I Began Cultivating as a Mortal

I still can't understand that Dou Di is the same as transforming into a god. Dou Emperor can easily manifest tens of thousands to hundreds of thousands of feet of Dharma, with explosive combat power. How can a transformed god have such expressive power? Don't tell me that Dou Po Space is weak. I don't see the protagonist's destructive power increasing. Don't tell me that you are afraid of the protagonist being invincible. There are only a few realms above Dou Di. I don't even think about how many realms there are for mortals to become immortals. At least there are more than Dou Di, regardless of the upper limit?         ，？ If the author is not good at writing and is afraid of running out of words, then why would he choose to fight against the sky in the second world?         ，，， I am not a troll. A troll would not write so much seriously. I hope this book will get better and better as it gets written.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading chapters 53 to 55, so I forced myself to be enlightened. It is obvious that there is the inheritance of the alchemy of the top boss, the knowledge of the old monster who transforms into gods, a system, a mall, and a portable system cave. The protagonist who was still in the early stage of foundation building almost died because he couldn't get training resources and gave birth to inner demons. There is a time and space gate that has been broken (you can go back and forth at will), but I have been struggling with it, not daring to go, and before I went, I looked like I was going to die. If you don't dare to go, just practice hard. What's there to worry about? You are only at the early stage of foundation building, and Nangong Wan of Jindan is by your side. You can't advance to Nascent Soul yet? If you are afraid of death and don't dare to go out, why don't you take the Heaven-Building Pill even though you have it? Pretentious? I don't know what the author wants to express. Rubbish. Chapter 52 is readable from the front, but unsightly from the back.

It was okay at first, but the main character was Ye Liangchen, the former top four sex king. Now it's very embarrassing, isn't it? After that, when I started to cooperate with Han Lao Mo, I gradually stretched my hips. The description of Han Lao Mo was not at all accurate. With Han Lao Mo's temperament, if you told the secret of the vial, it would be great if Han Li didn't secretly kill you. He also cooperated with you, and then acted like he was the leader. I can't stand it anymore when I see Nangong Wan being accepted as someone's favorite. Abandon it, there is no well-written Mortal fanfic, I'd better go back and review Mortal 😒

Others accept spiritual pets, the protagonist accepts people's pets

The writing is passable, but the plot is a little bit toxic, mainly because the protagonist has a problem with his character and IQ! He didn't dare to seize the Heavenly Bottle when he needed the elixir, but instead went to a showdown with Han Li. As a result, he gave Han Li some secret formulas of peerless skills, and they worked together to make elixirs. They thought that Han Li had become his little brother, and wanted to take them with him to run away, but he broke the tracking mark and ran away. I was prostituted for free for some secret formulas of peerless martial arts. The reason was: "The host will be forced to become a demon if he has insufficient luck and kills the lucky protagonist. Please choose carefully!" He needed Yao Lao's alchemy skills and went to deceive Xiao Yan. As a result, he changed from getting Xiao Yan's ring, to accepting handwriting, to accepting disciples, giving away martial arts equipment, and giving peerless immortal cultivation techniques...

In the first world, the author may not have seen Dou Po. In Dou Po, no matter the performance or positioning, the Dou Emperor kills any Nascent Soul among mortals who are cultivating immortals. The Warcraft Lion King makes several mountains explode with a roar. The Dou Ling two-headed snake can destroy half of the city. The four-star Dou Emperor Xiao Yan destroys the fire lotus and wipes out an area of 7853 square meters. Kilometers [Three Mysteries of Heavenly Fire Transformation into Seven Stars], look at the mortals, transform into gods, barely hundreds of square kilometers, well, although the four-star Dou Huang Xiao Yan is the benchmark for the seven-star Dou Zong, Hai Bodong's performance can kill any Nascent Soul, this is not a matter of stacking data among mortals

The main character's hang-ups would be enough for any normal person, but the main character's behavior is like a baby bird waiting for food. I want more, I want more, this performance is so fucking incompetent.

I don't know why, but I always feel like the main character is written in a petty style.

It's too open and not worth seeing! ! The name of the key protagonist makes it difficult to get involved

It's so disgusting. Where does it say that Han Li is the reincarnation of the Taoist master in The Mortal Cultivation of Immortality? Please read more of The Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. It's not that Han Li is wretched and he has died countless times. You, a time traveler, are afraid of Han Li. It's funny.