The Tokyo Literary Giant

Except for passing the protagonist's manuscript at the beginning, I didn't see the female editor helping the protagonist in any way. She only talked big words and kept promising to recommend and win awards for the protagonist. In the end, none of the promises were fulfilled. The farmer was lucky enough to dig out the gold mine with a hoe. Although he knew that he did not have the strength to hold the gold mine, he still overestimated his ability and wanted to take the gold mine as his own.

The protagonist keeps talking about repaying kindness and repaying kindness. First, what she earns is the money from the review. Second, even if you repay the favor, why do you have the idea that repaying the favor = not leaving the magazine? Does she take herself too seriously and thinks that without you, she will be unemployed? Still you don't take yourself seriously and feel that you have no independent personality? Third, it's like licking a dog, forcing the love for emotional drama, which is speechless.

It feels like I have become a reader of "New Novel" and I am looking forward to the next chapter

Chapter 90 is in progress, I'm sorry if I don't complain 1. There are too many conspiracies and tricks, and it's a bit frustrating to watch 2. The so-called repayment of gratitude is too outrageous. Just because the female editor Asano reviewed the manuscript, I decided that she was a great benefactor and kept emphasizing it. The protagonist can wait until the manuscript is rejected before submitting, which is the first; the protagonist can write other works and submit manuscripts, which is the second; Asano has already reaped the benefits, status, salary and bonus, etc., Which is the third. In the end, the protagonist still felt that it was not enough, so how about kneeling down to say hello every day? 3. Self-published here, extremely poisonous. Why don't you go to the bank to check the loan limit first? Secondly, if you don't have enough money, then print less books. It turns out that the protagonist's brain circuit is completely different. Why do you think that the owner of someone else's publishing house will agree to your request? You signed the contract yourself, paid the money, and they are taking care of you, okay? You would not go to the senior who admires you for help because you are afraid of favors, but instead look to a stranger?! Xiu'er! That's right, if someone lends you money, then he is a great benefactor, and even his life is not enough!

After thinking about it, I decided to express my feelings. I read all kinds of books, but recently I happened to want to read the mystery genre, so I clicked in. At first it was actually acceptable to me, including the heroine, it was actually okay. But it goes all the way to the publishing house of suspect x. It can be seen that the author wants to make the novel closer to reality, including the specially opened post, which shows that he has prepared a lot. But being reasonable and true doesn't mean it looks good. I think the people who originally attracted people to this book were those who wanted to see a good book written (copied) and then shock the readers. The author has ideas and wants to add something on top of this, and it's okay to improve the characters and plot, but he can't put the cart before the horse. Your book is called "Tokyo Literary Master", not "My Days at a Publishing House in Tokyo". Your dense settings, camps, dilemmas, and conspiracies came too early. It's like eating a hot pot meal. You've just served the bottom of the pot (text copy), but suddenly the store manager comes out and tells you the history of the hot pot restaurant and how difficult it is to open a hot pot restaurant. I came in rushing to eat hot pot. You wait until I finish the hot pot. At least you wait until I finish simmering the beef and mutton hairy tripe and yellow-throated shrimp. After eating it in my stomach, it would be better to have this one. That's it. I think I've read more than 30 chapters now. I don't know what to do. I'll decide whether to leave or stay after reading it.

To be honest, the current connection between the protagonist and Asano is too far-fetched and too weak. The so-called kindness should not be an excuse to prevent the protagonist from pursuing a high-return platform. As for repayment, the protagonist has many ways to repay Asano after becoming a well-known writer.

I have read Chapter 112 and am very tired. Why does the author have to write about conspiracies and conspiracies? Do you think this can be used as a conflict for people to read? Baffling! Although the writing is quite dry, I admire the author's reading of mystery novels and the plot is well summarized. I was simply put off by the silly plot. Even if you only write about the protagonist copying books → excellent grades + plot summary and interaction with the heroine, if you write this routine repeatedly, I can continue to read it with relish. Poor rhythm control. It is recommended that the author read other manuscripts to see what is good writing.

It's okay for the author to use the female editor as a tool to advance the plot, but by making this character unlikable, you're putting the cart before the horse. I won't say whether this editor is kind to the protagonist or not. Shouldn't the point be to grow quickly and repay the favor? And I really don't think the protagonist repays his kindness. I have seen that the protagonist has paid a lot for this editor. He is tied to this magazine and even if others try hard to poach him, he will not do it. But what did this editor gain? I saw that in the end, the editor got nothing and was transferred. There is really a problem with the author's writing style. You have to repay the favor. There are many ways. There are many ways at present. You can make conditions with other magazines to bring him over, or you can ask the editor to quit and be his agent. There are many ways. I just write the stupidest method, which is harmful to myself and others.

Is there a female protagonist? It really makes no sense to have a Japanese background without a harem.

69 Withdrawal, just copy the text of the book, copy the book, and actually want to create your own, eat some peanuts, don't just drink. After reading the comments, there are so many people saying that the protagonist nt always talks about repaying a favor. I also think that repaying a favor is about repaying a favor, not being a bully and a lowly person.