Dragon Raja: Drawing My Blade to Catch the Falling Cherry Blossoms

... It's well written, but there's a problem. You're trying too hard to capture the essence of Jiangnan, and you're neglecting some things. The storytelling is also quite poor. I suggest you take a look at your book about not having money to go to college. Your writing style is indeed good, but you can't keep writing like this. These things are enough as finishing touches. Writing like this all the time is inefficient and results in fewer updates. Come on

Speechless. The first few chapters were quite good, but things started to feel off around the middle. After reading over 60 chapters, I felt like I was reading a basketball novel on a sports channel. The majority of the book was just basketball, basketball, basketball! If you love basketball so much, why are you writing a Dragon Raja fanfiction? This book should be called "I Play Basketball in the Dragon Raja."

Honestly, writing about basketball is fine, but could you please not go on and on about so much? Not everyone likes basketball, and for those who aren't interested in basketball to begin with, this kind of writing is hard to keep reading. I gave up; I just couldn't continue. But I still hope the author's writing gets better and better.

Can this basketball fanfiction please stop inserting Dragon Raja elements? Can you please just write a proper story instead of writing Dragon Raja plots? I want to read basketball!!!

I'm done. Fine, let's play Deadpool then, but the basketball part was so cringeworthy 🤔. After reading the first few chapters, I was wondering why no one was reading such a good book, but it turns out there was a huge pit waiting for me.

There's only one request: stop writing about luxury brands in English. If you can do that, I'll definitely follow you. Motorola and Amazon should be written in English. Why do all fanfiction writers make this mistake? I've had enough of Guo Jingming's writing style. Not only does it lack sophistication, but mentioning brands you don't understand also affects the reading experience.

I read 52 chapters, but I'm too lazy to read any more; it's too tiring. It's written too sentimentally, and even a bit melodramatic. It's supposed to be a moment of utmost urgency, but it's crammed with tear-jerking tropes—only idol dramas do this. It's like padding the plot. I feel like the author is currently indulging in their own description, indulging in self-admiration and self-pity.

Keep it up! 😡

If you bring Erii to life, then Jiangnan is just a copy.

There isn't a single good fanfiction about Dragon Raja. If you disagree, come and argue with me!