The Years I Worked as an Errand in Fengdu Prefecture

The subject matter is very good. But the character of the protagonist is not well developed. If you don't have your own opinion, in this strange and eternal world where people's hearts are like ghosts, you must kill decisively. It's too embarrassing, it's a bit humble

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Is this a new work for a veteran? Absolutely beautiful! There's nothing to say, it's so enjoyable!

Stop writing such a useless protagonist and find a classmate!

I'm so old. Don't scold the author or the book.

It looks very interesting. Yesterday I saw you saying that you were threatened to stop updating, so I gave you a ticket to calm your shock. ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ

Well, I came by invitation. I read roughly 10 chapters. From what I see now, well, it feels like just one word, flat. If you want to define it more accurately, well, it is straight. Chapter 1, get that transformation technique. I thought something would happen after the second chapter and a branch line would be opened. The result is, well, no. Chapter 2 to Chapter 5, the level increases, and another organization is involved. I thought there would be a background description, well, there is no. However, the description of the fighting scenes is a bit weak, but it can be seen that the author worked hard to write it. What do you think of it? Well, it's okay. From Chapter 6 to Chapter 10, I transferred to the dungeon and got another powerful skill "Dream". Well, at the end of Chapter 5, I mentioned "Lanke Ghost"... The overall feeling of the first ten chapters to me was, well, like a novice cutscene in a certain game. Although a lot of foreshadowings have been laid, the writing method is too straight for people to understand. Well, give me an example. The first ten chapters of Lord of Mysteries. The first three chapters are set in the 18th century England. Character descriptions, travelers and supporting characters who encounter strange events. Golden finger, strange space. From the small climax, I played "The Fool" for the first time, to the climax of Chapter 10, except for myself, all the other characters involved in the strange events died, and the following plot was drawn up. Actually, the author did a good job in the first chapter. He quietly explained the background, characters, and golden fingers. However, the turning point is too straight and makes people feel abrupt. For example, the mysterious old man who gave the protagonist tasks beyond the normal scope, the talisman that the protagonist suddenly took out, and why the protagonist's own skills were not reflected in the fight? Where is the protagonist's partner? Especially after the protagonist's partner disappeared, there was a huge hole in the protagonist's character design and character description. Supporting characters are the most important structure in building the protagonist's character. Finally, all good novels have prescribed routines. The first three chapters need to clearly explain the background, the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters. By Chapter 10, there must be an obvious conflict, or climax, and the introduction of the subsequent plot. When I saw this book, I had already signed the contract and put it on the shelves. The settings and characters should be fleshed out in later chapters. Because, what I saw in the first ten chapters should not be enough to sign a contract. Well, that's it, 300,000 words have been written, and the basic structure and character design have been finalized. If you force the change, well, the author probably doesn't know how to do it. I still hope to continue working hard and wish you good luck.