Starting in Tokyo with a Sign-In for the Shinra Tensei

Did I not look carefully? If you need Origin Points to use ninjutsu, then what's the use of chakra?

After reading the first few chapters where the protagonist tries to impersonate a member of Akatsuki, would you still be calm if their character involved in a deal with GF? The character development is flawed.

Readers of this book must relax and not overthink it, and be mentally prepared because the following plot points will appear in the book. 1. The original characters were weakened for the sake of the hero saving the damsel in distress. 2. The facial makeup of the characters in the original work is so lifelike that every one of them looks energetic.

Author, I want a gem! ~(￣▽￣~)~ Also, I'd like some extra chapters.

How did this book end up on the shelves this year, the centenary of the founding of the People's Republic of China? This is seriously skewed!

The author completely ignores the existence of the US military. Japan's airspace is completely controlled by the US military. Even if Japanese planes want to fly over Japan, they have to report to the US military. If something like a floating island really existed, the Japanese probably wouldn't even have the right to go there. Don't underestimate the domineering nature of the Americans.

It's fine that you write about the power system in Japanese anime, but the problem is that you depict the real world as so dangerous. If the protagonist doesn't intervene, millions of people will die at any moment. You're always in Japan putting out fires, don't you ever think about going back home to help your compatriots? Or do you really consider yourself Japanese?

I regret it so much! I'm so incredibly disappointed! Reading your pretty boy novel, I didn't realize how poisonous it was at first glance, but it's truly poisonous!

The author lacks sufficient knowledge of Naruto. For example, Kushina's chakra reserves. That's insane! Kushina's chakra reserves at eleven or twelve years old are ridiculous. Kushina... Was a member of the Uzumaki clan before her country was destroyed, so she must have had refining techniques, right? Although the terms "lower, middle, and upper ninja" are not used to measure the amount of chakra.

I've read 10 chapters, and this is truly disgusting. Kushina Uzumaki, a girl who transmigrated, is going to be hooked up again, huh? Can't novels these days write something like this?