Create the Highest World

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Strengthening requires basic methods in the early stage. For example, on an ordinary stone, the affix "smart" will not appear. It requires spiritual wisdom. This article collects the names of treasures and spiritual species, as well as the functions of different affixes.

This book feels better. Wan Ling gave me the feeling of pictures, but I only read half of Taiping and Magic. I read the beginning of this book and followed it. Please update the author quickly. The donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this!

After reading more than 30 chapters, the geographical location is not three-dimensional. It gives the impression that the whole world is only the size of a small town. I have planned a lot of words and spent no time to implement it. I also said that it has a life span of more than a thousand years, but I still can't bear to write longer day by day. The development of a family depends on time. There is no need to be impatient at all, just like being chased by a ghost. Just say that you want to build a city. What you wrote is that you can build a lonely place with a few hundred square meters.

The problem is huge. After reading the first chapter, I immediately wondered if I had missed a few chapters. Moreover, it was too confusing and the explanations were messy. This was very scary and created a sense of tearing. Basically I have no desire to read anymore.

What do you mean? There is no sense of immersion. The three golden chapters are inexplicable and strange!

It's such a mess, my grandson calls me grandpa and he calls me grandpa. Is the author a foreigner?

Your writing style is a bit poor. This is not Bai's problem, it's that you can't describe anything clearly.

This book is not as good as Wan Ling. This book is too tiring to read. It is confusing. Various settings are thrown out at once, or they are not explained. I always feel that there is something wrong with the way the author expresses the narrative.

The creativity is good, but the writing style is a bit lacking. One is that it is confusing, and many settings are used directly without being explained clearly. Author, what you write is original and not fan fiction. If you don't make it clear, it will appear confusing. Another plot that is too bland, written like a running account and without passion.

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I haven't read even one chapter, but I can tell from the title of the first chapter that it's not my cup of tea. The introduction is so attractive that I'm trying to persuade them to quit! I thought it was Eastern fantasy, but it turned out to be fantasy.

Don't know why. It's easy to read other people's novels. But reading your novel can kill a bunch of brain cells, which is very tiring. It's all pig's feet's inner thoughts. There is nothing to advance the plot. From all spirits to this book. No progress.

Nice idea. The writing is a bit messy. . . I've been writing for a long time, but I don't know what the secret place is. I vaguely feel like it's a modern world.

Can there be less things that really delay cultivation? Drama, drama, drama

I feel that the author's writing is very messy, including regional descriptions and the like. People don't know where you are talking about, and they can't conceive it in their minds. All the secret realms are collectively called secret realms, and they have no idea which secret realm you sometimes enter. The author can subdivide it into Chen Family Secret Realm, Li Family Secret Realm, etc.

After reading a few chapters, I found there was a problem with the author's writing style.

Is the black cauldron something that the protagonist had before time travel or is it passed down from his ancestors after time travel? Does the black cauldron give the origin of all things or is it a secret realm? The secret realm of the timeline, the black cauldron spiritual garden, is very confusing. And what does the secret realm transcendent mean? Does it mean humans or all other supernatural beings. At the beginning, many people were discouraged, and even the great masters would not dare to write like you.

I really admire this author. The world view must be revealed bit by bit. After reading the first chapter, I was confused, and the second chapter was confused. I believe most people are like me! The first impression after reading a book is the most important, no wonder this book did not do well!

I don't understand it at all, I understand it a little bit, but I don't understand it at all. Author, you have written millions of words. Is your expressive ability too bad? Better stop writing, you really have no talent.

What is the relationship between the secret realm and the spiritual garden? I always feel that the author is unclear about it.

Let's watch it first. The world view has fully emerged in Chapter 7 or 8, and you can ask for a supporting role then.

Update soon! Perfect attendance is gone 😁

Is the author at home? Where is your update sheet? I am his friend and I came here to see him!

It's very well written, but I don't know if it's a problem with the writing or the description.

What is the relationship between the secret realm and the black cauldron? I feel a little dizzy when I read it.

It's finished, but I haven't read it yet. I think the author should write about the world and humanity, which is like a copy of other novels. It's not very original.

Hey guys, this is exactly the same, the final game content 🙂

I shouldn't have pursued the investment 😢