Battle Through the Heavens: Lord of the Great Thousand World

I suddenly had an idea. Xiao Xuan said that although there were few Dou Di in the ancient Dou Qi Continent, it wasn't like the legendary realm where there were none at all. Logically speaking, the ancient imperial clans should have left behind a tradition of needing Origin Qi to break through to Dou Di. However, in fact, Xiao Xuan didn't know this.

Here's a joke: the other main characters sit back and watch the tigers fight, using their schemes to kill all their opponents and ultimately win the treasure. This protagonist is brilliant! He used a scheme to lure others there, then swaggered back in, only to become the target of an ambush.

Putting everything else aside, the three-year agreement alone—making Xiao Yan lose is enough to discourage anyone from reading it. You probably haven't seen the animated version of the three-year agreement, have you? What did Xiao Yan bear? What did he experience? He faced life-or-death crises time and time again. These are things Nalan Yanran couldn't achieve by simply cultivating at home.

At the beginning of the book, it was a bit outrageous. Two Battle Masters from the Mad Lion Mercenary Group were eyeing a seventh-tier peak magical beast, and they even predicted that the protagonist's mother would at least be a Battle Spirit. Who gave them the audacity to even think about such things? How could small fry like them possibly get their hands on something like that? 🙂 I'll see how it goes later, since the comments and monthly votes are pretty good.

(Recently, while reading Kazuo Ishiguro's *The Unconsoled*, I suddenly felt a resonance with Aomine's experiences. The bitterness and pain of those experiences came to mind, so I wrote a short essay of about two thousand words to describe my state of mind. I tend to use long sentences, so it may be a bit difficult to read quickly.

The protagonist has the bloodline of the Ice Phoenix. Otherwise, why doesn't the protagonist steal the Dragon-Phoenix Origin Fruit from the Ancient Tomb of the Creation Saint and eat it himself? The Dragon-Phoenix is ​​the number one divine beast in the Great Thousand World. Giving it to Zi Yan would be a complete waste.

To be fair, this book is actually not bad, but unfortunately, its deliberate imitation of the original Battle Through the Heavens writing style makes it seem somewhat incongruous and awkward, and it's rather speechless to read in a half-ancient, half-new style. What era are we living in? A more relaxed writing style would definitely get better results.

Indeed, the trip to the Monster Mountain Range was completely inexplicable; the mercenary group they joined served no purpose whatsoever and instead led to a leak of information. The cave was also a mess. Even Xiao Yan started by absorbing trashy strange flames, but the protagonist immediately becomes incredibly powerful, directly rivaling a Dou Huang in strength. The plot and power levels are utterly inconsistent.

This is a wish-fulfillment novel where the protagonist's true strength is constantly suppressed; my assessment is that it relies on a thesis defense. The novel boasts for dozens of chapters that even a Dou Zun (a high-level martial arts master) would want, yet the protagonist only gains two minor stages of power after consuming a rare treasure—and that's still just a minor stage of the Dou Shi (a high-level martial arts master) realm.

Many fanfiction writers share a common problem: as they write, the main character disappears, and they start writing about other characters. 🤫