The Periodic Table of Incantations at Hogwarts

The world-building is a blend of Harry Potter and Dragon Raja, incorporating many elements of Eastern magic. The protagonist, Zhang Qi, is a descendant of Zhang Lan, a sorcerer from Longhu Mountain in China, and Vida Rozier (Grindelwald's beautiful sidekick), named Hekmedia. He uses his maternal family name: Hilbert Rozier.

The logic is so chaotic that it's completely unreadable.

In other words, after reading about ten chapters, the writing is really quite messy. The Harry Potter series is a very small world, and the inclusion of a dragon system feels very abrupt. The first three chapters crammed a huge, chaotic web of character relationships into the reader's head, which genuinely confused me.

I looked at over a dozen pages and still didn't understand a thing. I can't figure out what you're writing. And it's all fragmented.

Is this a fanfic about dragons and Harry Potter? The theme is very novel, keep it up!

The premise is good, but the writing is so messy I don't even know if you're writing a female-centric or male-centric story.

Flat chest, white hair... Is this enough?

Comrades, can we be a little more lively? I don't care if I get scolded, I just want to see if anyone knows...

This is the first time I've seen an author so fierce, directly calling the police to confront the trolls. That's amazing. By the way, when the author says to criticize freely, he means to criticize the author for the sake of criticism, not to insult for the sake of insult. I'm also puzzled. You only have so few followers, so why are people posting videos of you everywhere?

I've read a few chapters and the writing style seems okay, but it's just so disorganized.