Osua's War Banner

The early processing of this book is not at an eye-catching level. It can only be said to be quite satisfactory, with no poisonous points and no bright spots. It feels like a system text in the style of horse-and-blade or total war. However, the author's surprise remains behind. The protagonist is a time-traveler, but he does not directly identify his identity. The author adopts a vague approach, with the memory of the past life, but also integrates the broken memories of this world. He behaves very maturely in the face of the "narration", without any disgusting self-pity (for example: other time-travelers, Balabala, what about me, Balabala, I really feel sick at this) The growth of the protagonist's character is also very comfortable to watch. From the beginning when he planned to recover from his injuries and go out to travel, to later to take charge of the revival of an entire tribe, and then to the decision to conquer the north, every decision is logical. To avoid spoilers, I can't go into details, but personally, this book has a strong sense of epic, and I can sympathize with the feelings of the characters. Some passages even made my blood boil. An epic is definitely not a one-man show. The handling of the supporting characters in this book cannot be said to be the best, but in the current situation where the demons are raging at the starting point, it is definitely a breath of fresh air. The people of Santon Kaya, the rescued engineer group, the masters and apprentices of the blacksmith tribe, Heila, Qi Bing Apostle, the people in each plot are flesh and blood, distinctive, not disposable tools, but I won't spoil it. I want to know if I am just exaggerating. Watch it for yourself. It is difficult to agree with others. I think it is good. Others may think it is rubbish. Only after you have really watched it can you comment. Of course, this book also has shortcomings. For example, the issue of combat power that has been highlighted recently is a bit vague, and the large-scale battles are not handled well. There is a book review that said this, so I will not go into details here. This is the first time I post such a long book review. Generally speaking, it is an encouragement. After all, a good book is so hard to find. Come on, author, this is a rare good book that can be read word for word.

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The quality of this book is quite good It can be seen that the author is really ambitious and wants to write a big world view. The cycle of farming articles is very long. I don't know if the author can persist. I really hope to finish this story safely.

I have only one sentence for this book, the best among the best. The author really tells this story carefully

Take your time, don't finish it because of the temporary pictures. Good writing style and inspiration are both important. This is the best reward for us and ourselves

I don't understand a bit. The latest chapter finally shows that the enemies are actually people too, they are just people who join after being defeated. It's not some undead army. Then here comes the problem. This killing method means that it is actually a streaking posture with no logistics at all. They also need to eat and sleep. Can robbing these things alone really sustain their consumption of traveling long distances in the snow and fighting the enemy bravely? And I don't understand the number of people. A village of 100 people counts as 40 combat-effective ones (not too many, this environment is based on ancient Mongolia, where all the people were soldiers. I think this should be higher than Mongolia). As mentioned earlier, such small tribes are dealt with through outpost patrols. We are all human beings, so I will let you lose 40:4. And it would be good if one of these hundred people joins (if you don't have the strength, others won't want it). In other words, a tribe clearing with 100 people would at best cost 3 people. So how do you get more and more hits?

Every battle is a narrow escape. The magical power obtained will never be used. You will always rely on your mouth to solve powerful enemies. Everything you get is to continue to use your mouth to solve problems that make people anxious. No matter how strong the power is, you only use your own body. However, your body will never be strengthened. From the beginning to the port robbery, I saw a male protagonist in a Japanese anime who has always refused to embrace power. From the fire of the War Banner at the beginning to the power of the Frost Whisperer later. If you get it, it's just a decoration. You won't use it until you die. It's just waiting to be taken into the coffin.

It feels like anything can destroy the Northern Territory. There is no normal person in a group of war banners. The description of combat power is very strong. In fact, everyone is hit at a 50-50 ratio. Sometimes they are strong and sometimes they are weak. They hold a meeting and gather everyone and do nothing, just waiting to be beaten Why does Southern Xinjiang send people to the rally to cause trouble? Anyway, the war The banner is not there, and the highest combat power in the north is sleepwalking. Wouldn't it be better to just steal the house? And the protagonist, do you still remember that you are the tribe's war banner? I almost forgot what your tribe is like The thing I want to complain about the most is that the chapter is either a typo, or the word order is incorrect or missing. If you don't want to write it, you don't have to write it.

I know, I picked up this book too late. From August to now, it has not been updated, just like those books that passed away suddenly in the past, leaving a confusing ending. I really want to see why Zhan Jing defeated the orcs and destroyed the northern tradition of blood and tears, why he killed Qi Wen, and why it was her. When I picked up the book again at the end of January after I had a break from work, I knew that the book was unfinished and had been discontinued. However, it was so well written that even though I knew I would face the pain of unfinished reading, I still had to read all the stories in the middle. The writing is like wine. Ken was a man of great character and it would be great if his story could continue.

