One Piece Template System

In my day, if the beauty queen Robina saw these, I would want to vomit. Even if you eat too much delicious food, it won't taste good.

After joining the Navy, I was too free-spirited. Nothing like the Navy. Might as well become a bounty hunter myself. Anyway, domineering is considered a bad street in the new world.

It is recommended to use a period when a period should be used at the end of the sentence. It is very uncomfortable to see exclamation marks throughout the sentence 😓

I won't talk about the bugs in this book. After all, readers who write books these days can pick them out. But what I dislike the most is the calculation units given by the author to explain the protagonist's combat power, which are completely imaginary. In the manga Pirates, there was originally no contrast in combat power in the early stages, but later on there was a contrast in domineering power, but it was also very vague. The most reliable one is the navy's military rank benchmark. As a result, the author directly compared Bounty and the combat power in other comics, which was outrageous. How many pirates are fused to get a bounty? Chopper's bounty is 100 Baileys. According to what you say, can Chopper kill just anyone? Is Chopper's true combat power weaker than that of pirates with less than 100 million? It is also outrageous to enter the Navy directly as a rear admiral. Then why did Virgo lurk in the Navy for fifteen years?

Are such rubbish books distributed? ? ?

It's so awkward to write =͟͟͞͞(꒪⌓꒪*)

The writing is hard to describe, and the plot is quite childish.

The sand crocodile said in front of the navy that he wanted to take over Pluto, Niubi, he didn't want to live anymore

What the hell is Sword Light Sword Pressure Sword Realm? Swordsman, iron swordsman, swordsman, great swordsman

I'll give you a template and you can slowly develop your abilities yourself. It's okay. If you just give Ulquiorra 10%, you won't be able to beat the Yonko directly.

The average height of the characters in One Piece is three meters, and those below 2 meters are all younger brothers 😅

Um! After reading 50 chapters, this book can only be said to be that the author is too immature, or takes it too much for granted. The plot is very blunt, without any logic, and it is written by force! Let's say the protagonist gets on Peach Rabbit's ship and becomes a navy, and can he still fight Moria on the way? ? Where's the logic? What's more, if you enter the Navy, you will become a rear admiral? ? ? How about playing? Are you kidding me? Isn't it true that in the era of great conscription, you don't have to start from scratch when you join the navy? ? Directly to Major General? Cool writing also requires some logic and brains! Write it hard! Farewell!

The sea, you are all water, too watery, use a move, melt the progress, lead to Naruto, Shadow and Fairy Tail, analyze it one by one, compare this with that, it will be like this in one chapter, and then analyze it again in the next few chapters, it is very watery

No wonder I jumped into the street, it was so frustrating to join in the middle

I remember this book was written many years ago, right? I've read a little before, but now it's only a few hundred thousand words long.

Don't worry about that zz, I think it's very good, the writing style is okay, much better than the authors of the same period

Aren't Skylanders' wings decorations?

Just when everyone thought he wouldn't survive, he turned into a scorching hot weapon. Rising into the sky

Why are they all exclamation marks? It looks very funny, right?

I just don't understand. Just killing a few people can still be discovered. I feel that the surveillance of pirates is too awesome.

I think this book would still be good if I had my hair last year.

What the heck is a lieutenant general. This position can lead to a fleet, or the base commander of a base. Most of the lieutenant generals have fixed chassis, and it is not like Garp and Crane who can wander around. You don't have the qualifications either. It's not time for the big conscription. It's actually just right to wait until he has fought a war before being promoted to lieutenant general. During the two-year gap period, I can write the plot of the lieutenant general. If you can't be a general, there's no point in being inappropriate.

Who's on the cover? 🙂