The Pinnacle of Mastery

First of all, I have been reading books at Qidian for ten years, and I have watched different genres of novels from Qidian become popular step by step. The first book I read was Law of the Devil, and then I read Dou Po, Douluo, Immortal Ni, Reincarnation of Thieves, Coiling Dragon, Star Transformation, Swallowing the Starry Sky, and all of Tomato's novels. The ones that impressed me most were the unique Sword Dao Sovereign, Squid's Arcane God's Throne, and later Confucianism and Taoism's Supreme Sage (these authors were at that time) None of them are great gods, and they don't have their own fans. The novels rely entirely on their own settings to attract readers. There is my favorite Gu Zhenren... Basically I have read all the famous novels in recent years, and even if I haven't read them, I have heard of them (for example, I haven't read any of Chen Dong's novels, but I basically know what the content is, and I don't want to read any plots about abusing the protagonist, so I don't read his articles). There are also hot articles in the past two years, The Black Technology System of the Academic Master, Qin Li, The Spy Shadow, Fox in the Forbidden Zone, Global Martial Arts, Tribulation of All Races, Lord of Mysteries, Super Mechanic, Reincarnation Paradise, House of Horror, Becoming a Richest Man from the Game, Shao Song, Full-time Artist... There are many more examples. In short, my personal reading hobbies are very broad. I read basically every category including science fiction, games, entertainment, history, sports, fantasy, fairy tales, horror, and two-dimensional horror. The only thing I don't read is business articles about rebirth and starting a company. So I think I have a good grasp of the popular trends in Qidian. I also know very well what types of articles most readers like to read, and what is popular and what is toxic. When I first read your Demon King System, I liked it very much. It was also the first LOL e-sports article I read. After that, I read many similar articles, but none of them were as good as this one. Including looking at the top of the canyon later, it is not as good as the Demon King system. I have finished reading Demon King System and Top of the Canyon. I only watched part of it and stopped reading because I couldn't stand it anymore. My love for the Demon King System has always made me have a certain fondness for you, the author. Seeing you stumbling and groping for transformation, I really can't help but want to say - Personally, I think the biggest problem why you failed is not transformation. It is not that there are no other authors trying new genres like you. Squid is a typical example. Tomato's novels often switched to different channels back then, and Eagle changed directly from urban to fantasy, so changing genres is not the reason for failure. The biggest reason for failure is that your understanding of Qidian Shuangwen is still from many years ago, and you are completely unable to distinguish between what is popular and what is poisonous. I have not read this book. When I saw the introduction to the novel, I expected that my grades would not be good, because I thought you were not good at writing this type of essay. Unexpectedly, I accidentally clicked in after a while, and it turned out to be a eunuch. The reason why I don't think you can write exciting articles other than e-sports is mainly because I have read three of your books. The first one is the urban novel Contract with the Devil. I accidentally clicked on that book because the setting is still relatively new. There are not too many poisonous points in that book. In my opinion, many of them were only written ten years ago. The popular pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot, with various poisonous points that make people speechless, makes people doubt that the author has no Internet connection, but I happened to read that book. On the one hand, the character of the protagonist is more likable and interesting. I think this is your advantage. You are very good at creating likable protagonists. On the other hand, the e-sports part is well written. ——As the e-sports section accounts for a very small proportion of urban articles, I think it is the most exciting part. At that time, I had not seen the Demon King system, I had not read any LOL articles, and I had never even played League of Legends in real life. In other words, this game was completely unfamiliar to me. It's like watching the virtual game Glory in Ace Master. I'm in a state where I don't have any cognition. But when I read your novel, I was able to immerse myself in it. Watching the protagonist control a hero that I didn't know at all, using skills that I didn't understand at all, and competing against e-sports players that I didn't know at all. It was actually very passionate and exciting. ——At that time, I thought: This author should write about e-sports! Probably a long time later, I accidentally clicked on the Demon King system, and unexpectedly discovered that this was the author I had read before. I found out that he actually wrote about e-sports, so I couldn't help but read it, and then I couldn't get out. The Demon King system is probably because it has a prototype in reality. In addition to e-sports, the creation of supporting characters and daily plots are actually quite interesting. I originally thought that the author had made progress and no longer wrote those poisonous points that made people vomit blood. But