Echoes of the Spirit Soul

When I read Chapter 66, I suddenly felt uncomfortable. The plot was too prominent and the protagonist was a source of disaster. Something would happen wherever I went. It even gave me an all-in-one choice. The route of the journey was controlled by the gods. The heroic rescue was indeed magnificent, but overall it gave me a sense of disgust that I was a puppet. If it can be tactful, it is okay that the protagonist is a traveler wandering in this world. He improves himself while traveling, and occasionally eliminates evil, which makes reading more comfortable!

I feel that the title of the book affects the amount of reading. Generally, when searching for books, I directly search the soul, and the soul cannot even think of it.

Game Soul Echoes Book title Soul Echoes...

The author's advantages: 1 The author's battle scenes are very detailed, down to the details of every action, the result of the move, and the enemy's counterattack Of course it is mainly Zhong's movements, after all, most of the people he kills are not people. It is rare to see detailed battle scenes. Seeing that I know Zhong well now It is rare to see such a pure protagonist, and he is loyal to his heart. Zhong attaches great importance to martial arts and never hides this pursuit. The last time I saw it was Xia Wusheng from the Infinite Horror fandom The protagonists in other books always need reasons to do something, or they do it half-heartedly. System-like things are like a reflection of the protagonists' hearts. They want to do it but they must find a reason Furthermore, regarding Lillian (Princess), Zhong's rejection is very clear. This is very good I have seen too many protagonists refuse to lean in physically and honestly. Maybe this is something that most readers and even the protagonists like to see, but this matter will be discussed in the third point 3 The protagonist's growth Zhong's heart is stronger and his will is firmer Lily has also become a self-reliant woman from a young girl. She can accept her mother's remarriage and bless them. Zhong is a good teacher. Not only taught martial arts but also the basics of being a human being Lillian (Princess) realized the importance of being strong. More than that, she realized what a princess needs to do and how she should live apart from her status as a princess. This is rare This is a smart girl, really smart. Most things are easy to understand and she understands what she wants, but she is still a little girl who has illusions about the world. Maybe this is a good thing The growth of the latter two of the three characters is visible to the naked eye The question mentioned in the second point: It's not that chasing backwards is impossible, but what about growth? Except for novels that are purely about relationships, all women are tools. They are either here to send equipment, information, relationships, or themselves. They appeared for a while, and the two got close. Since then, the female character has not appeared again. The next time she appears is when the male protagonist needs her and "needs" her The male protagonist must have grown up. The author will pay attention. What about the female character? If she is not important, why spend money describing her? Of course, this is not important. Just complaining is a powerful tool to attract readers after all However, there are some problems in this book. It depends on the author whether to change it. I just make suggestions: 1. Rhythm problem Starting from the Gate of the Abyss, the plot rushes all the way without stopping. It is the physical meaning on the road Starting from the first copy, Zhong and Lily are always on the road. Yes, they have a rest. The plot mentions changes in their actions, but I feel that they never stop. The changes in the town are like one conveyor to another in the game. Their rushing actions are like the pictures that appear when the game is buffering. They seem to have never rested As a reader who has stored many chapters, my impression is that the climax of the dungeon is in the last battle, and the transition chapter of the dungeon is on the eve of the war. This is outrageous. There are obviously long clues to investigate the plot on the eve of the war Battle plot, although the battle description is very good. But I brought it up because of emotions. Zhong is very calm. His battle scenes are also very calm. There are almost no emotional fluctuations. He can't ignite when he should. The battle scene can only be ignited when other people are present. When Zhong fights the big monster in the abyss, Zhong has no emotions. The monster will only scream and the pain will not affect it. He can recover. Although the monster is very scary, I can't see the fear. I just want to laugh:) The most burning scene for Zhong is the battle with the inner demon. And Zhong, who was angry because he had lured the tiger away from the mountain, punched the demon blessed by the Lord of Joy (I can't remember the name of this guy, but it is really disgusting. Nothing was done by humans. He hid in the territory to lure the tiger away from the mountain and tricked Zhong into going to the west. He was beaten by Lilian in the spiritual space. It was really cool to have Zhong's template and be beaten violently) Also in reality, beating the demon with a steel frame was very cool The most irritating scene was when the players went to Cannes to fight the plague. That passionate scene is very exciting Every battle of Lily attracts people's attention because she is growing. She has gone from being in a hurry to facing it calmly Lillian's most burning scene is also the one where she fights the devil in the spiritual space. It is very handsome The big scenes are always Zhong, but they are really too calm to burn. The battle scenes are obviously very handsome, but they are very contradictory 2 Sense of substitution Zhong is a person worthy of admiration, but he is too powerful. Whether it's body or mind, it's rare in the world Lily and Lillian are minors and "runaway" princesses. I'm just happy with their growth So they brought in other players, but the players are obviously not very reliable types, so this book actually feels like watching the legendary story of an NPC's life 3 The decrypted plot unfolds In fact, the world view is pretty good. The problem is here: Zhi Zhong arrived in city a, and he needed to find clue b. After thinking for a while, he came up with the search plan for b. Good guys, readers don't know. I don't know the topography of the town. Where is it located? Are there lakes around it? Is there a jungle? What is the season like? Is there a port near the sea? What kind of business does the landowner in the nearby territory do? Selling wine? Industry? I only know that Zhong came to city a, met the bishop to exchange information, and thought about going to land c. Readers are passive in everything. Even the fans can't guess. There is no sense of participation at all_(√ ζ ε:)_ It further deepens the feeling that the protagonist is running the map It also goes to Dongtu. He runs directly to the Wang family where the mission is. However, the weirdness of Dongtu is stronger than that of Xilu. It seems that they are not taking the same path. But as soon as the meme came out, the weirdness dropped a lot. Maybe because it is a foreign word In addition, the monsters, main enemies, and allies have a very clear worldview 4 Ms. Qi is a foreshadowing, right? This line is really long, and there will be a section from time to time. She should be very important, but Ms. Qi cries every time she appears. It is really a headache to watch 5 Miss Dai, this elf girl is very two-dimensional. But it can be seen that the author strives to be realistic Finally, I send my best wishes to several characters I hope that Zhong will move forward bravely and with a clear conscience I hope Lily lives a happy life and grows up healthily I feel that Lillian will most likely inherit the throne. I hope she will become an excellent queen Miss Dai, just don't be killed by curiosity Ms. Qi emmmm best wishes I also wish all readers and authors good health The author who keeps writing In the end, he will be promoted to the great god

