Jiayou's Fun

Nowadays, novels actually focus on humanism and the power of ordinary people. When structuring the story, I hope to let readers see that this class will also have the opportunity to shine in the higher power structure. Xuehong still regards the lives of ordinary people from villains to righteous people as nothing, which feels too outdated to me. And a novel is only as good as the fighting, and the number of deaths of ordinary people can only become a footnote to describe the grandeur of the war. It will make the story lack the sense of time and float in the sky. Some people must say that we are just here to have fun. Why come to Qidian if we don't want to read cool articles? But even if it is fun, it should not be based on treating the people as trivial. We ourselves are idiots, and we still regard ourselves as idiots. I don't feel happy at all.

The contradictions in the plot look awkward, or very deliberate. The pretense and slap-in-the-face plot of a master's book is not as good as that of a novice. The world is at the end of the world, plus other worlds, and you can survive with just a few beauties around you. It's like a hodgepodge of routines, but the content isn't exciting. This is my feeling. I have heard the name of the great god for a long time. This is the first book I have read. This is my personal evaluation. It does not contain any conflicts of interest. It is just very disappointing.

To be honest, I was confused by this book and couldn't stand it anymore...

It's been more than ten years since I wrote about anything. If you want to write, just write it well. If you don't write it, just end it! In your books, I can no longer see the same feeling as before. There are inexplicable plots, nonsense names, no logical thinking, and chaotic relationships. No matter how you write the protagonists in the past books, at least they still have their own personalities. Now this is nothing... After reading this book, all your works should be left to you to read! I don't have the time or the inclination to read it!

I originally thought it was well written, but it has been disabled now. To be honest, I don't know what it was written from beginning to end, but I saw that the author is a philosophy major, and looking at the subject matter, I am sure that he has gone crazy. As we all know, the Quran, the Bible, and the Diamond Sutra, the major religious beliefs in the world, are all derived from philosophical thoughts and recorded in the form of biographies. So anyway, I read a paragraph and found that I really don't know what it is about. This book is related to Buddha. In fact, everything written is messy. Can't read

I've seen more than a hundred pictures, but I couldn't stand it after reading chapter 192. The protagonist is like a mentally retarded person. His personality collapsed in the early stage, and the enemy forcibly subdued him in the later stage. It's awkward even if I try to write it in a humorous way.

After reading more than 180 chapters, I always feel that the world described by the author is really weird. The frivolous and exaggerated manner in which all the characters act and speak seems to be retarded. There is no literary beauty in the lines of this book, just like a dead fruit tree, with only bare branches and lack of green leaves and plump fruits.

......... I remember the author's masterpiece written many years ago, but now the text is written every day and perfunctory to your loyal readers. Just for the sake of food, I really want to say something to you about refunding money.

Is Zhutou preparing to write the last book? Compared to Wu Song, the Witch God Chronicles is too watery.

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This Bai Changkong is really a professional counterpart in "governing ancient rituals". I firmly believe that he is really a master of ancient rituals! Ancient rituals can continuously create biological miracles in physiology. For example, Emperor Ku's concubine gave birth to a boy 12 months after they were separated from him. She said that the child was extremely talented and was born after staying in his mother's belly for 12 months! This son was Emperor Yao who created the age of saints. Women are like this, and men are no less generous. Yu's wife, Princess Qiao of the Tushan clan, turned into a stone statue (the Yuansou of Wangfu Stone) because she missed her husband. Years later, when Yu returned and cried bitterly, the belly of the stone statue suddenly split open, and a boy rolled out of it. This child was Xia Qi, who created the era of family and world. Look, great people are indeed born extraordinary. In terms of politics, his flawless holiness gave future generations unlimited imagination. For example, after Yao's son Danzhu was named heir, the following story shows that Yao married both of his daughters to Shun, and Danzhu died after Yao abdicated. After Shun abdicated, he "toured the south". The south was plagued by miasma and wild beasts were infested. Was this the holy king's special inspection of wild beasts? Shun soon fell ill and died. His two concubines, Yao's daughters, Gouhuang Nuying, came to attend the funeral. They were so infatuated with Shun that they cried themselves to death. The love of saints is indeed different. The expression of love is not to accompany each other during life, but to follow after death. Yu's father Gun was killed by Shun because he failed to control the floods. Shun appointed Yu to continue to control the floods. Yu was concerned about the common people and would not enter his house three times. After the flood control was successful, the world praised him and everyone admired him. So Shun gave way to him, and he soon died "on the way to the southern tour." Shun's filial piety has been passed down through the ages, and his filial piety touched heaven! His father was called "Gusou" because he was blind; his half-brother Xiang, who had outstanding military talent, was always nailed to the pillar of shame as a selfish younger brother. Every word of this ancient ritual is a subtle statement of great meaning!

