Daddy Paladin

The book ended well, but it didn't go on for too long, so the original good impression was soured. The writing style and plot setting make people feel comfortable. The setting of the eight virtues is either the Virgin Virtues or a plug-in, and the actual existence is not very strong. In the later stage, the power system did not collapse. The highest level mentioned at the beginning is used throughout the whole article, and there is no situation where the highest level is as numerous as a dog. At the beginning, the little loli was very cute when I was writing the story. In the middle and later stages, the level of the story changed into urban costumes and slaps in the face, and the level was just right. You won't get tired of reading it, but there are some minor problems. The first one is that I doubt that the author knows how to write cool articles. Although the book is about invincible and can be read in any way, you can also add some ideas of villains, regrets and punishments other than death to increase the level of fun. Instead of dying all at once, I feel uncomfortable. Especially in the Gu family, that person bullies your wife's best friend and bullies your wife, and bullies your wife and bullies your father-in-law and mother-in-law. How do you deal with such a person by disappearing from the world? The author thinks about it for himself, is that cool? There are also some small places that can obviously be written in a more passionate way, but to arouse readers' enthusiasm, you just waste the opportunity by dealing with them indifferently. On the contrary, some places that require a thunderous blow are written in a long and verbose way, which seems not smooth enough, and the places that should be quite enjoyable appear to be much duller. Secondly, the method of showing the protagonist's power is too simple. When encountering some trivial things, just talk about it and leave others unable to bear it. The protagonist will be different and very relaxed. Once or twice, I felt that the main character was so awesome, but more often than not, I felt embarrassed. There was a situation where I said, stop talking about it, why don't you do it again, it was so uncomfortable.

Some suggestions, in this context of great changes, semi-official organizations cannot be so naughty. The largest armed force organization in a country is always the army. No matter whether awakening is based on physical fitness or random, no organization can have more people than the army. Under this premise, there will only be one official organization. If other extraordinary people are law-abiding, then hello, me, hello, everyone. If you dare to be a monster, you will definitely be killed. I hope that the author's style will be bigger, stop fighting in the nest all the time, and go to Huo Huo Wai Guo Ren as soon as possible. After all, this bookstore has a lot to write about in terms of its setting.

I came here to see my dad's cute baby, but I think most of the writing is about Paladin skills, artifacts, materials, slaps in the face, and food abuse... The cute baby's writing is very casual, and there are very few

Please leave a brief comment after seeing the latest one: The article about Dad is considered to be well written, and those trolls who are not even high-V should be ignored. Let me talk about some common problems with daddy stories: First, the transfer of affection is a bit too rigid, whether it is a daughter to her father or a father to her daughter. However, through the DNA test, the daughter gradually felt her father's love. This is well written, but the transfer of affection between the father and his daughter is too rigid. Maybe it is because I have never been a father, so I can't understand it. The second thing is that the mother disappears forever. Although I know this is for the sake of the plot later, it becomes boring if I write too many of this routine. Moreover, once this kind of daddy story describes a family of three living happily together, then it can only write about daily life, and the book is almost finished. The third thing is that the protagonist is often invincible but cannot be ignored when encountering problems. However, this book explains it with the virtues of chivalry. I think this is very good and creative. The fourth one is that the protagonist is obviously coming back with all kinds of invincibility, but the villain always pops up in the later stage and can show off his skills. In this regard, the author's current description of the Earth's Will to Dimension is much better than those that can only be "passed down from ancient times." Someone in the comment area said that the protagonist was an invader before. Although there is nothing to say about the jungle, but it is a little bit different when it comes to the history of our nation. After all, the butt determines the head, so everyone should not delve into it when watching it In addition, the author's description of your pet is very good, and it is very interesting. This is a bonus. It makes me want to get a dog hahaha.

I just want to ask the author why this book, which started well, is getting worse and worse. Touch your conscience. Obviously not as good as Ming Liang's baby girl. Author, where is your sincerity! 😡😭🤭

When I saw the title of this novel, I immediately thought of the legend of the Holy Knight. Book friends all called him "Milk Rider Lolita"

I've read more than sixty chapters and I think it's okay. It would have been better if there were less staff-making plots.

The author has buried a lot of holes! This is the time for discounted close-ups!

