Hunt, Then Eat

Write less about internal strife and conspiracies. There are three things that attracted me to this book: 1. Goldfinger is not too buggy, and the rhythm is well controlled. 2. The perspective of the protagonist and the entry point chosen by the author into the world of monster hunting are very good and not obtrusive. 3. It's the monster hunt itself. On the contrary, the black plot added to enrich the plot really challenged my resistance over and over again. I really feel that the plot is thin, so I can use my imagination to think about how to reasonably join the ecological chain and the customs of various places. Have a question by the way? Since the appearance of the woman in black, the protagonist has relied on inexplicable explosions to survive several crises. As a result, I have lost the reference point for the protagonist's combat power. Isn't this really a breakdown in combat power?

Is this TM even half-written with the main character changed? According to your author, what determines who a person is is his memory. However, after writing hundreds of chapters, a past life memory was revived, and then the behavior, thoughts, and logic changed drastically, and the interpersonal relationships from the previous life were inherited. Then why are you hiding your ears and stealing from the past life? It would be better if you just changed the name of the previous life back. If your previous life had the same personality as the protagonist, why not? Do you think there is any similarity between Guta and Neva? Can you be more straightforward and say that the protagonist we have watched for hundreds of chapters has died and been taken away from him? Let's change to a new and awesome protagonist and continue reading.

There's nothing wrong with the writing, but the characters and plot are too raw. If the author wants to make fun of himself, pretend I didn't say it

I always feel that pig's feet don't look like a time traveler, but like an aborigine

To be honest, basically 80% of the place in the monster hunting background is undeveloped, with humans only occupying a small part, and the ancient dragon thing is really strong. In the world background, the black dragon directly destroyed an ancient country. There is really no use in playing conspiracy tricks in this background. Maybe one day an ancient dragon will pass by and everyone will die.

Everything else was pretty good, until the main character was cut into a large size, which meant he changed the main character, and it cracked

The protagonist's character and mental maturity described in this way, don't pretend to be an adult soul wearer, you might as well say he is a minor soul wearer who loves to play games.

The tachi in MH generally refers to the big dachi (as shown below) I very much hope that the author can solve the eternal mystery of [how the MH's tachi was pulled out] in this book 🤓

It feels like the protagonist's explosion was too much, and his combat power collapsed. When he entered the mid-term strength, he directly climbed to the late stage, close to invincibility. Furthermore, the portrayal of the male protagonist lacks continuity. The impression of the ancient pagoda created in the first five to six hundred chapters is suddenly replaced by Neva, which is blunt.

The adventure has to be about plotting, and you won't pursue it even if you die. Don't write about it if you don't have experience in this area. It has to be about the conflict between the kingdom and the union. Did you get to the point? Please be careful. I'm really speechless.