How to Become a Full-Time Hunter

The author's writing style is still very immature. The beginning is lengthy and the characters' personalities are unclear. Although I couldn't stand it, it's still good to support the author's creativity.

What can I say about this book? The writing is awkward, and then I have to play The Riddler. To be honest, according to the character of the original novel, it is basically over when he meets Hisoka on the scene. Hisoka will not give up killing you just for a few words from you, nor will he stop just because you can dodge one of his attacks. The pig's trotters didn't show any potential at all, they were just given as a gift.

Toxic. First of all, wearing something is poisonous. The hunter exam also pays attention to physical fitness. You, an earthling, can't take the hunter exam with ordinary qualities. In addition, the clothes you wear are also highly toxic. For example, everyone works hard to exercise and practice yoga. We are fitness. In the world of Naruto, you can develop chakra. If your ancestors have eaten the fruit, although you may not be able to develop chi in the world of the hunter, it is not a problem to have more arm strength. In the world of Dragon Ball, there are various combat powers. In the world of martial arts, If you show up at the hunter exam so carelessly, it is equivalent to an ordinary person who is not a soldier appearing in the special forces selection exam. When the president sees it, he can only tell you to get out and hold you responsible, otherwise the previous elimination will be a show. , Not to mention the same sky arena, to enlighten you, please, the species are different, so what do you open? I traveled to another world and added a divine beast gate, and practiced the skills to return to the ancestral bloodline. To others, it is a god-level skill to us, especially monkeys.

After reading it, I kind of want to say, author, have you watched The Hunter? Or did you forget? The main ability of hunters is the various telekinesis abilities they have developed. So far, I have only seen the protagonist as an operating system, and my telekinesis abilities have not been developed at all. You actually challenge Hisoka directly. Is this just because Hisoka won't kill him? Did you think too much of Hisoka and let him be the nanny of the protagonist? I feel like a protagonist like this wouldn't survive more than three chapters under normal circumstances. I feel like your book is just waiting to be eunuched

It is a bit poisonous to say that the Dao of Heaven is 10,000, but after practicing for 7 days as an ordinary person, and then practicing Nian Nian in less than a few days, it reaches 190 in Sky Arena.

After two chapters to persuade you to quit, you want the protagonist not to remember the plot and you also set up a JB time traveler identity.

Although this novel is on my bookshelf, I haven't read much of it because I felt a little bit offended at the beginning, so I didn't continue reading. But the author of this book cut it, and it feels like a pity. After all, there are really few full-time fans. When I saw the last note posted by the author, I will write about hunter fan fiction in the future, just like giving you a boost, hoping to read the next novel as soon as possible. Here, I also have some suggestions. I hope the author can refer to them if they are useful: 1. First of all, the first point is to grasp the distance between you and the protagonist group. You said it yourself, too close is not good, and too far is not good. Here are some mistakes that many authors make, which is to meet the protagonist group before the hunter exam, and in order to build a good relationship with them, tell them and teach them about telekinesis. This is extremely poisonous to me, and I will most likely abandon it directly depending on the situation. 2. In the Hunter World, you use abilities from other worlds, such as Naruto's Ninjutsu, Blood Succession Limit, Pirate's Devil Fruit, etc. This point depends on the author. Some authors just copy other abilities, and they also like to criticize them. They directly say how awesome the abilities of the protagonists in their works are, and the abilities of the people in the Hunter are not good at this and that are not good at that. My opinion here is that it is not impossible to use abilities from other worlds, but they must be restricted or strengthened according to the rules of the hunter world, and then you need to develop your own telekinesis abilities, which are also developed according to the hunter's world view. 3. The third thing is not to collapse the character of the original character. Destroying the character is a big poison. In many novels, I can't resist the author's poison of destroying the character. 4. Regarding the plot, it is necessary to add the plot, but the degree must be grasped. If there is an original plot at the same time, good writing can add a lot of points to the novel. The characters that will appear and the impact of the development of events on the subsequent plot of the original work must be carefully considered. That's all I have to say for the time being. If the author sees it and feels it makes some sense, please add some details and make it purely by hand.

The remake I watched felt that Xiaojie was very disgusting and weird. What was expressed in the final stage of the hunter exam? Never give up? From what I saw, it felt like Xiaojie had determined that the other party didn't dare to kill him. Greed Island Leiza kills every criminal and tells Xiaojie the crime he committed, but he still says that killing is not good, right? Then Kate didn't want to give Nifebit the time to treat Xiaomai. If it weren't for the plot and the characters such as Killua, I wouldn't be able to watch it. Killua grew up in a family of killers, but Killua knows good and evil and knows who to kill and who not to kill. Kurapika and Leorio are both able to distinguish between good and evil, but Gon has no concept of good and evil and is self-centered, ignoring matters that have nothing to do with him! It's different when it comes to yourself. The bomb demon was released and treated, but he was still drunk.

