Still Alive 200 Million Years Ago

You must have a sense of immersion in writing novels. If you treat the world you write as a game, we will naturally treat novels as games. You can read or not read. There is no sense of immersion and no emotion. How to develop as a long-term reader. I was originally looking forward to your book. After all, few people write about the evolution of ancient creatures. The majestic sense of history, curiosity about ancient creatures, curiosity about the ancient environment, curiosity about catastrophes, but I saw that you left the settings of the game intact. Come in, the evolution is the evolution of an entire race, millions of years have passed in an instant, and even the body is not my own. To be honest, I lost interest in an instant. The game can be played like this, but if you dare to write a novel like this, how can the reader feel immersed? It is as if you are watching a game briefing without pictures, and it is not a game you play. Are you interested in reading other people's game briefings?

Will the protagonist evolve into an Eastern dragon or a Western dragon in the future? Or neither?

The first volume is coming to an end, and I would also like to express my thoughts. I am not a professional paleontology expert, so please forgive me for the many mistakes in the book. Many people were dissuaded by group evolution in the first volume. To be honest, I didn't expect this to be a poisonous point when I first wrote it. Although I know it now, I definitely won't change it. Why did I write about group evolution? Because my idea has never been about the struggle history of a lizard in prehistory, but about integrating it into the epic of evolution, dragons and beasts fighting for hegemony, dinosaur dynasty, bird wings fighting for the sky, and fish fins fighting for the sea. The course of hundreds of millions of years of paleontology is so magnificent and shocking that I am not willing to give up any era, but want to have them all. The first volume of Triassic is about accumulation and foreshadowing. It is quite plain and boring. What I want to write about is that the Red Dragon tribe survives, develops, evolves and accumulates in this barren land. Then wait for the Jurassic to explode! Jurassic, Cretaceous, this is what I want to write in the second volume. I named this volume: The Age of Dinosaurs, My Era. The protagonist will lead the Red Dragon tribe to formally declare war on the rulers of this era, competing for hegemony of the sky, fresh water, continents, oceans and other ecological niches. So group evolution is a key point. Only in this way can the protagonist have enough time and enough ethnic groups to compete with dinosaurs, pterosaurs, crocodiles, and ichthyosaurs for ecological niches. Thank you to so many readers for reading this boring first volume of mine. This is the greatest encouragement to me. Thank you!

To be honest, there is really no need to compare Eastern and Western dragons. After all, it is all a matter of personal preference. After all, two different types of dragons have different ideas according to the region. The dragon abroad is said to represent the tyranny and strength of the human heart, while the dragon in our country represents auspiciousness, and the ways of understanding are different. What is there to compare? Personally, I prefer strength. But at the same time, I also feel that the dragon in our country has an elegant and ethereal feeling. In short, it can be said to be handsome.

This is the female version of the protagonist (good guy actually passed the review) 😏

The author is free to write what he wants, but at least I have subscribed, so I am free to comment how I want The section about switching accounts is really baffling The author has never made it clear whether the number and channel can be switched after genocide It looks like the protagonist is stunned. Faced with the risk of annihilation of consciousness, he switched his account Even if he could switch back to the Sun Flame Dragon after extinction, is the protagonist so confident that the Sun Flame Dragon can survive the Jurassic mass extinction? Obviously he was a person with a very sense of crisis before, but this time he just switched his account and went on vacation without even thinking about it? The creativity of this book and the author's professional knowledge are definitely commendable, but its weakness in emotional description was vaguely reflected in the awkward and sensational clips before, and this time it was finally fully exposed I don't care whether the author writes novels to make money, or does science popularization topics out of interest, but as an author, please at least respect your character, at least let him have a complete behavioral logic, instead of being used as a puppet-like tool.

I saw the millipede~ rush into the eye of fire I saw the white clouds~ who wrapped the sea There was star fish~ it separated the land And the huge waves~ from the blue shell I saw the colorful wings~ which dispel the dust and haze While the twin fangs behemoths~ step into the red way This is the old legends~ Creatures against Cataclysm And they are the saviors~ of all living beings Never shall you lose the hope~ and to learn that little chips always light great fires……

Post some fossils or reconstructions of real ancient creatures involved in the novel. (Updating as the novel progresses)

Brother, you cut off the climax, but I accepted it. I waited so long just for the protagonist to evolve into invincible, but ended up not writing it. Isn't this just how Tang Monk arrived at Lingshan in 1981? The Buddha directly sent the USB flash drive to the Tang Dynasty, and the four Tang Monks directly ate and chanted Buddha in Lingshan? What's the point of walking in brocade clothes at night?

This is an amazing component post! There are many kinds of creatures on the earth, with all kinds of magical abilities. Here you can propose your favorite species and components, I will do it first. Gun Shrimp: Quick Shrimp Claws, Lancer Fart Armor: Butt-burning venom injector, Splatoon Electric Eel: Power generation cells, electric shock warrior Scaly Horned Snail: Full body metal Invulnerable, iron canned heavy infantry Green-leafed sea beetle: a photosynthetic animal that can plunder chloroplasts in plants, a true sunlight warrior Mimetic octopus: a mimicry ability that surpasses that of a chameleon, a shadow assassin?

