It Turns Out That I Am the Great Sword Immortal

Just like a running account, there is no bright spot, just like a primary school student's composition

The protagonist has been beaten away, why is it an invincible style?

The title of the book does not match the content. The protagonist is not a sword fairy, or the protagonist is not worthy of a sword fairy. Reading the content of the book, I feel that it is a lot less, invincible but not invincible, aggrieved but not aggrieved, and the structure is too small. Called the Sword Immortal, but he has no eggs

It looks good, the only swordsman in the world, slaying demons and monsters, no heroine, come on! ! ! !

This book is so strange. Call it good, but I still feel weird that I can't stand it. Call it ugly, and I can't find any faults. I can only say that it has no outstanding advantages and no serious shortcomings. But I always feel that I can't stand it. The more I read, the more awkward it becomes. Sometimes I can read novels that are far inferior to this book. But this book feels tasteless, but it is a pity to abandon it. It's weird.

I've read a few similar ones. I always feel that this book is not very good, I like to take the initiative to toss it too much.

Start collecting them, raise them and then slaughter them. Seek refinement

Because he is a monster, can he be forgiven if he steals the sword from the sword village and takes the protagonist's sword by force? Although no one was killed, who knew how much trouble Jianzhuang would suffer because the sword was stolen? Either the protagonist is here, or the sword village is gone, or the peerless sword in the village is gone. Because the person who stole the sword is a monster, can this kind of thing be covered up by acting without scruples? Grab the protagonist's sword and then think that the protagonist is a great swordsman and want to worship him as a disciple? I stole your wife and then I found out that you are stronger than me and I can't beat you, so that's the solution if I become your disciple? Does anyone really like to watch the petty theft and whitewashing scene now? Nine out of ten good books fail because of one or a group of inappropriate female characters, yet the authors enjoy it and remain unrepentant. The character you wrote is so unpleasant that it becomes a poisonous point. Killing it with a sword may even become a pleasant point. But in the end, you insist on whitewashing it. Hey, this person is naive and romantic. She didn't mean it. She just does whatever she wants. She is just a female monster. Please forgive her... Really, whitewashing a person with a bad first impression is a poisonous point in itself nowadays. If you want to write it, you should at least mention it first, such as moving next to the bookstore. A woman, smart and beautiful, appears in front of the protagonist a few times to give readers a better impression first, and then the protagonist discovers what she actually does and confronts her. During the fight, she discovers that the protagonist is a great swordsman and wants to become his disciple. In the next few chapters, we will write more about her taking the initiative to appear in front of the protagonist many times to help and please him, and then the protagonist will either accept him as a disciple or reject him, whichever way he likes. You start off by giving the impression of being a petty thief, and then out of nowhere you want to become a disciple in the middle of a fight. No one knows what kind of teacher you want to be? Still clean up? Still cute? Really outrageous. If the author feels that what I said is wrong, he can delete it, or he can hang it up and let people scold me. I am not good at writing and have no ability to write a book by myself. I feel that after reading too many of this kind of plot, it makes me feel sick and makes me vomit.

The pit of Lei Baozi peeking into the soul has not been filled. If this is used to express the evil book that the protagonist randomly places around, causing Lei Baozi to use it to harm living beings, and then suffer from inner demons in practice, if this plot arrangement is a bit disgusting. Even if you do your best to eliminate evil, people will change, so let it go. But since you know it is an evil book, it should be destroyed. Even if it is for the purpose of gaining knowledge and writing, it should be destroyed immediately after reading it.

Why are they all in the Qi Refining realm. . . Scared to see

No more updates? If not, I will delete it.

When I saw Ping An, I almost thought I was looking at Jian Lai

I hope to write pure martial arts, fantasy and fairy novels. Don't talk nonsense about those messy laws and rules of heaven, and don't distinguish the attributes of the five elements. The five elements in this world cannot represent anything, they can only represent themselves. Apart from them, there are many things that they cannot describe. Which of the five elements are acid and alkali? Did you know? What I hate most is that martial arts novels are divided into five lines, and in the end they evolve into understanding various laws and principles, then they are not martial arts novels. That's science fiction to be exact.

The protagonist can make up a sect for himself, but he claims to be from the Tongtian Sword Sect, and there are four divine swords in the sect!

A small climax began later. In the previous stage of transformation, he was pretending to be invincible. After all, he was still studying swordsmanship. It was impossible to beat all the invincible players in the world as soon as he appeared on the stage. After seeing that he was getting better and better, he was slowly showing his invincibility. There should be no plot in Zishu about the heroine being in love, blushing at every turn, or being infatuated with love. She is studying swordsmanship and enlightenment, and occasionally killing monsters and monsters. It is quite satisfying to watch. It's a good book, and the writing is quite fluent. It's worth reading.

Does anyone recommend a good book?

The writing is of a certain standard and pays attention to details.

The plot of Bai Jiner has been revised, you can take a look again🤝🤝