Qingyun Immortal Clan

The writing is so poor that I have no desire to read it. The details are also written in a mess. The seniority rankings were all arranged before the spiritual root test. Are all the school-age children in a town in the same seniority? Shouldn't we take the spiritual root test before ranking the seniority?

Normally speaking, changing from a snake to a dragon cannot be a perfect qi training, because the bloodline is purified by external objects, and the cultivation level must rise. Purification is a slow process of advancement, and only then can one become a dragon, not a dragon cub. Only then can one achieve qi training perfection.

The family is rich, but not everyone is rich! The country's GDP is so high, how much can you get? A truth! 100,000 foundation building pills, 1,250 yuan per acre of spiritual land, and 10,000 yuan in betrothal gifts! According to this ratio, the normal annual salary of a monk in the Qi refining stage should be 183 yuan! Monthly salary is 15 yuan! As a newbie, 1 yuan is a lot! The first-level magic weapon: 1200, 2400, 4800; the second-level magic weapon is 10 times higher! Monks eat spiritual rice without excretion, so they eat 0.5 Kilograms of spiritual rice every day (equivalent to 15 spiritual stones per month), with a monthly salary of 15 spiritual stones (an annual salary of 12 spiritual stones per acre) It costs 1,000 spiritual stones per acre to open a new field, but 1,250 spiritual stones per acre is needed to purchase mature spiritual fields. 315 acres * 100 spirit stones per year = 31,500 spirit stones, 1 catty of spirit rice and 1 spirit stone 315 acres require 9,150 pounds of grain, 48 people need 8,784 grains, the annual salary of 48 people is 8,784, and the annual deposit is 4,782 spirit stones. 286,920 spirit stones in 60 years - 100,000 foundation building pills = 186,920 10,000 betrothal gifts, 12 people in two generations consume 120,000! The family balance is 66,920. Cultivating a Foundation Establishment Stager in 60 years can completely catch up with the natural death of the last Foundation Establishment Stage Stager! The lifespan of a mortal is generally 80 years, but one in 1,000 mortals can live to be a hundred years old! Very few can live to be 133.33 Years old! Assume that a mortal's life span is X = 80 years! Refining qi will extend your lifespan by half, Y=1.5X=120, mortals are called immortal masters! Building foundation and extending lifespan by half, 1.5Y=180, Qi refining minor cultivator is called a layman! The longevity of Zifu is doubled, 2Y=360, and the low-level monks are called masters! Golden elixir lifespan is doubled, 2Y=720, low-level monks are called real people! The life span of Yuanying is extended three times, 3Y=2160, and he is called the True King! Hua Shen Shou Yuan: 5Y=10800=After a while, he will be called a Heavenly Master! Returning to the Void True Immortal: 12Y=129600=one yuan, called a True Immortal (Including Taiyi True Immortal=True Immortal, Daluo True Immortal=Xuanxian, Hunyuan True Immortal=Celestial Immortal) Hedao Golden Immortal: Longevity (Including Taiyi Golden Immortal, Daluo Golden Immortal, Hunyuan Golden Immortal)

You are welcome to give your name below. The tentative family names are: Chang, Qiu, Qing, Xuan, Tian, ​​Jia, Ying

This writing style is too childish. The author doesn't have an outline. It's like a running account. I write whatever I think of. In addition to constantly entering the secret realm to obtain treasures, there will be no storyline after a few battles. The protagonist's aura is too heavy, and all good things happen 😆

Just so-so! I endured it until I read Chapter 20, but I just couldn't stand it anymore. The writing was average, some of the content was too watery, and the spiritual weapons used during the Qi training period were a bit unfamiliar. The advantage of the male protagonist's rebirth (travelling) was not reflected, making me feel like the male protagonist was like a local native.

And the storage bag was searched by Jin Dan? If you treat your subordinate forces like this, you will wait to be destroyed in the future. Looking at other people's storage bags has become an endless conflict.

This book is well written, and the writing skills are very mature. You can catch up and fatten up. I have been reading Family Cultivation for a few years. The author should be a pseudonym of a certain great god, haha.

After reading a few chapters, I suggested that I get the basic settings right first. I have just started to practice Qi at the first level. How old am I when I start doing quests? This is worse than being a handyman disciple in the sect. Then I started to write the sentences smoothly, but now it looks awkward. It's a waste to keep doing this.

I have helped recommend the book. I hope the author will continue to work hard. In a true sense, it is written as a family series about cultivating immortals.

I didn't want to read the book after seeing Luck, which ruined the whole book. It's okay for me to do it, it's so amazing, what else can I write about?

It's too unreasonable to experience it at the age of ten, at least you need to be an adult! Moreover, the family must rely on foundation-building monks to maintain it. The main task for minors is to improve their cultivation. How to ensure the safety of a kid of how old? How to improve his cultivation through experience?

The structure of the novel is good, it would be better if it were updated sooner.

A member of the Yuanying family was murdered by the Jindan family. Are you really not afraid that if the news leaks out, your entire family will be wiped out? Or just rob and refine your energy.

When I saw the ninth level of foundation building, I couldn't stand it anymore. The force system that was upgraded too frequently was broken. You can write whatever you want. Fighting low and high and fighting low is just as nonsense as bragging.

The subject matter is well chosen, but the writing style is not good. It is like a primary school student writing a narrative, and the subject matter is wasted.

My writing level needs to be improved, my logic is not very high, I'll say goodbye.

There is a fatal flaw in the novels about the Immortal Family, which is why such books are so difficult to succeed: if the Immortal Family does not eat people, suck blood, and does things that violate morality, it will not succeed. It means cannibalism. If such a person appears in the Immortal Cultivation Sect, they can be eliminated as an outcast. If such a person appears in the family, they will be held high, put down gently, or even take the lead in breaking the law and committing crimes. This is the reason why I gave up on several Immortal Cultivation Family novels. ——We read novels, and many of them are for Utopia, not for Utopia. Don't criticize me. We read novels for different purposes, so don't criticize me 🥺

There are a lot of typos and flaws. I feel like I just write whatever comes to my mind. Let's just get over the book shortage. As long as the author is happy, he doesn't have to worry about what we young readers think🤫

Casting two supporting roles Zhu Mingming (brother) 33 years old, building the third floor of the foundation, Lei Linggen. Zhu Mingliang (younger brother), 31 years old, builds one layer of foundation with water and wood spiritual roots. Background: Loose cultivators, two brothers accidentally found a cave of a heretic monk who transformed into gods during their Qi training period, and received the inheritance. After building a foundation, the two brothers practiced outside and passed by the protagonist's family. The younger brother met Lin Qiukui and fell in love at first sight. After divination, the two brothers decided to stay and establish a family, and married and attached themselves to the Lin family. The elder brother is proficient in foreign magic and magic, and the younger brother is proficient in beast control and alchemy.