I'm a Landlord in a Mysterious Apartment

The quality of the first three chapters is good enough, but I personally don't like the setting of the Night Watch. That's it, 18 D-levels. Plus the protagonist wants to go home and joins the guojia department, to be honest it's very fast. If it becomes popular, it is almost certain that settings will be added later. (Departing from the main line, branching out, exploring the map, looking for things behind the apartment, and things behind the residents.) If there will be these things after it becomes popular, remember to insert an eye. By then, I will probably have forgotten this book. The ability of the pen, if there is no special setting later, the protagonist will be invincible within a certain range. So, I still don't quite understand what the Night Watchman does when setting it up. What does he care about the protagonist? It also found the protagonist among countless strange things, which will definitely be explained later. But what was the point then? According to this, there are countless weird worlds, the night watchman is really busy, and he accidentally finds the protagonist. It is so powerful that it is invincible. Stop talking, the Night Watchman is too strong, wuwuwu, forget about 10,000 weirds with one punch. There are too many weird things. Just in this living area, how many living people are left in the entire country. Gang Jing: That's why I found the protagonist. The Night Watchmen can still come out and even hang out in this area. Stop talking, they are too strong, woo woo woo, one punch can cause 1,000,000 weird ones. ———— Normal report: With this kind of department, if you let them take charge, they will continue to negotiate. Can't this be left to the later stage? And the protagonist was about to leave at that time, so he was qualified to be on an equal footing with this kind of thing. And personally, I can dig out the weird existence in every apartment. You can write this part for a long time. And in the early and mid-term, let's explore the disadvantages behind level D first? (In terms of writing alone, if we explore these again in the middle and later stages, wouldn't it be purely ex-personnel?) When you have time, go hammer down D-level and below and accomplish something. Now I can sense that some of them are D-level, and the first 20 days have gone in vain. Shouldn't this article be considered traditional and weird? Write it slowly as you did in the introduction, wouldn't it be nice to have a bit of horror in it. The early chapters went by so fast, and in the middle stages, there was nothing missing. After that, we will attract many more residents. There are levels of existence in the apartment from low to high. This setting is not shameful. What is confusing is that a postman was hired. After the residents took action, the line was completely disconnected. According to the author's writing, after a wave of operations, the night watchman entered, no, what about the residents? ? Does that mean the residents paid the fee for free? ? Have all the residents become recyclable garbage? You mean the residents didn't help the protagonist? Some of the weird ones have worked so hard, and the protagonist looks very naive in comparison. Since they are all residents with weird tools, it would be hard to stop them if they lose their human touch. Directly to all the ultimate tool men of the Night Watch, go home early, why do you care so much. But none of these are possible. In the mid-term, the protagonist will inevitably be moved by these night watchmen, and be so moved. Stop talking, pen, work for me! Reader: A masterpiece, a masterpiece, it must be a masterpiece! Some: suspenseful novels, you don't have to read them. Some: Haha, xxxxx Dissatisfied: You are so awesome, why don't you write a book. Personal: See clearly that it is not a discussion, it is a pure book review, it is a pure opinion, and it is a suggestion. After Shennong's test book is completed, there is a high probability that there will be people and plots like this in the future.

Overall, it's very good and worth reading. As for the confusion, I didn't see it. Maybe it's because I'm not good enough 🤔. I'm looking forward to the next book! 😡

It's really well written It's really, really, really, really a pity Looking forward to the next book

It's really beautiful. I've rarely seen such beautiful books in the past two years. Come on! I've been chasing it!

It's really good-looking, but not enough. I hope the author can update more 😆😆😆😆

It's a great read, but this writing doesn't look like a new writer's. Could it be some father-in-law's vest?

Embarrassing Cat

There is nothing to say about the writing style. Every character in the novel has a distinct personality. This kind of novel seems to be the most enjoyable, and it is not comparable to those novice novels with a thousand faces.

You should also pay attention to logic when writing supernatural novels. After reading Chapter 40, I feel that according to the world described by the author, there is no possibility for ordinary people to survive. Ghosts can appear anytime and anywhere. The strength of the night watchman is not very strong. The other party casually made a "woman tree" and killed people on a large scale. How can there be a foothold for ordinary people in this kind of world background.

I don't know who is a master or not. I only know that this book is very beautiful and attractive. The current starting point is all rubbish books and plagiarism. There are very few books with new themes. This one is very well written. Alas.

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I don't know if it's my imagination. I feel like the protagonist's character is gradually getting darker. I've even begun to have the idea of ​​killing him if he doesn't like me.

Is there a possibility that the author is just writing a diary? As for why the eunuch is, it's simply because he can't write anymore

The writing is very good, and I can look forward to it becoming a high-quality book.

Not bad, not bad, I feel like I'm going to be hot!

I thought this was a morally corrupt protagonist, but I didn't expect this to be a positive novel. The protagonist is upright, brave, kind, dedicated, and has great love and a boundless mind. It was beyond my expectations!

I saw a question mark on my face. First of all, the plot deliberately and forcefully belittles Pig's trotters' intelligence. From the beginning to the end, foreigners have been assassinating Pig's trotters and Pig's trotters' companions. Then Pig's trotters didn't notice it even once, and they didn't even take precautions. Your family was assassinated eight times a day, and you didn't have any defense at all? Too deliberate, and then there is the problem of the strength of the pig's trotters. The strength of the pig's trotters is designed to be very strong but has great limitations. When realized, it is very weak. In order to forcefully pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, the pig's trotters have been forced to reduce their intelligence. The villain is even shaped like RZ, which is disgusting, but not evil. It can be said that a good card is played to a pulp.

Where did this person go? Don't let me know your size.

Oh haha, another book to feed to death

I think the writing is very good. It's strange. Does writing a novel have to be considered OK by a master?

I couldn't stand the situation of being wiped out by the group, so I ran away See you again by fate

Very well written, keep it up! ! Followed 😌

The author was careful when writing the book, not to be like the Tokyo Urban Legends book that was sealed. Although it has been released now, it was forced to be completed in the first place.

Not bad (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

Very nice! As someone who has been reading for 15 years, this book is very suitable for me! Come on, author, don't be discouraged! I believe you will get better and better!

It's "self" not "self".