I'm an Immortal Demi-Human

The demon slayer part was uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist was beaten like that and the misunderstanding was solved. If it were me, I would definitely beat them into dogs.

How about this?

I remember that demi-humans can be killed. One of the ways to kill demi-humans is to cut off their heads so that they can see their headless bodies and recognize death and die. . . .

Well, tell me your thoughts after seeing Three Worlds! First, the character of the protagonist is not well defined, and the ghost's abilities are not selfish enough. It is a state of benefiting the people, which is too buggy. Secondly, the evolution of ghost thoughts and feelings is too fast, which feels a bit weird and jumps a few times, but of course it is acceptable. Third, as a person who has died tens of thousands of times, no matter whether you kill others, you will be emotionally indifferent or neurotic. Don't refute it. Not dying doesn't mean it doesn't hurt, even if you know you will be resurrected. After all, you are still a person who has been afraid of the first world for so many years. The catharsis of death will also be a catalyst for a kind of morbid neurological thought and personality change, not to mention the childhood shadow of childhood. Such people are more or less likely to be selfish, preserve their moderately paranoid character, or even be perverted, but the protagonist's personality is not very successful and changeable, and he does not have a strong motivation to pursue the purpose of pursuing power. Fourth, the third world is still not rigorous enough. A person like this who wields a knife or even kills himself once must kill him or pay a heavy price no matter what the reason is. It does not matter whether the other person is kind and spares him or if he has explained clearly to you and others have said sorry to you, then forgive him. Poison! After all, what era is it now? The readers of Brother Qidian are all super old bookworms. The slightly poisonous, unreasonable and unrealistic things from a few years ago are no longer very popular. Fifth, I originally thought that you can only take yourself through time, but it turns out that you can also take others with you. It's a bit strange. The key method is to just take it with you. Isn't there any other price? Isn't it expensive? Too casual. Sixth, the protagonist is a passer-by in the world. I personally think that if you have someone to accompany you throughout your life, you should not be lonely. You can enjoy every world very wonderfully, but you must also have passers-by without leaving a trace. Otherwise, the world will be full of regrets or bring a lot of slander. After all, the setting is that the ghost is always stronger than the main body. Seventh, the author should sort out the outline later. There are only a few dozens of them now and can be saved. Otherwise, you can read some better gods and the like. Cruel Toilet Paper Angel's "Latitude Erosion" is a pretty good demi-human. You can read it and read more works to improve it. After all, it is quite rare to write about demi-humans. I hope it is an interesting and thoughtful novel. If you can't write an emotional scene, why don't you just be a slanderous person? After all, life is so tiring, why not have some fun? 😁😁

My side is Sato. If the protagonist helps humans fight Sato, he is seriously ill and will 1,000,000% die.

I don't know why, I don't want to chase anymore. At first, the update was slow and I thought I would take care of it for a while, then I started to play Whitebeard's job of collecting his son, taking in his younger brothers and sisters, and then I obviously had a nuclear bomb, but it had been changed into a suitcase and could detonate on its own, but I just led the team to attack Wuhan first. After attacking, it was fine to throw other explosives first, not to mention the nuclear bomb, right? No, no, forget it, it doesn't matter. I'm not disgusted with the plot yet. What changed me and started to disgust me is that the author wrote that Wu Ke can eat the flesh and blood of the protagonist and become not afraid of the sun. Hey! Doesn't this make it look like no explosives were thrown in front of you? It would be fine if it was a simple and mindless article, but the problem is that the author is not irrational and cautious before writing, and he also uses his own blood to control people with high social status (not to mention controlling the changes of the post) and uses them to bring him weapons and even nuclear bombs.

In order to find a book about Asian people, I downloaded a lot of novel software. Come on, support me. I will post in the Asian people forum. Come on, hold on✊

Just to complain, the conflict between the protagonist and Sato is too deliberate! Even if you spend a lot of time describing the adoptive father, that's fine. . There is no description at all, it's just a matter of time, and then the protagonist confronts Sato. . This horse riding is too deliberate.

Every time I see this kind of talk about controlling the world, I am very curious. Is the world only as big as Japan? Does such a small place deserve to be called the world?

Throwing the protagonist into the world of Tokyo Ghoul, would the protagonist be equivalent to an all-you-can-eat buffet?

Or this?

In the plot of the protagonist's demon slayer, the two pillars who were killed by the demon refused to listen to the protagonist's explanation and thought they were ghosts who wanted to kill the protagonist, so they cut off the protagonist's head. After this, the protagonist still treats the two people like that. Is he Sashi or something? It wouldn't be a problem if the protagonist's personality had always been like this, but I don't think the previous protagonist's personality was like this. The best thing is not to write it directly just because you want to write it this way, but to base it on the character of the protagonist. You didn't write about any changes in the protagonist, just like that. I don't think it's good to write like this. 🐶 If the character set by the author is like that, just pretend I didn't say it.

I'm optimistic about you, author, come on! ! !

The fate volume is too protracted, without any sense of participation. There are original characters throughout, and the latest two chapters. I only read the title and beginning, without any idea of ​​​​subscribing. To kill an old bug, you have to explain the causes and consequences to the readers, and come up with the justice of the action? Even though I wrote this and remembered that the protagonist is a character who doesn't know the plot, the protagonist's participation in the plot of Fate Volume has no sense of existence is really unbearable. Infinite Novel is about characters in different worldviews, and the collision of abilities and products creates new possibilities. It is not about parallel world lines under the worldview of Xingyue. Killing an old bug, one chapter explains the cause and effect to the victim's family, which is not clear yet, one chapter describes the situation in Matou's house balabala, another chapter is finally here, there is no need to talk about it, one chapter persuades jointly to fight the bug, one chapter rescues people and explains the aftermath, one chapter deals with the aftermath... 😡

The most powerful thing about demi-humans is not their fighting power, but their wisdom. If every demi-human improves his or her own wisdom, engages in politics, forms a group, and builds a party. Only demi-humans can establish a party, use knowledge and power to launch coups, and use demi-human thinking to build beliefs. In a few decades, the rulers will be a strict party that no non-demi-humans are allowed to enter.

Author, if possible, please change the concept of bringing people into other worlds, or add a restriction, otherwise it will feel very strange.

A small reward is not a sign of respect

A little one...

After reading so many manga and fanfics, I can't write a copy of Demon Slayer well.

It seems that the performance of this book did not meet the author's expectations, so I decided to TJ!

Do the demi-humans need eunuchs? Did you see the post about the new book opening today? Do you want to double-open or discard this?

Raised to death? 😰😰😰

🌿, I just got excited and you lost it, why are you making a fuss?

It's a scam! Please be sure to finish this book before returning to the coffin, Qiuli Gao!

I survived, but only lived for a few chapters, and then I went back to sleep😭😭

...? I regretted coming in to see it, and it turned out to be a big pigeon with TJ tendencies 😭

So, should the author of this book be updated or not? ?

It suddenly occurred to me that when I came back to read this book, how many more pictures did I live?

…Did I remember that I wasn't castrated? I? Why are there suddenly a few chapters missing and a few chapters added?

After looking through my experience, I came across this book. I suddenly remembered that time when I turned off the light and read this book at night. After reading for a long time, my eyes became a little blurry. I squinted to see clearly. Time flies so quickly.