I feel that there are several very strange problems in this book. First, the power system is very vague. The author probably does not want to set a realm to avoid falling into clichés, but readers will feel that the protagonist is sometimes strong and sometimes weak during the reading process, which is confusing; second, the protagonist's character problem. In the story, the protagonist will not be depressed, afraid, fearful, greedy, or lustful. Even if he occasionally bursts out of anger, he is as cold as ice. Like the Philosopher King, he is always the incarnation of the right, with almost no negative emotions, which makes people feel very distant. The third issue is the progress of the plot. According to the plot, the story should have entered the middle and late stages. The protagonist is still like a younger brother. In the story, a strong man can kill the protagonist with one finger. The protagonist is a destined hero after all. He is really not good at it. Generally speaking, there are still many areas for improvement, but it is really not easy to have such a book today when the power of Xihuan is weak.

Do you know how poisonous amnesia is, how many readers will be lost? Do you know that wearing it will not only reduce the sense of immersion, but also will reduce the number of readers. The author has thought it through

The average villain is in the second or third stage. The little guy can subvert everything by doing anything at will. The strongest one just sits on the sidelines and turns into a clown every time he comes out. This is not about the opposition between good and evil and positions, but the complete mismatch between character and ability. The plot is too deliberate to make the plot more difficult. You can predict what will happen after you see the beginning. . . Disgusting plot

I feel that the background written by the author is grand, detailed, and very attractive, but can the author not make the villain so disgusting? The several bosses that have appeared so far, such as Tuzhanwa, Lufu, and Gema, all have a few lives, and they are strengthened and resurrected after death. But the most disgusting character is actually Ivan. There is no shining point in his character, and the author crazyly arranges disgusting plots for him. In a sense, he does not have the capital to be a villain, and the author crazyly cheats him to make him a villain. There is no villain. Charm appears just to disgust the author. He is saved by the protagonist's people, takes the protagonist's money, and then engages the protagonist at a bunch of key points. He behaves like garbage, but keeps living, and then gets cheated more and more by the author. Many readers, including me, were blown away by the chapter where Ivan saves the southern army. The villain can make people hate, sympathize, and make people feel scared, but it makes readers not want to see it at all. It is just disgusting in single storage. We have not seen this kind of character in many novels.

I just saw the chapter on the shelves. The writing is good, but there are a few problems that really affect the reading experience 1. In order to be realistic, some descriptions are too vague, and I have to read them four or five times to realize who is who 2. Rare words make my blood pressure high, especially the names of beasts. It's amazing. The more rare the words are, the less description of the appearance of beasts, and the less memory I have. ? ? I don't know what it does until I use it every time. I don't know, can I guess? It's almost obsessive-compulsive disorder 4. The description of the number of people is so simple. Every time I thought there were a lot of people, but I didn't expect there were only a dozen. Where to buy slaves? I thought there were at least twenty or thirty, but it turned out there were ten. There were a bunch of adjectives in front of it. It filled the space, and there were pairs of eyes. I was stunned.

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Another comment, has the author really never written a book before? This writing style is so sophisticated. It's the first time I can write like this. Most of the people are writers. . .

Alas, it's rare to see this fairy grass turning into a eunuch. Alas alas

I like this book very much. This book is written at a slow pace, but it doesn't drag at all. In his writings, you can appreciate the harsh storms in the North, the brutal beasts, the tenacious people of the North, the contests of conspiracy and politics, the legendary epic of heroes... In this unfolding picture bit by bit, there is blood and tears, joy and sorrow, but in the end, hope is greater than despair. Throughout the book, throughout the protagonist's decisions and choices, they all tell the story: fight with the sword, fight for the weak!

Two opinions: 1. There is no problem with the protagonist being kind, but what you wrote is too much. You make the protagonist keep repeating: Every person who died because of him makes him unable to forgive himself, which is very annoying, so I just skipped the refreshing part of the protagonist's strength growth. 2. In the world of swords and magic, when you describe the fights, they are always just fists and fists, which is not good-looking. For example, after the protagonist gets the Frost Whisperer skill, he will only be able to freeze a large area of ​​​​AoE, but the person who taught him can at least add frost flow to the attack, and rub the ice pick... Overall, it is very good, but it is like a fruit cake. The cake is very good, the cream is very good, and the style is very good, but the fruit pieces are difficult to eat.

How can I become a eunuch after raising a child? Even if I write it slower, it will be fine. The last one that was such a pity was the Mecha Dajian 😭

The writing is great. If I didn't have TJ, I would definitely follow it to the end.

G. Let's put an incense on this book to commemorate it.

It's five o'clock in the morning now. I've finished reading this book. It's (probably) a pretty good book, but it's a pity that it ended like this 😵

Fattened, fattened 😭

The author is great. I have added eight starting points for novels. The group has been around for seven or eight years and the short one is two years. Among them, there are three thousand people who are a group of riding and slashing enthusiasts. We are "hungry"😏😏

It's been hard to find this kind of good new book on Qidian recently. It's very good. Good luck, author.

Really cut it? 😭

The writing is so good 😆, I haven't seen a novel like this in a long time. I really like this kind of niche literature, and I feel it is much better than the so-called white literature, but the number of words is too small, so don't be too eunuch. Poor students who have no money to reward can only give two recommendation votes

This year, a new book about western fantasy games and otherworldly stories was written relatively well. It may be the best one this year. As for other books, don't mention those pigeons... They have been pigeonholing for too long, and I have already assumed that they are unfinished eunuchs.