when I got to the top of the canyon, I found that the e-sports part was the best. The daily plot was a mess, especially the parents who were really super poisonous (probably it was popular during the time when losing money to become the richest man, so the author followed the trend and set up such parents, but you must know that following the trend must also be adapted to local conditions. The protagonist himself does not want to succeed but is... It's interesting to see other people succeed in backstabbing. The protagonist wants to succeed in front, but his parents don't want him to succeed. He backstabs in the back, and the protagonist knows nothing about it. This is not interesting at all.) Teammates also began to become very tool-like, and then a female teammate came inexplicably. I haven't watched it since then, and I have a premonition that the author is going to keep poisoning. ——At this time, I have realized that the author is still the same author who is good at writing about e-sports, but very bad at writing other content. There are a lot of inexplicable poisonous points that really make people vomit blood, and the pretentious and slap-in-the-face content is extremely cliched. As a reader who has read three of your books, I have to suggest here that whether you go back to writing about e-sports or continue to transform, the most important thing is to grasp the poisonous and refreshing points of today's online writing. It is recommended that during the break, you read all the most popular cool articles today, see how other authors write cool articles, and guess which plots you feel happy when you read them, and which plots you find unpleasant. I think only in this way can this article be successful. To give you the simplest example, Eagle's Global Martial Arts is said to be a cool novel for novices, but there are so many cool novels for novices, why is this one the most popular? Many people say that it is due to the large number of updates, but not all readers follow it when it is updated. For example, I read it after it is finished. So what does it matter if she updates a lot or not when serializing? No matter how many updates there are, after reading this book, I think it's pretty good. I won't talk about the bad points in the early stage. I will only talk about the places and cool points that I think are different from other novice novels. The simplest example is that everyone has a sister. But many novels like to set up the sister who has an affair with the brother, or the genius sister and the useless brother, or the sister who idolizes the brother without brains, or the drag sister whose sister is sick and needs the brother to work hard to earn money to treat the disease... This is really poisonous. How many years ago is this old routine? The sister in this book is very real, with advantages and disadvantages, and the kind of pure family love between them. Let's talk about the heroine. Some authors don't know how to write heroines and insist on writing all kinds of weird and bloody plots. They often provoke the rich second generation because of the heroine. Or the heroine's family is very rich and the protagonist works hard for the heroine. Or the heroine is just a drag that slows down the progress of the protagonist. It is better to write a background heroine who does not hinder the protagonist. Let's talk about other female characters. The female characters in many novels have the same stereotypes, such as Bingshan Royal Sister, Tsundere Lolita, and Obedient and Cute Girl, which are very false. The female characters in the world feel more real to me, and not all of them are related to the protagonist. Many of them are even very tomboyish, with their own personalities and goals. In my opinion, his novels don't have any novel plots. Invasion from another world and saving the world are already very cliche settings, but I can understand them. Because many of the slap-in-the-face plots are not cliched and in line with my current taste. Old bottles put new wine. The best among them is the character design, and the different characters are all wonderful, so this is not a reason for the popularity that can be explained by a large number of updates. Thinking about it carefully has its merits. Especially the cool places are particularly cool. And that's what you often don't have the means to do. You always mistake the poisonous points for the fun points. In the final analysis, you don't know the readers' preferences and you can't grasp what kind of fun plot the readers like best. ——The reason why I took Global High Martial Arts as an example has no other meaning, because it is a very typical novel written by a novice, and it was not finished long ago, and it is not out of date yet. Personally, I think it's the kind of author you can learn from. If I take a novel like Lord of Mysteries as an example, the difficulty of learning is too high for you, and Lord of Mysteries is not a cool text. As for the cool articles like Dou Po in the past, I can only say that times have changed. If I write according to that routine, it is already toxic. In short, it is recommended that authors should not rush to open a new book, but first learn how to write the most popular novels, grasp what readers like to read, and then open a new book to get twice the result with half the effort. Of course, it would be better if the author is willing to write e-sports articles again. After all, I still like to read the author's e-sports articles.

