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I really like this kind of novel with a positive outlook on life. It's quite relaxing and has no poisonous points (for me). The chat group is not a repeater either. All subscriptions are supported.

It's a bit 6. Brother, if the Zhu Xian scroll is written like this, doesn't it mean that there is no plot behind it? Others follow the plot and write better. You are pushing everything down and looking forward to the follow-up. Another guess, I feel that there is something wrong with your volume. You should not end one world and then go to another world, because your setting proves that there will definitely be an exchange of ten thousand worlds.

Come on, author, I really like reading it, Infinite Stream, All Heavens Stream, I am used to watching the opening chapters of Yitian Slaying Dragon, Lu Xiaofeng, Swordsman, Fengyun and so on. I am really bored. You, Zhu Xian, have a good start. Will the next world be Dou Po? But according to your writing method of Zhu Xian, I guess you are not going to follow the original plot. I look forward to it. Anyway, don't write it randomly. I can see it. You are a real person and not a boss vest, so don't write emotional scenes. It's not bad, but it's poisonous if it's not well written. At present, this book is barely readable by veterans, and newcomers can accept it because of the invincible flow, but they are afraid of some poisonous points...

Feeling very tired. It looks very tiring. It is full of the protagonist's one-man show, the protagonist's complaints, and the protagonist's various thoughts. Are you writing about the protagonist's inner story?

Where did the original world come from? "Buddha is the Tao"?

My personal opinion: This novel is an inner training of a powerful self-centered person

The writing is really messy, I can't understand what's written, there's too much inner drama, I've read 30 pictures from the first chapter but I still can't figure out what's written.

The protagonist's behavior is a bit hard to understand, but the details are hard to explain. It's a bit hard to understand what went wrong. ╯╰I feel uncomfortable.

As the title says, Doupo has been written and will be published slowly. Collect the world below. In addition, book friends can set their own characters. Don't be too strong, otherwise it will be too late. Format: Name + Title Realm Introduction and character setting.

To be honest, my head hurt just after reading this book. It was so confusing. There were all kinds of bugs, the inner drama of the protagonist, and the logic was inconsistent. The comparison of various combat powers in the book was more scary than the various boasts. So I gave up after reading the book. It really hurt my head and I needed to rest. After flipping through the table of contents, I completely lost interest and started writing randomly without an outline.

It feels like the author's prehistoric time lacks a kind of time traveler. "The so-called national martial arts only kills people, not performs it!" The words fell, and the saint collapsed! ――This once-popular martial arts master really embarrasses me to death.

I saw it was on the shelves and didn't want to read any more. The author's writing is good, but the protagonist's sense of involvement is really not strong. He often introduces a series of explanations and thoughts from the perspective of an observer. There is little interaction between the characters and it feels very bland, just like reading someone's diary.

My personal feeling is that it was a bit uncomfortable to watch, and I can't say where I felt uncomfortable. There was nothing wrong with the plot, but the text was very uncomfortable to read 😆

The imagination is first-rate, the plot is first-rate, and the writing is second-rate. Comprehensive evaluation: Xiancao There are too many advantages. If you have to find shortcomings, it is that the real world is very different from the real world after time travel.

What are you writing? It's a mess.

The promised Gu Master is nothing

The beginning is okay, but then the writing is very messy, with various settings, which is annoying

I thought it was a pretty good book at first, but when it came to the realm of Zhe Tian, ​​the setting collapsed. Golden Immortal = Great Emperor, Da Luo = Red Dust Immortal, Da Luo must at least be equivalent to an Immortal Emperor! It was a good time to watch, but you suddenly gave me poison 😆, author, see you again when we are destined! 😅😅

1.2 Million words and 100 discussion posts. It's really a single machine. It's miserable.

It's a bit long-winded. The whole point of Infinite Streaming is to change the plot, and you said at the beginning that you can't change the plot, so I might as well watch the original work.

I've read two chapters. It's such a confusing novel. I think the author had a lot of confusion in his mind when he wrote it. I'm a primary school student, so give it up.

I really can't understand the logic of this book. I'm going to lose my logic if I continue reading.

It's almost finished, congratulations🎉

Congratulations on signing the contract (*/ω＼*) This is the most successful investment ever

Where is the promised Master Gu? Even if you destroy the whole world, you still have to write (눈_눈)

I haven't learned to walk yet, so I just want to fly to the sky and escape. Isn't that nonsense? The pace of the novel must be grasped well, even if you have a golden finger

So the first few dozen chapters are used to persuade people to quit...

Can't understand