My Sparkseed Battleship

Good guy, the author is too diligent. He just finished the book and published it the next day. Even the donkeys in the production team didn't dare to do that 😰

I haven't read this book yet, but one of the characteristics of the author's book is that the setting has been cut down by 90%, and the golden finger has been cut down by 99%. It is probably a masterpiece!

If it were a more far-sighted protagonist, or even a more down-to-earth protagonist, he would already be a god. As a result, the protagonist has to waste resources like crazy and risk his own life to snatch a bunch of things back. Forget about grabbing things. The key is that the things he snatched back are not put to good use. After a second glance, the author treats them as background and throws them into some corner. . . As a result, I only read the one hundred and forty chapter and became more and more frustrated. . .

I read the author's book a long time ago, and here I read the comment section again. I have a general understanding of this book. The setting is first-rate, the imagination is very good, the writing is average, the plot is thin, and the cheating is very, very big, but it always seems to be ineffective, and it makes people feel frustrated In summary, it is Personally, it's not bad (I'm half a setting party) So someone has put forward their opinions a long time ago, and the author really pretended not to hear them. I can only say that the author is very determined, but if this does not improve, it can only be said to be very rigid (maybe this kind of cheat + reverse suppression is easy to write?)

I really like your setting, but your biggest problem is that it's too greedy and cumbersome. Sometimes it's better to be simple and don't want to get all the good things. Also, the story is too monotonous and has a linear structure. Look at the supporting characters. It's too easy for one person to perform a one-man show. To be honest, your writing power is really not enough.

I can still watch it in the first time, and the setting is good, but why does it start to feed 💩 in the second world, forcing the reader's IQ to the ground and rubbing it. . . I suggest you change it. What does it mean for me to betray myself? When I actually saw this paragraph, I wondered if the author had changed someone?

I used to accept girls, but now I just become eunuchs and give girls away to others.

The setting is interesting, but the writing is a lot worse, and the content direction is not right.

A useless talent, actually at the Earth level? Are you cheating, or are you trying to overpower the protagonist? Speaking of cheating, dual talents are useless? Just for a name that you never had? If you want to suppress the protagonist, you can find any excuse to hide it! As for returning dual talents, returning to Earth level? He even described the level difference so hugely! Disgusting people! !

Good guy, Fire Battleship, my battleship can be upgraded