My Wife Is the Boss of the First Episode

The author's writing style is okay, and the emotions are quite delicate, but it is too slow in some places. One dream has more than ten chapters. And overall, I don't feel the main plot. The freshness in the front is okay, but the emotional scenes in the back are a bit watered down. However, this book is positioned as a daily book, and it is okay for those who like to watch the daily life of the male and female protagonists.

Thinking about it calmly, Yun Qian doesn't feel like a person to me, but more like a mechanized program. There are no human emotions or desires, and there are no good, evil, likes and dislikes inherent in human nature. There is only a fixed program of liking Xu Changan. So after the time is unlimited, no one can stand a period of programmed liking, and may even be driven crazy. A perfect life is because of the imperfections of life.

It feels weird. It felt good at first, but as I watched later, it gave me the feeling of deformity or grotesque love...

Looking at the title, I thought it was still a traditional routine, and I thought I would change my taste after reading too many heavy-duty novels recently, but I didn't expect it to be this type 😰😰 Is this a doting article? Doting each other? Watching it for the first time is very novel and interesting. The front is very sweet. It's so sweet that it makes you tired. It's a bit too strong and uncomfortable for me. It's very common in daily life. Or is the theme of this kind of novel that two people get tired of being together? Would it be more appropriate to place this book on a female channel?

To be honest, this book is very comfortable to read. Maybe it's because the recommendation is not in place, and the title is not very attractive. At least I can't understand the meaning of the week in it, but the content is really interesting.

The writing style is very delicate, the pace is really slow, slow, slow, and it's becoming more and more lily-like, it's really too much 🤔

After reading a few chapters, I felt like 🤔 I felt lonely after reading it. I felt sleepy after reading it 🥱

There is one saying that this book is very moist, not the moistness of a wealthy layman, but the kind of moistness like drizzle. The story is very gentle, very ordinary, but very delicate, and the description is very detailed. There is Xianxia on the label, but there is another saying that the world view is consistent with Xianxia. The main attraction is the ordinary life of the protagonist and Yun Qian. There are very few scenes of fighting and killing. It is suitable for old bookworms who have a change of taste.

The author's writing style is very good, and his writing style feels very gentle. There are also a lot of stories about couples, but I didn't feel tired of it, it was so interesting. Tell me what you are dissatisfied with. First of all, the setting that the male protagonist came from time travel was not used well. Likewise, the Tiandao system has become a decoration. In addition, the male protagonist is too humble. As a person who was brought up by the female protagonist since childhood, he can occasionally show his affection to the female protagonist. In addition, there is too little promotion of the overall world concept, and there is no tense atmosphere. If this continues, she will become a Mary Sue.

There's too much nonsense, it's still fresh at first, but it gets boring and tiring after repeating it all the time

The plot is a bit boring, and it doesn't mean it has to be about fighting or anything. It is the plot that makes people feel that this is not a fairy novel... Furthermore, the author repeatedly emphasizes that the male and female protagonists are like mother and son together, which is really too deliberate. A mature boy of about 16 years old will not make people think he is childish (not to mention that a pig's feet can last for two generations). The author has always asked the male protagonist to call the female protagonist "Miss". Not to mention what this title would look like between ancient couples, you, a modern man who traveled through the past, would call his wife "Miss"...

This attack, this narrative, this logic, is the current level 1 so scary? 😰

After reading Chapter 54, let me tell you my own opinions. 1: Problem with the main plot line; from an emotional point of view, the male and female protagonists are already married. The male protagonist is here again, the heroine is the boss, and they treat each other like a guest after marriage. As a result, I think there are too many repetitions in the description of the couple's life. It is really not suitable for the current atmosphere of online literature, and it is really uncomfortable to read. From the practice line, Chapter 50 has just started. . . Well, I regard it as practice to make sugar better. 2: Theme problem; the theme is love. From my perspective as a reader, the author may want to create an atmosphere of an old married couple in a foreign land. Unfortunately, the difference in understanding between the male protagonist and the female protagonist makes me feel that their thoughts are disconnected. I can't feel their love, and it gives me a sense of alienation, which is very uncomfortable. I just said a few words and left the rest of it unread. I hope the author will work hard and make progress together.

The heroine, a real fool, spends her daily life with the hero, a fool who doesn't know whether to pretend to be a fool or not.

Advantages: plain and healing, the author describes the details very well, and it is very comfortable to read Disadvantages: too bland, a book should have its own establishing paragraphs, climaxes, accidents, etc., But I have read half of it, and except for the first hundred chapters which are interesting, the rest are too dull, and there is no plot that can retain people. The summary is that it is suitable for transition when there is no book to read, but it is not suitable for chasing to the end in one go. If you eat too much candy, you will get tired of it. Good-looking, but unbearable.

I just saw an interesting discussion on Zhihu The female author was shocked that a male channel could write about harems without involving pornography, and the male author was shocked that a female channel could write about hegemony without involving politics.

Good looking

I can't figure out why it is said that a wife is doing harm to herself by pleasing her husband? Why can't the wife do what the husband likes? It looks so awkward!

Wandering between the harem and the single female protagonist, the male protagonist is surrounded by a bunch of women. If she is a woman, she will like the male protagonist. There is no difference between the female protagonist's strength and her background.

Some people think the plot is bland and boring... Maybe it's because everyone has their own taste for it, but the more I read this book, the more I couldn't put it down. I like the author's gentle and delicate writing style... I like this plain and warm tone. The description and characterization of the heroine and various female supporting characters make people feel the beauty of women on the other side. The author also has his own unique and profound understanding of human nature and emotions. In fact, the plot is not bad, maybe the rhythm is a bit weak, which weakens the plot to a certain extent, but I just like this style and tone😏

What I wrote before is very good, I don't need to say more. Looking at you from the back, you are so anxious that the girl is asking you to please her. Which man can bear it? The male protagonist is still moaning and groaning, as if he is impotent. Okay, you said you don't want to torment other girls, then I'm asking, do the two of them do it every day? What if I can't recover after a few days? If you don't want to torment other girls, just cut off the lower part, so that you won't torment other girls.

I remember a buddy from college said, if you are not interested in girls, don't be nice to them for no reason. On the one hand, you should be gentle and gentle, but on the other hand, all kinds of behaviors will show that I am not interested in you. Such people are really cheap 🔨

I was shocked when I read this book two years ago. I think this book will have a very good shaping effect on my view of love. Today, two years later, I can't find the same feelings as before. It's probably because I'm sick.

What's wrong... Why...

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Author, are you still alive? I really like this book and I haven't found one with the same style as yours yet. I believe you will make money if you continue writing. This is the first time I've seen this style of yours.