I Work as an Errand in the Underworld

Finished reading. The author is currently writing very well, and the plot of the first dungeon is maintained very well. However, I have been too harsh on the role of the protagonist, and I still haven't adapted to the original world hahaha Keep up the good work 👍

The writing is pretty good. What I like most about this book is the protagonist's decisive and no-nonsense character. The only bad thing is that sometimes some sentences have no subjects and it's a bit confusing to read. Also, the description of the battle could be more detailed and perfect. I hope the author can work hard and insist on finishing this book.

Beihai is a newbie author who is too new to be new. I hope that book friends and friends may have any opinions, and I also hope that everyone can support me!

Are you serious? According to ancient Chinese mythology, ghosts have no right to judge. This is the right of the judge and the king of hell. If you are operating in violation of regulations, the judge may even be put in the pot.

I have read six to seven hundred chapters, and I would like to share my thoughts. I originally wanted to find a supernatural book, but when I couldn't find a good one, I read this one. Although it was an old-fashioned book, it was still pretty good, so I read on. There is no doubt that the protagonist is a righteous, masculine and cold man. There is currently no female protagonist (possibly Meng Ci). There are several copies in it, from the ignorance of Uncle Jiu's world to the hot-blooded confrontation in the world of alien monsters to the behind-the-scenes planning of Ming Dynasty. I have watched the protagonist's growth step by step. I really felt the author's intention when I read the article earlier. The eighteen levels of hell, walking the underworld, and some short stories are quite interesting. However, since the plot of Yun Mengze, it feels a little different. The combat power has been very vague. The fifth realm can fight and win the sixth realm. I wrote a long paragraph to describe the plan of the demon clan, various group portraits, and various foreshadowings. I thought it was some shocking conspiracy and this is what happened next? ? ? At the end, it felt like nothing happened and it was not as interesting as before One more point to complain about. I feel that the author is particularly good at writing about women. A supporting character and passerby who is about to die has dozens or hundreds of words to describe how beautiful she is, and then it stops after a while. The article fully demonstrates that women can hold up half the sky, and half of the important characters are women. , They are all as beautiful as angels, most of them are villains, and there are a lot of villain CPs. There are various descriptions of villain couples messing around, fighting, and you can see the female villain blushing at the villain. Now I see that the ghost mother is coming out to find her man, and the queen is probably going to come out to act as a monster. It really makes me want to watch Yue. I thought there would be less female protagonists, but in the end, there are more

In today's era, there are not many people who can write the Hades Yinsha Ryu carefully. I will give you 1,500 points as an encouragement... Although Yinsha has flaws with the Shinto system, it is difficult to write more than one million words without any support such as recommendations and continue to write the Hades Yinsha Ryu perfectly.

I just read Chapter 18, and I hope the author can adjust the protagonist's IQ. Why would he dare to tell his secrets to someone he has just known for a few days? The key is that the protagonist has no ability at all at this time. Or the author doesn't think the protagonist's ghost identity is a secret? Aren't you afraid of taking advantage of the money and directly robbing or killing the protagonist's belongings? Don't say that Uncle Jiu doesn't know it. Even if he doesn't know it, it's not a secret if the second person knows it. The subject matter is very good, I hope the author will revise it well, otherwise it would be a pity to write a stupid and useless protagonist.

I'm speechless. I've been looking for a chapter that can pick up the beginning, but I haven't found it yet 😅

It's awesome, 1.6 Million words. The out-of-the-circle index is not even 1,000. This is not something ordinary people can do.

How should I put it? It's too confusing. I don't know what type of book the author wants to write. The things in your book are almost a mixture of multiple types. In fact, with your writing style, if you only wrote about one type, the results would definitely be better than now. But you chose to write a little bit of everything, which makes the whole book feel a bit nondescript. Well, my personal feeling is, if you don't like it, don't spray it.

Experience the world and lose blood. You have to work hard and earn no merit. If someone wants a physical examination, just do it. Aren't you afraid that they will dissect you? It's none of your business if the world is destroyed. If you don't have the right feelings, how can you be a good person? How can a good person like this, who takes greater risks and gets smaller returns, be qualified to live?

Let me say a few words. As a book lover who has been following updates, I am very relieved to see that it is recommended for free again. After all, the performance of this book is not very good, so it is quite good that the author has persisted for so long. As for how this book is written, I still have some say in Chasing the Helm. First of all, let me state that the protagonist Li Kui has the three views of a normal human being. He has a clear distinction between good and evil, shows no mercy to the evildoers, and will lend a helping hand to the good ones. At the same time, he also fits the label of Yincai. Growing up slowly from scratch, always sticking to our true heart. What I especially like is that the protagonist never forgets to help him or the people he helped. Yang Chao can often be seen appearing in the later stages. I think it was written with a human touch. PS: Are good people with normal views so easily ridiculed now? 😰

It's pretty good so far, I hope there won't be a female protagonist

The subject matter is good, but after completing the first elementary school task and then writing the trial plot, it felt a bit stiff and I lost my appetite for reading.

Put it in the Xian Xia Jue and the suspense is now drawn, who will vote and who will die?

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I'm about to watch it, so I'd like to ask if there's a female protagonist.

The writing is okay and the subject matter is okay, so why isn't it popular? You were fine in the first few chapters, but things got messy when you started to reminisce. Just write down the reminiscences casually. If you write them down, aren't you just trying to persuade them to quit?

It's a pretty good book, but it's too good at suppressing pig's feet. It's not the normal seventy-two transformations. Normally, they are Tongyou, Convince Qi, Kill Demons, Talisman, Powerful, and Jump Rock. I am not very good at spawning monsters in the last days. I am so drunk due to the influence of evil spirits and yin energy that I even go to the doctor. Brother, you are a professional at catching ghosts.

Just read it. This novel is really unpopular. By the way, author, have you offended anyone? This novel is actually not famous. One million words are already there. The subject matter looks pretty good.

I started a book club. Everyone is welcome to join, chat and discuss the plot! Group number: 211634461

Are you not even allowed to mention ghost words now? Is 404 really powerful?

I read it in one go, the writing is good, 6 monthly passes are given to me, come on!

It's hard to find well-written books of this kind these days. I stumbled upon this book by accident and made a decisive decision when I saw it on the shelves. The story advancement, character description, and plot are all on point. Come on!

The writing is okay. The author should insist on an ending.

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I have basically read the latest chapter. Let me say a few words. The advantages of this book were mentioned in the previous post, so I won't go into them again. The disadvantage is that the author wants to write about the big layout and big plans, but basically he writes about the villain's plans and good layout. The protagonist is only a hindsight and is led by the nose. This makes readers feel that it is not refreshing enough. Second, because of this writing method, there are basically no protagonists in many chapters, and they are all about villains and supporting characters. It can be said that this is a book about group portraits, and many people will not be used to it. Third, the title of the book is "I am a Servant in the Underworld". The first one million words focus on two different worlds, and the next one million words focus on the present world. The content of "The Underworld" is relatively small. In this way, the first few chapters of the book are out of touch with the title, there is too little correlation, and it looks awkward. However, as a new author, this book is still remarkable, and I hope to continue to work hard.

Full subscription + automatic subscription. This book is more in line with my taste, but I don't know why there are so few reviews. I have read Chapter 150 so far, and except for the character transitions which are a bit messy, everything else is good. I don't know what happens in the future. I'll comment after I finish reading it.

Have you waited so long to become a real eunuch?