Superpower Unrest

Having finished reading it, I'd like to discuss the book's strengths and weaknesses, which is also the reason why many people are pessimistic about it, as explained in the author's last chapter. **Prerequisite:** Novels are different from reality. In reality, as long as it conforms to physics, anything can happen; but in novels, it must conform to logic, logic, logic.

The first ten or so chapters of this book were readable two years ago. I even subscribed to all the copies available for purchase just to leave a review. But after those ten or so chapters, it basically fell apart completely! This fully exposes the author's true nature as a white-haired and nerdy individual.

Keep it up! It's very well written. Also, I'm not sure if the protagonist is orchestrating this, but his younger brother is like a typical overpowered protagonist from the beginning, seemingly acting as a catalyst for many later plot developments. Furthermore, the geographical descriptions of countries feel rather vague; it would be helpful to add more detail later on, perhaps by changing all the country names on the map.

First of all, congratulations to the author on starting their new book! I hope it's completed. Secondly, a suggestion: I don't know if it's because they ran out of chapters or if their first two books were too fast-paced and ended prematurely, but the first three chapters of this book are very slow-paced. I suggest a faster pace in the beginning to attract readers, then slowing down the pace later. I still quite liked the first two books, even though they were abandoned. 🤭

Let's talk about the flaws. The first dozen or so chapters are mostly fine. But after encountering that invisible monster, the protagonist's character breaks down, and that's where the flaws begin... Joining that so-called state-owned enterprise, his power levels shatter. The protagonist can reconnect his muscle nerves, yet he thinks he can't beat a muscle-enhanced person 😅 If he can reconnect nerves, I don't believe the protagonist can't directly destroy the muscles inside a human body.

I'm starting a thread to solicit abilities, whether it's superpowers or related applications.

My initial impression of this book was very high. After the protagonist gained his abilities, he quickly calmed down and made a plan to develop them. Around chapter 10, the interactions between the protagonist and thugs and murderers revealed his unusual values, which greatly satisfied my expectations of the protagonist—his confidence that everything was under control, his firm goals and will…

The Japanese anime style is completely unsuitable for the Chinese market. To be honest, if it were changed to a European or domestic style, many people would be able to watch it. The Japanese anime style is just unwatchable; it gives off a childish vibe.

Initially, I came for the "extreme development" aspect. However, after reading most of it, I found the protagonist's flashy and overly elaborate development of his abilities quite irritating. Telekinesis, frankly, is just influencing matter with one's mind, right? What's the point of all the fancy stuff? Things like pinpoint explosions... Honestly, these are only useful in specific situations.

Seeing that the basic starting salary for a superhero at Tiangong Company is only 5,000? Is a superhero really worse off than a migrant worker? Is this like joining a beggar's guild? Even though there might be subsidies later, it feels like this amount of money is not very damaging, but extremely humiliating. What if you run into an acquaintance: "Brother, I work as a bricklayer on a construction site, my basic salary is 5,100 a month. Brother, how much is your basic salary as a superhero?" 😁