One Piece: Sword Immortal from Another World

I told you that I haven't read it yet, but I will post my feelings after watching it. If I remember it, I will post it. See the comments section. The reviews are pretty good. There's been a book shortage lately, so come in and take a look. If you don't like it, don't criticize it to save your life.

I have read it, how can I put it... Your ideas are very good, but your writing style needs to be improved a bit. Overall it's not bad, keep it up!

I saw the label of the Four Plumbing Brothers.

It's pretty good, although I haven't watched One Piece. Ask me, did the one named Kurosaki Ichigo become Hokage in the end?

Let's vote, the real heroine!

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Take a vote, real heroine!

Take a vote, real heroine!

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Take a vote, real heroine!

To be honest, letting Ace and Luffy become pirates is a big failure. There are really not many good things among the pirates in One Piece. The navy is like a pile of rice with a few rat droppings, but a pirate is a pile of rats with always a few grains of rice. Pirates are basically extremely vicious, killing people, raping and plundering, and there are a small number of them. They are forced to go to sea, such as Whitebeard. There are really not many good people who are pirates in One Piece. The people Luffy saved along the way are less than 1/10 of the people he tricked to death. People like Luffy are crazy and have low IQs. They think pirates are free and bright. This is reasonable, but the protagonist's IQ shouldn't be. Is it to promote the emergence of the war on top, or?

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Take a vote, real heroine!

Take a vote, real heroine!

The strange sword immortal has no sword body, sword intention, sword essence, sword technique, sword spirit, sword magic power, no growth-type natal magic weapon sword pill, and no attack power of the sword immortal. This person should be called an Immortal Cultivator, not a Sword Immortal. 🙂🙂🙂

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Long hair + flying sword + white robe

This is the first time I sign a contract, I will work harder

In Pirate Cultivation, you can only fly swords. What's the use of the escape techniques you learned? They're all fancy.

DaDa's style is very relaxed. I hope DaDa can write down the role of pirate well. Come on!

What makes me most curious about Qidian is that a group of big men watch male videos, and they are everywhere urging the protagonists to write female protagonists, but in reality they are all virgins? Can you go to female videos if you like to watch your virginity?

If you ask me, a woman will only affect the speed at which I draw my sword. What kind of heroine do I need?

I wonder if the fantasy swordsman who cultivates immortality doesn't understand the meaning of the sword? 🤫Do you want Mihawk to wake you up? Your sword control really just controls the sword to fly back and forth 🤫

Why don't you come up with some kind of sword fairy system? If you start time travel, you will die. You write a chapter and then time travel. It's just that this golden finger didn't think well and forced it?

I almost died laughing when I read the update time of the novel. Just one day after the novel was finished, Luffy's fruit was awakened. I don't know what the author thinks, hahahahahaha

The author cares too much about the plot of the original work, and the writing is purely based on the original work, which is a bit wooden, as if he has read the original work again.

Can there be no female protagonist and a great author?

Author, won't you give out task rewards for so many big events in the future? I hope you pay attention to the details and don't be too hasty. I hope you can make more progress in your next book. I will always support you.

The author's new book can be supported by 🍅 .

Let's not talk about the poor writing and plot. Let's just say that the chapters after the final battle and the last extra chapter are the best endings among the more than 50 One Piece fics I have read! ! A big dinner party, some characters with regrets all having fun together, I looked at it with an aunt's smile on my face, The wedding, the three brothers and Shanks as best men, marrying Hancock, the heroine doesn't have many scenes in the whole story, it's very good. New Year's Eve dinner, Dragon entrusted Krall to Sabo, leaving only Nami, Luffy, Ace and Yamato. The four brothers took their childhood flags and treasures and went to sea together. I really like this ending! ! I hope that when the One Piece anime ends, there will be a scene like this: Luffy Sabo and the resurrected Ace gather in the secret base and go to sea together holding the ASL flag!