After reading it, I have a feeling. The author feels that physical fitness has nothing to do with nen ability. An ordinary person who has just learned nen ability can defeat a person who has experienced many battles. Combat experience is not important at all. It feels a bit mindless. Forgive me for being a free prostitute. Goodbye

Fragrant spitting post In order to let readers make better and more powerful complaints. This building is specially opened. If you have any dissatisfaction, please speak here (or make suggestions). First of all, let me respond to the readers' feedback about the protagonist, Our Lady. Oh my God, do readers set the standards of Our Lady so low now? What is the Holy Mother? You come to kill me, and I happily let you go. This means you recognize it as the Holy Mother. Be kind to the disadvantaged, is this the Virgin? It's acceptable to say he's a good person. The strong will never draw their swords against the weak. The second point. Why doesn't Hisoka kill the protagonist? I have already replied in the discussion area, so I won't elaborate further. The remaining questions are left to the readers to ask. If you really want to find a problem, why don't you guess what the black crystal is? Above.

It's true that the protagonist lacks a little bit of logic.

Judging from your profile, I think you also know what's interesting about hunters. If you have fun and have great telekinesis skills, your whole flesh-piercing conspiracy stream is boring at the beginning.

There are very few writers who write about hunters, and none of them have any writing skills. The plots with some writing skills are not attractive. The author basically just flatters himself, saying that he wants to write a real world of hunters. In fact, neither the plot nor the characters of the original work are in-depth enough.

Come on author, I hope to see a truly completed hunter fanfic

One chapter is okay, two chapters are wise, and three chapters are abandoning the trap The first chapter is escaping from Hisoka In view of Hisoka's eccentric personality and the fact that there seems to be some foreshadowing, it seems reasonable. Chapter 2 The protagonist's memory begins to forget... I personally don't like it, but it is a setting after all, and it is not too poisonous. Some people may be able to accept it and some may not. (I personally don't like that side, but I won't get poisoned to death) Chapter 2 and 3 Conversations with Leorio and Kurapika This side is really uncomfortable. Asking about trade issues, moving out of Dongba, and asking for paper and pen, the whole thing is far-fetched Even if the protagonist's plug-in is a wisdom-reducing halo, this writing method is really not good...

I suggest the author to read Food Hunter or Stranger's Journey to see how they write. It's always good to steal more from the master. Otherwise, the writing style will be so childish that it won't retain readers. And shouldn't the main plot revolve around the development of telepathy and imagination? You can do everything all of a sudden, good guy. Anyway, I just skipped and read and couldn't stand it anymore.

It's very stiff It feels like driving 120 and suddenly makes a sharp turn For example, thank you for Hanzo's place For example, the secret box For example, for oral pleasure and for fighting against Hisoka For example, ordinary people can avoid Hisoka's attack by traveling through physical time and figure out what to do For example, it is discovered that they cut in line halfway but can't explain it Author, what plot do you want to insert Don't talk about the golden three chapters Is there anything in the ten chapters that makes you feel more immersive?

I want to ask the author, is V5 that weak? Is it the Hunter Association and the Gatekeepers who withstood the pressure of the Dark Continent (or the Dark Continent has not discovered humans). Is a rose that can't even kill the ant king be V5's trump card? I hope the author can not make V5, the strongest organization in mankind, look so slim 😅

The writing is also clear and worth reading, please keep up the good work!

The protagonist turns out to be a sz, who has the potential to become a virgin, not bad, not bad

Chapter 3: Memory fades, you deserve to be thrown into the street.

It's okay. At least there's nothing too embarrassing. Brainless dialogue that forcibly advances the plot. There are too few full-time fics. I hope the author doesn't go to the palace.

It was so vicious in the early stage. I admire you for persisting.

I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter. It started with a certain death. I didn't even understand how the protagonist survived? ?

The author is really a novice. After reading the previous chapters, he relied solely on dialogue to advance the plot. The description of any scenery and environment also changed my mind a little bit.

A eunuch? ? ?

Reported, thank you

I haven't read it yet, but after reading the suggestions given below by Full-time Hunter, I will also mention it. The world view of the first Full-time Hunter is very large, and it is a place to use your imagination to write. However, it is difficult to control if you don't have enough imagination. There are several iconic events in the Hunter World, such as exams, Sky Colosseum, Youkexin Auction, and Ant King. This involves the original characters.，，，，，，，，，，， So stupid. Something like this is easily poisonous. The third is reading ability. Basically, if you are not good at it, you will be dismissed immediately. Everyone is here to read the book to have fun, not to show off your imagination. Your imagination can be reserved for developing the plot, so I would like to express my opinion.

Doesn't it mean that the guardian beasts cannot attack each other? Why can the fourth prince kill the eldest prince and the second prince?

Recently, I was reviewing the Hunter anime and found this novel by chance, and found that it has not been updated for several days. QwQ Woohoo, don't be fooled I haven't read the manga and don't know the plot behind it (because it's so tiring to read the manga). It's so uncomfortable to just stop here orz. I really like the protagonist Kurapika and I'm looking forward to working with him (actually, I also like Killua and Feitan, but Feitan It's been so long ago hhhh Then the male protagonist and Killua's brother are at odds again, and the only love I have left is Kurapika! ) Also, I want to ask if a female protagonist will appear in the later stage. I have a saying that I don't like to watch emotional dramas because many authors make the female protagonist so awkward. When I saw the shadow leader in the early and middle stages, I was a little doubtful that she was the female protagonist, but I'm happy that she hasn't appeared recently!