When I was catching up on the early updates, I really felt that the setting was very novel and the plot was interesting. I took the little red dragon from far away to far away, experienced all kinds of amazing adventures, and also had a tragic farewell. It was very comfortable to watch. At that time, I thought that if I kept writing like this, it would be safe for this book to enter the top 300 in the monthly ticket list... It is really a pity that the plot started to fall apart after the Sun Flame Divine Dragon. The author may have thought that the Sun Flame Divine Dragon was too awesome. If the protagonist used this race, he would be killed. No more fun, I can understand it... But for the protagonist, this is unreasonable. "I can use the awesome race, so why should I make trouble for myself?" The protagonist needs a reason to choose the Velociraptor race, but the author doesn't have any explanation here... It's very strange. Weird I continued to read it later, and stopped reading until the enclosure movement. I wanted to wait until there were more words, but what I waited for was a complete book of 680,000 words... I had some premonitions about the ending, because the previous plot was really a bit broken, a lot of it There was no explanation of anything that needed explanation. At that time, I felt that the author's writing experience was not very rich... I really like the setting of this book. There are too many mysteries and too many fantasy about the distant ancient times... What a pity...

I'm speechless. Pig's feet have evolved, and the entire race has evolved. It's even more awesome than Dou Qi turning into a horse. Even the Dou Emperor's bloodline fight can only be defeated. Bye.

This book probably started to collapse from Xunlong. It went astray. The more I wrote, the more things went wrong.

Come on, come on

It's boring. It's not the protagonist, but a nanny. It's just a game. All the protagonist's efforts are just to let others enjoy the benefits, and it's useless. Anyone who has read your novel, wouldn't it be nice if I opened a handful of spores myself?

I'm convinced. Why is it still a velociraptor? I don't want the flying dragon that I spent so many years building. What's going on? Can't we evolve the flying dragon now that there is a superhuman race called the Zerg? Isn't it good to fly to the stars and sea in the future and become a cosmic creature like Ghidorah?

This should be it, sketch lightly sprayed 😅

Good guy, you have to understand that you are writing a novel, not playing a game. You have argued about evolution and all races have evolved in an instant. The protagonist within the race is struggling to survive, and other tribesmen will win. As long as the protagonist works hard, everyone else is just a pendant.

I still don't understand the main plot of this book. I started to see that Goldfinger is the evolution of the race, and thought it was leading the race to evolve. As a result, Little Red Dragon became inexplicably sensational, saying that Long 1 to Long 32 were all brothers. As a result, most of them died. After arriving at the destination, the protagonist seemed to have forgotten the dead dragons, and created a clan of the Thirteen Red Dragons. They were neither fish nor fowl. They were affectionate at one moment and said that the natural world should not be too humane, and they did not hesitate to abandon it when it was time to abandon them. Later, when he evolved into a flying dragon, the race was actually divided into two. The evolved flying dragon did not cooperate with the small red dragon of the same ancestor, and a flying dragon of another race lived with the small red dragon. Later, the small red dragon was exterminated and passed on to the Xunliu Monument. It was so sensational that it was said that the fire was passed down to start a reincarnation. As a result, after one chapter, the news lizard evolved into a news dragon and the small stone tablet seemed to have ceased to exist, and was not mentioned at all. The Little Red Dragon spent so much writing and ink disappearing in such an inexplicable way. The protagonist of Sunfire Shenlong, who had evolved to its peak, was no longer wanted, and changed his account to Velociraptor. What is this writing about? Of the two biological son races, one is invested emotionally, the other is invested in energy evolution, the last one is exterminated, and the other one reaches its peak and the protagonist throws it away before he can experience it. There are also a large number of poison spots, and the inexplicable light ball that can instantly transform creatures into legends. The protagonist silently watches without fighting for it. He talks about ideals overcoming instincts, but is picked up by a little snail before his eyes and evolves into a legendary deep sea horror. The protagonist finally encounters an adventure, but those who get this adventure will be inexplicably cursed by nature, and they will be forced to kill the protagonist. , The cliched classification of pseudo-legend and legend, the whole book has an inexplicable feeling. If I want to say it, it is nondescript. Even the background setting is so nondescript. It is written like science fiction. After a while, fantasy and fantasy things appear, and then it is forced to scientificize this fantasy, giving you a fungus god, and the protagonist is not the protagonist.

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A work with excellent creativity and writing, it is a pity that the author gave up.

I also want to read this type of book, with a grand perspective + biological evolution + earth historical events. It's very interesting, but it's a pity that no one has written it.

I thought of you again when I saw the new prehistoric beast series

The book is good, but the author keeps suppressing the protagonist's growth and I can't stand it.

It has a strong stand-alone feel. If it were written based on games, it might better match the style of this article. The sense of detachment is too strong, making it inconvenient for readers to take in the story. For this kind of subject matter, we really should learn from the "black charcoal" human soul and animal body, blend into the environment, and write about the social interaction of animals in human eyes.

I suddenly thought of you when I saw the novel about strange beasts today. I came back to take a look. Hey, it would be great if I opened a new book. If it opens, call me

When will we publish a new book, or give us an outline so that we can finish it by ourselves?

Blind Jill writes, I feel like I don't have an outline, I always have to start over, it's awesome

Shangxiang Another exotic beast is released