Big Brother, I Want to Be the Strongest in the World Among Pirates

I suggest that the author concentrate on his postgraduate entrance exams. The state of these recent chapters is obviously not quite right. If this continues, the writing will definitely fail.

After reading the latest chapter, I wonder if you have been watching Gun Yong recently. This is obviously the style of Gun Brave. I originally thought that Sugar's recent abusive descriptions were just a play on voice actors. After all, uterine cancer is a hot topic that has not faded for a long time.

Write more about the battle process and daily dialogue with other people. Don't just give the protagonist the angles and scenes. This is really meaningless, and it can't be called a novel without an ups and downs plot.

If you are not good at writing battle details, that's right. Everyone has their own side that they are not good at, but giving up easily is not advisable. If you, the author, want to achieve greater achievements, you cannot avoid improving these shortcomings. In addition, the connection between the first few chapters feels a bit fragmented. Author, you can use it as a reader Let's review what I have written from a different perspective to see if the sense of immersion is strong. Finally, here are some taboos for writing fan fiction. You can read it a little when you have nothing to do. It should be helpful. Don't make yourself too tired. Writing a book is never something that can be done overnight...

The latest chapters are okay, the fighting plot still needs to be improved, but the author should occasionally practice some of the dialogue or psychological activities of other people on the ship. For example, this time when Kerra wanted to remove the brand, she must have had a little conversation with Sugar and Reiju. There is no problem with the other people's original writing, so I'd better pay a little more attention in the future.

Too little, not enough to see, a bit slow, not fattening.

The current crew configuration really feels like The Prince of Tennis. The protagonist - Tezuka Kunimitsu, Tiga - Echizen Ryoma, Perona - Kikumaru Eiji, Akin - Kaido Kaoru, Bellamy - Kawamura Takashi, Monet - Oishi Shuichiro, Robin - Fuji Shusuke, Sugar - Momoshiro Takeshi, Reiku - Inui Sadaharu, Kerla - Ryuzaki Sakurano?

The sword master jumps backwards with sword energy. The first sleep is interrupted, and the second sleep is suspended. Nine out of ten ghost swordsmen with dnf text are all sword masters. These rare ones are all due to failed job transfers. I wonder what other benefits this thing has besides being handsome. If you want to be safe, why don't you be blind? Anyway, you can have eyes even in the third sleep.

The plot progressed too fast and the rhythm was completely disrupted.

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, the enemy and the enemy and other multi-angle story plots. The original story plot can also be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

Clear your mind and seek the way of the sword god, survive countless tribulations, get rid of deep desires and obsessions, purify your will and practice true conduct, all living beings will be protected by divine power, and God will grant us true gods. ——"Nine Dragon Balls" Onimaru's fierce Fengshen Sword Technique can be used as the protagonist to trigger the berserker's determination. The Bingxin Jue in Fengyun can be used as a means of control when the protagonist goes crazy and loses his mind.

Assuming that the boatman is an original character, I have several prototypes for reference. The male protagonist in "Three-Eyed Boy" has Sharara Hosuke with both good and evil characters, the predecessor of the Blue Knight in "Astro Boy" has lofty ideals Blu Peng, the male protagonist K-1 in "Roboman" and so on.

There won't be many nicknames from other works, such as Chaos Princess, Eye of Extinction, Forgotten War King, and there are actually some good nicknames, such as Angel of Silence, Holy Lord Hanyue, Pirate Princess, Star Pupil, Ye Yin, Pink Demon Butterfly, etc.

What's going on? Blackbeard's rebellion was around 1518 years ago, wasn't it? Why was it so early?

Speaking of the reward order, can you describe their appearance in the photo? This is a bit difficult to figure out.

It feels like Monet's current emotional problems with the protagonist are the same as the hero's sister Ma Hao in "The Strongest Assassin Reincarnation".

In fact, I have always been thinking that the main job is Berserker, so in One Piece, Devil Fruit can affect Kazan's soul and will, and other factors should also be the same. For example, there can be some skills from other professions, so that the protagonist can take a similar but completely different path. For example, the three-color Haki, the Knowledge Color can be matched with some Asura skills, the Armed Color is similar to Sword Soul, and the Overlord Color and Sword Intent can integrate a little of the skills of Devil May Cry and Sword Shadow.

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, the enemy and the enemy and other multi-angle story plots. The original story plot can also be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

Did you remember wrongly? Jerry definitely didn't come, only Dan, Franky, and Iceberg.

No matter what life is like, everyone remembers to eat on time. In the words of Master Huihai: "I had a chance encounter with that old man, in the textbook, at the dinner table, and in the human world. He could proudly point out the vast tracts of fertile land to his mother like a child in the sky." The man carried out his belief and left. Isn't it very cool? As constant as the moon, as rising as the sun. Just like the longevity of Nanshan, it will not collapse until it grows taller. Just like the luxuriance of pines and cypresses, everything is worthy of you. Grandpa Yuan Longping, please go all the way. Thank you for making me not know what hunger is.