The title and introduction of the book seem to resonate with the soul, so gather here.

I feel that the protagonist's character is a little awkward. The author wrote a lot about his heroic deeds and his kindness and selflessness, but... He didn't write much about his love for martial arts, and his actions lacked some purpose. The protagonist is a martial arts fanatic. In an extraordinary world, if you want to pursue extraordinary martial arts, the best way is to pursue relevant inheritance or receive relevant training, but the protagonist has no such awareness at all. When he sold the troll to the mage, people felt that the reward was too little for just asking a question. They even asked him if there was anything else he wanted, but he said no. He was given 200 gold coins as a reward, and without hesitation he donated 180 gold coins to set up a school. He did not consider spending money to buy inheritance, or ask someone to guide his extraordinary abilities. He also did not consider asking for relevant knowledge when he met a strong person in the physics department.

I was passing by while searching for books, I dropped a few of the books I picked up (please share them with those passing by)

No way, there are so few people, This book is quite good.

The author is so perseverant. I have only seen two such perseverant authors, and now there is a third one 😰

The book is a really good book. This is one of the few books in my collection from Qidian that I can give full marks to. But I am really curious about why the author is so malicious towards nobles and lords╮(╯▽╰)╭ No matter where the protagonist goes so far, the local lords seem to be villains with low intelligence and ineffective work. The key is that it has not shown the ability to match the power. Mingming has always said that divine power is squeezed out by royal power. However, based on this comparison of strength, divine power can completely ride on the head of royal power. If there is no divine right of kings, it can only be said that the gods are reliable!