Secret Keeper Program

It's pretty but it's too little.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out of the blue, I felt amazing, the whole theme and technique. But the plot behind it feels a bit too compact, as if there is a lot to explain but it stops mid-sentence. The development speed of the world background cannot keep up with the progress of the plot, and the descriptions of characters and scenes are detailed but also sloppy. For example, if a person has a scar on his face, the audience will first have an impression - is this person's character surly? Do you usually get lost in thought? Do you speak calmly and powerfully, or do you speak impatiently? Do you touch her from time to time in normal times? After some background of the story unfolds, the audience will understand the original intention of his actions. It just feels like a sense of separation. It's okay to read it in one breath, but if you stop reading it again, it will be somewhat difficult to maintain. It didn't make a deep impression on people, but I felt a little moved. Some humble opinions. ——Chen Wuqing

If you keep it up, it will no doubt be the fairy grass The text in the first two chapters is a little over-sculpted, but it blends into one after that. I wonder if the author has been a keeper before, so he has developed this kind of description skills and rhythm control.

This is the level of writing writers. I'm so overwhelmed by those little white writings out there, like Douluo and Gambit xxx. Anyway, I don't read those things. I was digging for gold and finally found one that at least has good writing.

The Hound of the Divine Bureau

Edgar Waikolo

It can be seen that the author is writing seriously, but there are too many unnecessary descriptions. It feels like a middle school student trying to write a little bit about everything. After reading the first dozen pictures, almost every character needs a paragraph or even a few paragraphs of physical description. In fact, unimportant characters can be summarized in a few sentences. The characteristics and positioning, and the protagonist's aura seems to be too high, or the author does not have very rich social experience. The protagonist is an ordinary person who has been victimized. In the previous article, the protagonist feels that things are too coincidental, but later he finds out the truth inexplicably? Uh, a little sloppy. Not only did the official people completely believe it from the beginning, but they also responded with praise. The 😥 setting, which looked really embarrassing, is quite good. There is "big room for improvement" in terms of writing skills.

To be honest, the author saw you start writing in high school. Now in your junior year, you have only written more than 200 chapters. I can only say, keep going.

Ed

Personally, I feel it's much better than Lord of Mysteries I can't stand that book at all.

I have read 12 chapters of this book. So far, there is no clown-like exaggeration that is common in fantasy areas. Instead, it has traditional fantasy secret reasoning. I personally feel that it is very good. Blind exaggeration will only make people disgusted. On the contrary, this classic reasoning style is more interesting. I look forward to the author's future stories. Come on

What is the author's size? I feel like the author is starting to get better at it. I feel like he doesn't look like a newcomer when it comes to handling details.

The official design has blond hair, green eyes, and the armor of a silver knight. Isn't the image just like that of Mao Wang (don't hit me 😏 Picture source: Old Ford

Miss Knight

It's OK to write, but it's a huge failure if it can't be updated stably.

What happened to me to read this novel that only updates one chapter every half month?

Charlotte, the nun of the Green Church, the Blue Butterfly of the Divine Bureau

If the first chapter gave me an amazing feeling, the first three short stories are really unsatisfactory in comparison. The reasoning of the protagonist in the first story is completely untenable. It is even more inexplicable that Arthur gave his stone to the protagonist in his dream. The previous article did not explain whether he can remain conscious in his dream. He wakes up and knows that the protagonist needs stones, and there is no intention to patch it up in the following chapters... The style of the second story has undergone a huge change, from the pain caused by the more realistic social transformation to the Japanese relaxed animation style. Although the story itself is fine, it is a bit awkward to read. In short, I sincerely suggest that the author make some modifications to the previous article, and hope that this book will get better and better.

I've read dozens of chapters, and overall it's pretty good, but the details are too poor compared to the plot (for example, the protagonist's savior has just died, and the protagonist plays with coins to pretend to be cheating? In the detective agency, a commission given by someone else is sent directly and then they say they are afraid of sorry for the boss?)

There are too many coincidences. I happened to run into a carriage and was rescued when I ran away. I happened to encounter an incident when I randomly picked a restaurant. I happened to bump into my sister when I entered it. I happened to bump into the rescuer when I took the picture into my dream. Although there were many obvious foreshadowings before and after, it seemed too compact and too anxious. Forget who told it, in a good story, coincidences will definitely appear in key places. This is the difference between the story and reality, but the story cannot be all coincidences.

Damn, it was the first time I signed the contract after seeing hundreds of chapters. I was confused when I opened the bookshelf and found that I had to pull it all the way to the shelf before putting it on the shelf 😭😭

It's been too long. Can you still finish it? The first time I gave up was Dances with Wolves. The second time I couldn't remember the previous plot. I gave up after reading the previous one. Have you opened a new account?

Grapevine turret, you are really bad😡😭

Did it break after persisting for so long?

After persisting for so long, it's finally over😭

Is anyone else reading this book?