Arad: I Just Want to Lie Flat

This is the best-restored novel among dnf novels Full of memories, no major poisonous points

I don't understand. You're living in a game. What's the use of picking up girls? You don't have that function anymore.

No one? The writing is pretty good, keep it up＾0＾~

I went to the game bar to post, I hope it won't sink 🙂🙂

The author probably wanted to write about a mean person, but ended up writing a story about being a mean person. No matter how you say it, he is a master. How can he add it with a smile when being teased everywhere? Even if he is teased by a woman, I can't understand how passers-by can be teased as well. How can such a protagonist have any sense of empathy? Also, the protagonist is somewhat famous, and he is also a big shot in the eyes of passers-by. It's outrageous that he can be looked down upon.

Let me make a suggestion. It will be boring for the protagonist to always play the role of Gunslinger. I suggest that the protagonist have a DNF role.

The bad thing is that the system is intelligent and can deduct points at will... It's not bad for the protagonist sharpshooter to switch to roaming at the beginning. After all, everyone has their own preferences. If I could play this kind of ar game or travel to another world, I would prefer to choose a male paladin.

I don't know if the author has read the book review yet, so I'll give you my own opinion. 1. The protagonist's profession is not good. Dungeon and Ghost Swordsman is no joke. When someone comes in and sees that the protagonist is an eel, they immediately click ❌. 2. The positioning is not clear. It is said to be a purely online game. The protagonist is stuck in the game. It is said to be an alien game. The protagonist has no interaction with the NPCs in the game. 3. The main plot is unclear. The protagonist is like a dandelion, floating everywhere without a clear goal. 4. The pretense is not good enough. The protagonist has obviously done so many awesome things, but it doesn't feel satisfying. This is a problem with the author's writing skills. Obviously it is a very good book. The author has a good beginning, but there is no good main line. It would be great to make returning to reality the first goal at the beginning. Add an exchange option for the plug-in, and how much fame can be returned to the real world. In this way, the protagonist has to keep gaining fame for this goal, that is, pretending to compare. In this way, there is a goal, pretending to compare, and it will be more fun. Roaming is not impossible, but it is really not as popular as Ghost Swordsman. The audience for fan fiction is not large to begin with. If you choose a profession that is not popular, not many people will read it.

The biggest flaw of this book is that there is a system. The most important thing is that the system is intelligent and can also deduct the host's reputation. It is extremely poisonous. 90% Of people are persuaded to quit by this.

The writing is okay, but the setting is a bit weird? Online games? Can it be realistic to make a Douluo 😜