It's really too confusing 1 The power system is chaotic, from the emperor, to high-ranking officials to the army to ordinary martial arts schools to ghosts. The power system is extremely chaotic. You can't even see the advantages of any organizational structure. In the Imperial City, you can attack violent law enforcement agencies at will. This is completely flat from top to bottom. In just one day, the protagonist goes from being at the mercy of others to burning down the home of an important minister. This is too childish. 2 The details are confusing. Why the protagonist chose an organization like "Dongchang" was a sudden decision. There is no foreshadowing in the early stages. Although several chapters later I remembered it and explained it. But it's just uncomfortable to read. Including those pets, they have appeared since the first chapter, and it has not yet been explained how they got to the protagonist. There are a lot of details, and it feels like they are scattered here and there. The chaotang does not look like a chaotang. Jianghu does not have the feeling of being a Jianghu. If the protagonist is playing against the landlord Laocai in the county town, you can expect that many things will become clear after changing the map. Directly in Beijing. No solution. 3 The villain is absolutely bad. A villain is sanctimonious, wants to repay kindness with hatred, is ruthless, colludes with evil cults, and has no good children or grandchildren. I am afraid that readers will write all the bad things about one person just like they say good things about him. I don't know how you read this, but I rarely see such pure and simple bad guys.

I got up early in the morning and worked hard to write. Because after eating, my blood sugar will rise and I will feel bad, so I haven't eaten yet, so I made a pot of tea and drank it. I finished two chapters before going to look for food! The picture shows the peppers grown in my own flower bed. They taste quite good and are very enjoyable to use with Yangchun noodles.

Why do Zhutou's novels always focus on cultivating the Tao but not cultivating the mind? I feel that IQ is inversely proportional to Taoism, and everyone is just like a fool.

After seeing the protagonist quickly traveling across the continent to take the former emperor back, I was ready to abandon the book. This book is essentially an invincible flow, but it is too slap-in-the-face and does not meet the expectations of a blood-red master. My thoughts after reading the book are as follows: ——Seeing the divorce (what a cliché---I have passed this book five or six times, and every time after a while, I will leave when I see this point) ——There is really no book to read, so I can't bear to read it (Xuehong has written so many books, let's believe him, and see how to reverse it) ——Oh, it's okay, and Bai Changkong repeatedly jumped (I have read the book for so many years, buy a starting point to read it, support it) ——Seeing the invasion of another world (it's a bit early, after all, the book is called Jiayou, it feels inappropriate to open the universe map so quickly) ——Seeing the monk teaching the skills, the protagonist's realm soared (just force cheating, it's cool, the plot starts to get confusing) ——Seeing the old man from Tianwai sending his disciple into the protagonist's world to have people chop melons and vegetables (what a fucking thing) ——Seeing the protagonist's heart move across the continent to bring his grandfather and the emperor back (fuck, abandon the book)

Brothers, don't take it seriously. I feel unhappy. What are they doing nowadays? I won't tell you if the writing is not good. I don't have a correct outlook on things. I won't let anyone tell me what the fan value is. OK, I'll give you some advice. Then I'll ban you. If this goes on, Qidian will be finished. When Fat Pig stops writing, I will be in vain with Qidian.

The current situation is a mess. These great people can be as smart as a pig at one moment, and as stupid as a pig at another. I feel confused and confused. What is the goal of each household? What's the plan? How do you plan to execute it? I don't understand. The only thing I know is that everyone is competing for luck, and that is where the greatest luck lies: What on earth is the court doing? The capital was massacred by sneaks, the emperor was approached by demons, and the court was controlled by culture and education. With military power in hand, Leshi acts as if nothing has happened and is still quarreling with Wenjiao every day.

The author is currently still hospitalized. Please forgive me and I will resume updating when I feel better.

I hate it so much, I wanted to finish it. It's a pity that Buddha is written like a sect. Is the author a Buddhist? If you broke the precept, why would you lick it like this if you don't believe it? I only watched the early stages and didn't want to watch the later stages at all.

Take a bubble (for personal use)

Lu Yi (xian) ~ Are there so many mythical beasts?

Xue Hong has been feeling unwell for the past few days and is still hospitalized. He will continue to ask for leave and will resume updating when his health improves. We hope for your understanding.

Is this book poisonous or not? Does it have Shen Nong? I just read the fourth chapter and it feels a bit poisonous. The matriarch of a clan is the kind of person who helps outsiders slap her in the face. I am also a bit immune to the divorce breakup trend 🙂 Now I like to see the kind of people who take one step at a time and make a fortune silently in front of others without being sage. The kind of foreshadowing and then the main character coming out to show off has been seen too much and is not novel.

I really can't stand it anymore. What the hell is this written? All the characters are mentally retarded, except for the male protagonist who is so wise and powerful. There are treasures waiting for him wherever he goes, and big bosses waiting to recruit him to join. Continuously opening new maps is irrelevant, procrastinating and boring. If you can't finish it, just stop writing it. I've just scraped together 3 million words of hydrology.

Color! Good books are great! It can be seen from the foreshadowing in the front that there will be a big wave of rhythm after the release. Platinum's experienced writing style points out one by one, from the test board It is recommended to carefully read the foreshadowing word by word, read slowly and calm down After the release, the rhythm takes off directly. The plot turns to conspiracy and the turning point of the world's recovery.

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It's a cool read without brains, but it's not brainless enough. Looking at the painstaking work of Platinum God, some plots are really insulting to the brain. There is quite a feeling of tasteless food and a pity to throw away.

My writing skills are limited, so I tried my best 😜

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