The Periodic Table of Incantations at Hogwarts

The world view of hp and dragons is stitched together, and there are many oriental magic settings The protagonist Zhang Qi's parents are Heike Media, the descendant of the Chinese Dragon Tiger Mountain wizard Zhang Lan and Vida Rozier (Grindelwald's beautiful follower). His surname is the maternal family name: Hilbert Rozier. The protagonist has a ruthless character and is not a virgin at all. He likes firearms and close combat. The golden finger is the awakening of the system and the spirit of speech. The Slytherin route currently has an anti-pure-blood tendency. One grade lower than Harry's protagonist group, and there is currently no sign of joining the group Single heroine, Astoria, who is in the same grade as the protagonist. My writing in the early days was a bit fragmented, but it improved a lot after I entered school. Currently, the world view is still developing, and there are hints that Voldemort may not be the final boss. The reason is that neither Voldemort nor Dumbledore can defeat several old monsters in the East.

The logic is so confusing that it's completely impossible to read.

That is to say, after reading about ten chapters, the writing is really messy. . The Harry Potter series is a very small world, and it seems very abrupt when it is mixed with a dragon system. The first three golden chapters directly thrust a series of confusing character relationship lines into the reader's mind, which really confused me. The Eastern magic system in Rowling's original work itself is a bug. Without a systematic and reasonable structure, it would be impossible to round it out. In short, what I see in this book is just a huge, awesome Eastern magical world that is crammed into it in a straightforward manner, and the sense of alienation is obvious. Another point is that I don't understand why the character Bai Suzhen was brought in. It's not that too many infinite literary elements will only make it difficult for the author to write and make it difficult for readers to read. If the author wants to combine Western fantasy and Eastern legend, with all due respect, judging from the dozen or so chapters I have read, it is a failure. I came here from the favorability book, and I can only say that neither this book nor the Supreme Mage book met my expectations.

After reading more than a dozen of them, I didn't understand them at all. I couldn't understand what you were writing. Still intermittently

Are you a fan of Dragons and Harry Potter? The subject matter is very novel. Come on!

The subject matter is good, but the writing is so messy that I don't even know whether you are writing about a female protagonist or a male protagonist

Flat chest, white hair... Is this enough?

Comrades, would you like to be more active? It's okay to scold, I think there is no one in Kangkang. . .

This is the first time I've seen an author be so fierce and call the police to slap him. I'm amazed. By the way, the author's casual scolding is to criticize the author, to criticize for the sake of criticism, not to insult for the sake of insult. I'm also confused, you only have so few fans, why do people still post videos everywhere.

After reading a few chapters, I feel like the writing is okay but very messy.