Look here, let me talk about this issue about devil fruits. First, the Devil Fruit is a failure. Many readers think so. When I wrote it later, I also felt that the Iron Fruit was a mistake. But the mistake was not because of eating the Devil Fruit, but because of eating an Iron Fruit. In addition to the dissatisfaction of readers, this article changed to a similar Iron Fruit from the previous period (the one from the theatrical version of Big Bear King, which has high temperature in the intermediate level). I carefully imagined and developed the effect of heating and transforming steel. The Steel Fruit is actually very powerful. You can compare it to Nuo Nuo, Xianxian, Dudu, Gummy) Secondly, Devil Fruit is indispensable no matter what. I will have to use the power of Devil Fruit later (more than three hundred chapters, during the Sky Island Chapter), so I won't spoil it for now. Third, the red eye has the highest damage, but the defense is very low! Especially when running wild, the defense will be greatly weakened, so he is very fragile! In the world of One Piece, you can never become a strong person. At that time, I was thinking of getting a phantom beast species with strong resilience or even an ancient species, but I also felt that it was not something that an ordinary fugitive general could get, and the quantity was not large. What's more, this was only the four seas, and if that kind of fruit came out, it would have been robbed long ago. And the ordinary animal-type felt like it was too tight and not as good as a super-type, so at that time I got an iron-steel fruit that sounded pretty good in defense. Fourthly, Kazan was originally thinking about whether he could use the power of the Devil Fruit to suppress the power of Ghost Hand. He had already suffered from losing control once. The top priority was of course to keep himself rational and no longer lose control, or even go back to the path of Soul Sword. After all, his original intention was not to change his profession to a Berserker, as is written in these articles. (No one wants their body to be out of control at any time. As long as there is a chance, of course they will try their best to control it.) Fifth, some people think that eating Devil Fruit will make you afraid of water and sea rocks. ① Who has no time to touch the water? Even if he accidentally falls in, will the crew have to work? ②Hailoushi is not that bad, otherwise it would not wander around the whole Beihai. If Zefa wanted a Hailoushi robotic arm, he had to apply. I remember that he didn't get it the first time. ③Most of One Piece's cutting-edge combat powers are what you call landlubbers who are afraid of water and sea rocks, and all members of the Auntie family are landlubbers. ④People such as the white-bearded Akainu and others were already strong before they ate the Devil Fruit. However, they still ate it. Isn't this adding a weakness to themselves out of thin air? Do you want to ask Oda? ⑤The protagonist is a knife user, and he doesn't usually have the opportunity to come into contact with sea floor stones in battle. This can't even be considered a weakness. ⑥Can't the fear of water be debuffed by increasing resistance? Green Pheasant Owen can directly insert his hand into the sea to freeze and heat it. ⑦Many Devil Fruit users can use their abilities to still move in the sea. For example, Moria wraps himself in shadow. You can't think of it, but it doesn't mean it won't work. Finally, thank you to those who are dissatisfied with this place and are still chasing books. Your support is the motivation for me to continue writing. I will try my best not to let you be disappointed with this fruit. Thank you! ξ( ✿＞◡❛)

Damei

As a strong man on the sea, how can he not have a laughter that is exclusive to him?

This is what Kazan's eyes look like

It would be unreasonable not to post this one. I love this one the most.

Pictures of treasures discovered by accident

Overall, it's okay. The author has a good understanding of pirates, but the plot is really dragging. I've read more than 140 chapters. I can still watch the plot of the West Sea and the North Sea seriously, but I can't watch the East China Sea anymore. I basically skipped it. There is no strong person, and there are no attractive fruits. I absorbed two families. In a year, my strength has improved a little. Most of the domineering fruits have been born at one level. It is a bit too much. The heroine is also quite poisonous. Monet is so ambiguous. Do you think she is not the heroine? ? ? I think it's better not to have a female protagonist, and it's acceptable to be close to a few sisters. After all, they all watch Japanese comics, and the fruit is nothing to say, the steel fruit? ? You don't talk about fantasy beast species, nature type, etc., It has to be a more advanced superman type, right? Steel? It's okay to develop it well. I didn't look very carefully. I only saw that the fruit can warm the body and make armor. It's really not attractive. It's a bit too much for daily use. I might as well get a more interesting fruit and develop it well. The more I look at it, the more boring it becomes.

Other people's fan work, I think this look is great

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I really recommend changing the introduction. This kind of introduction that many people have commented on is really a bit bad and will dissuade you. Of course I'm not a troll, just a suggestion