It's been a long time since I've found a book that I read in one go. It has novel themes and ideas, and the plot is also great. I hope it will be updated more often. This ranking of 100 does not reflect the advantages of this book at all. All monthly recommendations are given to the author, come on.

The first fully completed book I'm still waiting for Tai Ke to grow up, waiting for Zuo Yi to become a god, and I finished the book in the blink of an eye. It's a pretty good ending.

It's really good, but there are too few chapters. Come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

It would be nice if it could be updated sooner, whet your appetite

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

Strongly request for more updates! ! ! Strongly request for more updates! ! ! Strongly request for more updates! ! !

How many are there? It's too damn good to have less of it! Little and watery.

Continue to support monthly tickets, whether to continue adding finesse?

I started reading this book from the new book issue, when there were less than 100 people investing (it made a lot of money 😍), and then I followed it calmly. Along the way, Baoer finally got to see his mother! Excited, get 1,000 points first, do you dare to move?

To be more precise, at least two monthly passes are required every month.

Will his daughter live and die with the hellhound? Is this setting wrong?

After reading novels for more than ten years, this is the most correct novel I have seen. I hope the author takes care of his body first. The most precious disposable item is life. Putting character before profit is also the main theme of this book. Updates are slow, but I will continue to support it. I hope that there is a magic that can lead people to do good, continue to brainwash them, or continue to restrain evil behaviors.

The biggest shortcoming of this book is its name. He should never have named it "Papa Paladin". No, he was discovered by Nai Qi and poisoned. I look forward to the outcome of this book, it won't be too miserable. In addition, fellow compatriots from the "Cultivation Chat Group" would like it.

Thank you everyone🤭

I accidentally became the helmsman 😰

Come on, I'll give you two monthly passes.

After reading the preface, the author has a bad waist, and I also have waist prolapse. I recommend glycosaminochondroitin. I bought it from the United States and it has good results. However, there are many brands, so check out more! Moubao has There is also Lunanfibrate (compound chlorzoxazone tablets) which has good effects on skeletal muscle injury (pain relief). I recommend it!

Monthly tickets are given. Is it okay to add more essence?

The author who is adding updates is waiting for this update from you every day. I will give you three recommendation votes and a lot of them. The writing is sincere, not pretentious, not brainless, very awesome, plain and gentle warmth is real, come on! !

For the protagonist of this book, the author first gives him invincible power, and then binds him with the 8 virtues. Then arrange for him to leave a mark on the world. Then give him some benefits and let him save the world in various ways. Not a Holy Mother, but very Holy Mother. He is also the kind of person who will be hindered and slapped in the face in whatever he does. Give all kinds of benefits to a stranger you just met. It's the kind of thing where everything is pushed out unconditionally. After pushing it, I said with emotion that I use less of everything I have. Also, do all the little things yourself. For example, when he goes to a place selling medicine, he gets slapped in the face and goes back. Then someone else adds 100 million and he goes back again. Then he said that the first order he made gave others some benefits. I have to say that the author's brain circuit is very positive. This kind of medicine is obviously most effective if it is given directly to the Supervision and Supervision Bureau. The price given by someone who recognizes the goods must be very high. He just wanted to find those ordinary people who were about to die, and then let them play jungle. Also, I thought this book about nanny should have a single female protagonist. But after reading almost 200 chapters, the heroine didn't even go out. What's more, there were many beauties and many ambiguous plots. Although the author wrote the protagonist without such thoughts, he also wrote that the women were very ambiguous towards the protagonist. Then the child is like a pendant and has no routine. He always writes that he wants to live a normal life when he returns to the main world. If you want to live a normal life, don't you just treat yourself as an ordinary person? Why bother with those? This is where I admire the author's imagination. He first infinitely magnified the protagonist's idea of ​​promotion. In fact, this is not written by a nanny, it is too forced. He always leaves his daughter at home or at that martial arts gym, or with the mother who is the master of the martial arts gym. And then it is the same every day. After half the time, someone will come looking for trouble, and someone will come for help. I don't even need to read it at this point. There will definitely be a lot of trouble later, and the world will always be looking for him to save the world. However, the situation became more and more serious, and the hell monarch who died with him came to this world again. There will be another final battle to end it. My final comment is that I don't want to spend money to see this kind of thing.