Dragon Raja: Drawing My Blade to Catch the Falling Cherry Blossoms

... The writing is good, but there is a problem. You always want to pursue the flavor of Jiangnan, and you ignore some things. The story is too poor. I suggest you read the book "No Money for College". Your writing style is indeed good, but you can't write like this all the time. These things are enough as the finishing touch. Writing like this all the time is firstly inefficient and secondly less updated. Come on

I'm speechless. The first few chapters were quite good, but I started to feel something was wrong in the middle. After reading more than 60 chapters, I thought I was reading a basketball article on the sports channel. Most of the chapter is basketball🏀, basketball, basketball, why should I write a Dragon Clan fan who likes basketball so much? This book might as well be called "I Play Basketball in the Dragon Clan"

To be honest, I can write about basketball, but can I not write as much as I want in one go? Not everyone likes basketball. For people who have no interest in basketball in the first place, it is difficult for people to continue reading. I gave up. I really can't stand it anymore, but I still hope that the author will write better and better.

Can this basketball fanfic stop inserting the Dragon Clan? Can you write a good article and write random plots about the Dragon Clan? I want to watch basketball! ! !

I crawled, let's just fight Deadpool. The basketball part really embarrassed me 🤔. After reading the first few chapters, I thought why no one would read such a good book. It turns out that there is a big hole waiting for me.

There is only one request: stop writing about luxury brands in English. If you can do it, let's decide. Both Motorola and Amazon must be written in English. Why do fan fiction writers make this mistake? Guo Xiaosi's penmanship is enough to see. Not only are there no brands that are too confusing, but it also affects the perception.

I've read Chapter 52, but I don't want to read anymore, I'm too tired. The writing is too pretentious and a bit bloody. It's obviously an urgent moment, but it's stuffed with a bunch of tear-jerking stuff. That's what idol dramas do, and it's a clumsy plot. I feel like the author is now indulging in his own description, enjoying himself and moving himself at the same time. The author has some writing skills but is immature. The writing style is a bit deliberate and a bit pretentious. It may be because, as others have said, the author is imitating an old thief, and then the tiger becomes the anti-dog. Personal reflections, just talking, just to start a fight.

Come on, come on 😡

If Eriyi is brought to life, Jiangnan is a pirated version.

None of the Dragon Clan fanfics are well written, so if you don't agree, come and argue!