Shit, I was so angry that I installed an author assistant. If someone says that to me again, I will open the book directly. Don't mess with me. I'm only a freshman in high school. I haven't taken the college entrance examination yet. I don't want to write an online article, and I don't want to have a second dream in order to slap my face.

To be honest, it's a pity that this is the first time I'm following a book, but the author can't keep going. I give him a thumbs up for the Golden Wheel every day. I wonder if he will remember it in the future. I understand Xigua's feelings very well. The pressure in society is definitely not comparable to the pressure we had when we were young. As a full-time author with a senior and a junior, Xigua will not and cannot stubbornly stick to his dream. Transformation can be regarded as a small dream, but reality is reality. I think reaching the peak is very good, but the first order is indeed too low for Xigua. Understandable. But it's a good story, isn't it? What Xigua wanted to express and what he didn't express completely made this story a good story, but was it just that the story was born at the wrong time? I don't think so. Maybe it's because only some people can understand this story. I was just browsing the book circle and said that Xigua was a bad joke. They all said that Dafeng was a good person, but I felt that driving too much was difficult to reconcile, and there was really no way. Since Xigua broke his wrist early, it means that his mind has been made up. In addition to supporting him and waiting for him to come up with a better work that is more suitable for the public, we can also use less insults and more suggestions. Don't you think it is a different kind of achievement for an author to make a novel better and better under his own suggestions? After all, a watermelon is just a watermelon, not a north-south melon, right? So I would like to ask everyone to leave their comments about this novel or the direction of future novels. I believe Xigua will notice it.

Still want to connect with League of Legends characters?

Originally, Xigua opened a new book and planned to put it on the bookshelf to have dozens of chapters. But today I clicked on it and found that the character I wanted appeared in the character list, which was Yu Yuyu 😃. It clicked. It was so fast. I finished reading it immediately. So far, the description is quite in line with my character setting. I won't say it anymore. It's quite a surprise. Today is my birthday. I'm very happy. Just think of it as Xigua's birthday gift to me. 🎁 I gave you the only remaining ticket this month. I will definitely book all of them 🤓

As I write this, I have already rewarded 1,000 points. Although I don't like it now and I may not watch it again in the future, I paid. Don't tell me I'm capable of writing it myself. I paid and I am qualified to comment. The author himself said, let any questions be asked. You said it yourself. You are married now, and you don't want to generate energy for love, then you must first understand that you want this novel that at least everyone can accept. Otherwise, if you want to write your own ideas, just persist, and maybe more people will like your current ideas. However, I have been reading books for so long. Whether they are from hawks, newspaper sellers, or elbows, they all have one characteristic in writing books, which is that they are enjoyable. Life is already very hard, and no one wants to read a novel when the protagonist feels uncomfortable. You can write about how poor the protagonist is, and you can write about how difficult it was for the protagonist before. However, you can't write it so that your readers will follow the protagonist and suffer again. I have read more than a dozen chapters. Let's break down how much the protagonist suffered. First, his legs were interrupted. Then the victim showed no regrets. I think within this short period of time, the protagonist was able to take revenge. Then he met a female teacher. Okay, he barely started learning martial arts. Let's ignore the question of licking or not. It finally started to grow, and then he met a master, a master who could levitate. As you said before, warriors are generally not short of money, but this one was a master who could levitate. I think there is no shortage of money. If he is a liar, then aren't you also an abuser? Okay, let's take a step back and say that this so-called master is not a liar. He is really a good person, but I don't understand your motivation for writing about this mother buying fruit to treat her son's illness. Is it to write about the mother's love for her son? Show maternal love? The character doesn't know that the protagonist's leg is healed, doesn't the reader know? In order to express a mother's love, you gave up the only money in the family. What's the point? Then there is what you said in a single chapter. You said that you hope to write a novel in which the protagonist works hard. So can I understand the meaning of this sentence? The protagonist's combat power won't be that fast? So, how much hardship will the protagonist have to endure later? To feel better? Counting all the great masters, few of them made their fortune by writing about torture. Even if you are yourself, the few game articles you wrote earlier are all enjoyable articles. Why do you have to write such abusive articles after you have transformed? Have you made too much money and don't want to make more money? Also, the protagonist game you wrote earlier is so powerful. It has been more than ten chapters, but I haven't seen any benefits in it. So what's the point of writing this? Is it just to add a background to the main character? Therefore, I hope that the author can really understand his audience before writing. If it's not suitable for people like me. Please tell me, I won't watch it.

It's garbage, it's secular! To write the protagonist so useless that he needs to rely on a woman, he should approach it as a cook. Very poisonous.

Why don't you start a new book with 50 chapters? 😁😁😁

When I saw that pigeon, I gave up immediately. Even if it was just foreshadowing, at least I didn't write it like an idiot. You can just experiment with it. A super academic would make such a low-level mistake and I would be stupid.

Ma Jinlun