Navy Nova

Just complain about this and read one of the paragraphs in the first chapter: "The sky in the world of One Piece is very blue, and the clouds are also very white, floating very slowly, like a gray-haired old man enjoying his happy old age." You taste it, you taste it carefully, this is a primary school student's composition, isn't it, are you having fun?

…What does the introduction you wrote have to do with the protagonist's personality? How can a character who reads~occasionally wanders be able to afford the heroic words in the introduction?

At first glance, I thought it was pretty good. At least this system didn't go against the grain and didn't destroy the original setting of Pirates. It was steadily rising. Suddenly, a clone of the captain appeared and jumped on the street. When I saw it, I immediately wanted to curse. Goodbye.

Not bad! Although the clone is a bit abrupt, it is within the acceptable range. It is just that the protagonist is too weak and has too few means! You can consider giving the protagonist a second template.

The protagonist relies on the power of cards to fight against thirty or forty million pirates, but instead of using a Devil Fruit to recharge himself to increase his combat power, he creates a clone. I'm really speechless.

Agree. The original writing was okay. I thought the protagonist had a few more skills. Get a clone. Is it interesting to raise a thief to respect himself? You are strong only when you are strong. You can create a passive character. . . Bye-Bye. A lot of fan fiction. Why bother looking at yours if there are no highlights.

The whole clone feels so strange,

Except for the setting of the clone, which is not very pleasing, the other content is very good.

I saw using the clone... To poke the poison point... Isn't it good to set it as a loyal subordinate?

Chapter 40 started to get a little bit addictive. It's a pity that the fire is going to be great. Bye-Bye

... Do you have to have a doppelgänger? I think the main character is well written.

Chapter 44: The appearance of the clone is a failure, let's see you again when we are destined.

Naval rank. Officers from the headquarters who are transferred to local branches (except the Grand Route) will be automatically upgraded to three levels. The local branch went to the Navy Headquarters for further training, and its military rank was automatically reduced by three levels. The appointees in the important gateway fortress city (Rogg Town) of the branch are all officers of the branch and maintain the rank of the branch. Finally, the direct authority granted to the officers of the branch cannot exceed the rank of lieutenant.

I felt sick when I saw this Leonardo da Vinci. The most disgusting character in One Piece is the lieutenant.

Oh my gosh, this is so shabby. Although he is not a top-notch pirate, he is still a pretty good fellow pirate. Why is he so shabby?

I'm tired of seeing pirates in the navy. Is there anyone who can build their own country, build a real navy, and recruit strong men to conquer everything?

Navy text. The navy cannot be just if it doesn't get rid of the Celestial Dragons.

At first, I said that I joined the navy because of the rules, but before I got to the headquarters, I was acting like a palace fighter, forming gangs and fake files. You might as well be a pirate, at least you can be free. A time traveler is so frustrated with cheats, and the world of One Piece respects strength. If you are strong enough, you can do anything. I can't understand the protagonist's strength now. How can a major accept his fate only if he wants to be in the headquarters? By the way, you are just a major of the branch. Isn't the branch three levels lower than the main branch? It is equivalent to a lieutenant-level officer in the main branch, which is completely different from the protagonist's strength. Moreover, you have captured so many tens of millions of pirates, and you have already achieved military merit. Isn't it true that a navy captain must kill at least hundreds of millions of pirates?

He also said that warships that usually just run away dare to fight back? How rubbish does the Navy look like in your eyes? Warships usually just run away? Even the new world can't be like this, okay?

The original work tells the story of a young man who determined to become the Pirate King, and the people of Shanghai locked their doors and windows 😏

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~