From the Moment When Time Stops, Travel Across the Heavens

As soon as I looked at the beginning, I found that the author almost used the vulgar opening that was commonly used when Zhutianliu just started to rise. It's so disgusting. When I gave a love lunch to my tenth girlfriend, I found that she was hugged by the company boss and went out together. She was urged to pay the rent by the greasy landlady who had a tendency to sexually harass. The protagonist is an orphan who paid for school through a loan and worked part-time. What does the author want to express with this beginning? This bunch of elements mixed together made me feel the breath of a greasy rich man, but I didn't feel that the protagonist was out of the mud and untainted. I only saw cynicism and drifting with the tide. It won't work to win sympathy, because there are still many people who have not even touched a girl's hand for several years after graduating from college. The main character is already his tenth, what can make people sympathize with. The author has not inherited the advantages of the development of online articles for so many years, it is all dross.

Invincible flow can be written without any excitement, but it is also a show. Unlimited time travel is still such a lov who has to do everything by himself. Isn't it great to be able to lead people to time travel and play Legion to conquer him 🤫

Thanks to the author, you basically wrote everything I wanted to do. I hope you will continue to work hard💪

I originally wanted to read your book. But the name of the protagonist is too confusing. After viewing more than 10 pictures, I really can't stand it anymore.

Come on, author, if you don't have money, you can only deduct words 🤤

I can give up the book after reading Chapter 25, and I can tolerate the previous running stories, but I can't accept Chapter 25 when I directly reveal my secret and take my daughter away from the world. This is only a few worlds...

Learning martial arts is a bit delayed. It would be better to just go to Modern and pick up a big Dan.

I didn't know that so many people didn't like Ip Man. The reason why I wrote about Ip Man was because I happened to be bored and watched Ip Man 2 that day! So I just wrote it! If you don't like it, you can skip it! It doesn't matter anyway!

Ye Qin's writing is good, I like it, I hope the author will stick to it, and the recommendation votes will be given every day

I have read more than 20 chapters, how can I say, self-help article? There is a kind of brainstem that lacks virtue and beauty, and the power system is inexplicable. I have gained telekinesis and then went to practice internal skills... I was very confused and ran away.

I always feel something is wrong when I read the title. It's the same thing when I look at the table of contents.

Guys, if you have any worlds you want to go to, please leave a message in the comment area. Once I get past this stage, I will be researching it. The premise is that the force value is not too high, and the pig's feet are afraid of death!

If you have superpowers, go and learn Wing Chun. I mean, there is someone chasing after the protagonist with a knife. After five chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Why is it so urgent? The real world is safe and fine. Can't you develop your abilities slowly? If you really want to quickly find a safe middle-low world to survive, go and learn Wing Chun. It's really comparable to the Wing Chun Superman next door.

Is it true that the protagonist is a loser who has already gone to Dragon Ball but still returns to low martial arts to become a disciple and becomes a famous queen to help with planning? ?

This beginning is so disgusting. The protagonist is so poor and has had 10 girlfriends. How can someone who works and takes loans to go to school fall in love every day? Are your 10 girlfriends crazy? If you would find such a boyfriend, the first one might not be the one, but what about the later ones?

The male protagonist is firmly controlled by an inferiority complex. He would rather be a cuckold than find a rich woman. He has no shit skills and only knows how to lick, but he still feels that he is a man. Without plug-ins, it probably doesn't matter how many babies you have.

I casually watched it and found that most of the dialogue was the protagonist's narcissistic dialogue deep in his heart. They all described how handsome and graceful the protagonist was. The description of fighting the enemy was summarized in one sentence. For example, he used some magical power to catch a certain enemy, then drained his inner strength and broke his neck, and it was over! That's it?

Dear readers, if you find that the preface of some chapters does not match the follower! Sorry for the trouble! That must be part of it blocked!

Awesome, you have become an immortal and you go to practice martial arts and worship a mortal as your teacher. After that, anyone can overwhelm the protagonist and fight. If you don't want to improve your strength, you will just do it in low martial arts. Blessed are those who like to eat shit

If you have telepathy, why don't you go to Ip Man World? Several tons of telekinesis did not knock out Ip Man💩It means he did it cleanly

The protagonist said that he had been in seclusion for two years, but it turned out that he had been in seclusion for four years, and his key strength had regressed. What kind of garbage is this?

The girl who had never seen chili peppers before and was hit by chili peppers for the first time actually exclaimed "It's so spicy!" She was so embarrassed that she even picked her toes.

Even Duan Yu slept with his mother, and even forced him to sleep with him. There is really no one else. There must be a bottom line when accepting a harem. A gentleman is lustful but not lewd, romantic but not obscene, passionate but not sentimental.

The first chapter is so damn toxic, can any readers who can stand it comment?

Haha, they all have super powers, and they can travel through time and learn Chinese martial arts, right? ? ? ? Stupid?

If I were to go to a high-end world with a good reputation, I would explode at the beginning. Isn't it good to guarantee immortality? Then start wandering, such as pure Journey to the West to find Laojun, the Lord of the World to find Laojun, Coiling Dragon, Star Transformation, etc. Wouldn't it be better to just give it a try?

The sudden erection scared me

A real erotic novel, it was very good 10 years ago or more than 10 years ago. After all, I thought it was good when I was delivering food in the world, but now, or after 2018, this kind of novel still appears, it is just a big mess. After reading the comments, it is true that there are poisonous points all over the place and the plot is nonsense.

The writing skills are very good, fluent, and worth reading. If there was no harem, it would probably retain more readers. For example, Tian Boguang is a scumbag and kills well, but from another perspective, the protagonist is not a scumbag.