it becomes a little poisonous weed. The author found an ancestor for the protagonist without even any emotional foreshadowing. This kind of routine is outdated.

He doesn't have the character of a fairy, but he has become a businessman and a gangster There are so many mistakes in the beginning, but the protagonist is still a fool with a silver gun This tells us what "Mud Can't Hold Up the Wall" is

The more I read, the more awkward it becomes. The appearance of these two grandfathers and grandsons is a failure. There is no foreshadowing of the deep love. Why, this book has 500,000 words, so I will lose.

I personally feel that the biggest flaw in this book is that with so many resources, why don't you just dive in and fix it? Wandering around instead? Your own realm is the foundation, and everything else is ultimately an external object. If you have time, you might as well practice in the mountains and fight monsters to improve yourself.

But don't change the map too quickly. If you do it too quickly, you will be exhausted mentally and physically. It will be like using a plug-in. It will be boring to upgrade and fight monsters.