Mysterious Recovery: Follow Your Heart's Choice

Good! The current rhythm is still okay. The beginning is too discouraging... Really, I suggest the author change it again. I feel that the beginning can turn off more than 90% of readers, and it can compete with Buddha's writing about mentally retarded people. The ghost bus is more exciting. Hmm Overall, I can read it. I suggest the author practice describing the environment. There is no strong atmosphere of terror created by Buddha.

The author is great, I have been writing for more than 5 years. I have read almost over a thousand novels, many of them unfinished and many finished. You can write fanfics about Mysterious Resurrection, but it will be difficult to make money, especially when the original work is still next door to you. Hey, I have a lot to say, but I'm afraid of being criticized. In short, it's not that fan fiction is impossible to write, but it's difficult to write it well and express your inner feelings. The fics I've read so far all have poor grades, and few stand out. Even if they do, they might become eunuchs that day. Moreover, after all, it is a secondary creation, so it is inevitable that there will be (the original work is not like this, you can't write it like this! No, no, no, how did you change the character of Brother Leg?) In short, fan fiction is difficult.

I'm convinced. What are these six chapters updated in the past few days? Is it so watery? As a ghost controller, do you still need to test your physical ability? And what kind of military training is there, fooling around with a bunch of teenagers? And what about ordinary people who borrow the power of ghosts? I laughed and randomly modified the settings. Can anyone borrow the power of ghosts? When you write a fanfic, write it well and follow the setting set by Buddha. Otherwise, just open a new book and do whatever you want with the setting. It's all my fault, there were enough poisonous points in the front, why did I still watch the end? I'm such a fool, bye, look at me again🐶

I feel that the protagonist is too easy-going and lacks authority. Look at Yang Jian in his city and his territory. After all, Otsuki City is also the protagonist's territory. A group of illegal folk ghost controllers in the protagonist's territory should be killed. Only then will they know who has the final say in Otsuki City.

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Chapter 1 The protagonist yells and persuades him to quit

What the hell? The protagonist has read "Mysterious Resurrection", and then what? Knowing that the book wrapped in gold is strange, so you unwrap the gold, open the book, and then go take a shower with confidence? After becoming the world police, I never thought about making a package with gold (the article said it was because I had no money to sell gold), so I went to the first mission empty-handed (I didn't think about gold before and during the mission, and gold was mentioned after the mission) My whole body was covered with ghost ink, and I was still casual For "playing", he even went to the little girl's house to play games and left letters casually using ghost ink There is also the tough operator described by the author. Not to mention the explanation later, shouldn't the position of an operator be: when a loved one dies, one should either take leave or use a comfortable tone to answer the phone?

Hopefully I'll live to get this book on the shelves.

I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter. Is the protagonist a transvestite? ? Hearing that there is a ghost, he lies on the ground trembling with his legs weak, and his eyes are filled with tears... He is cowardly, panicked, and has such a fragile heart. This kind of protagonist is so unpleasant!

The writing about ghosts is tasteless, and the writing about people is worse than the original work. They also put effort into the chapter names. These chapter names make me want to vomit when placed in a supernatural novel. I don't need the author to rush me, I can go on my own.

The ghost slaves can deal with the ghost masters. Even the original novel did not dare to write like this. Just because the author wrote that the minions in a certain organization are all aliens, I know that the power system of your book is completely out of control.

After reading the first chapter, I lost my fucking mood and kept yelling like a 8

It's a good sign to welcome the new year, but it's a pity

There was an author who wrote mysterious fan fiction and was so trolled that he doubted his life and committed suicide 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

Inexplicably, were you afraid of death at first? Then he actively joined the headquarters and actively completed tasks and used abilities?

It's much better than the book next door, "Mysterious Resurrection: The Strongest BOSS"

It's boring. The gap between the writing is too big. The more abilities the ghost slave uses, the faster he dies. The first chapter describes that he is so afraid of death, and then he kneels down and joins the headquarters later? Fail

When I saw "White Ink", I thought I had found the book I wanted to read, but... Wherever the light goes, the light reaches. The kindness of compassion for all living beings... The white land... The Holy Advent The chaotic evil... The abyss world... The demon army the supreme, just and indifferent world... The heavenly community... "Time is so magnificent and huge... Even if it is great... Achievements, no matter how illustrious their reputations are, are nothing compared with this vast and declining world and this timeless time. What I really want is not those worldly things..." "From the abyss of the vast sea to the stars and rivers of the universe, I want to see it all with my eyes and see it with my hands. Touch it, I want to visit all the places I want to go "I want to understand all the mysteries in the world, this is my pursuit …………………………………………………… Thoughts: 1 Condemn ghosts → Everyone is guilty (no difference). Don't kill) 2 Law-making ghost → Make rules to restrain all things 3 Luck ghost → Qi: official Qi, righteousness, evil Qi... Luck: Qi far away 4 Blocking ghost → Block all exploration, isolation, and isolation 5 Evil mood ghost - any life has fixed emotions

Is there any book that can be recommended as a starting point...

After reading more than a dozen photos to persuade people to quit, the first operator has this character. The ghost master who is influenced by ghosts may directly kill him. The second protagonist has this character in high school. It is the rebellious period. Adults are affected and there are not many people who are so easy to talk to. It looks very uncomfortable. I suggest you just overhaul it.

Next door is a romance novel cloaked in a mysterious resurgence. You are an urban novel cloaked in a mysterious resurgence.