Lu, the Mortal Senior Brother

The protagonist is a bit indecisive. Even though the old man risked his life to teach him the lesson of self-preservation, the protagonist still spared those who wanted to kill him, only killing them at the last minute. His family was already pushed to this point, yet he's still so soft-hearted. He should at least be more decisive in killing; he's acting like a saint.

In fanfiction about ordinary people, if the protagonist doesn't steal his "little bottle" (a metaphor for something valuable), it feels like a complete failure. His achievements are future events; the opportunity is right in front of him, and he's afraid of the ultimate achievement of someone who possesses that opportunity. Why does your protagonist even need to travel to other worlds?

This is a nonsensical novel, with a protagonist whose intelligence seems questionable. It's a perfectly good mortal cultivation novel, but they had to change it into a saga of fate, tribulations, and other nonsensical plot devices. The "golden finger" (cheat code) is completely out of the blue; its existence seems solely for creating trouble for the protagonist.

Someone came to kill you and steal your treasure, you won the fight, then let them go, and even made up excuses. Is that all? Is this how you cultivate immortality? Go home and raise pigs!

Brother Lu, if you become rich and powerful, don't forget me! Hey bro, need a carry! 😁😁 (Please feature this post!)

Well, the first dozen or so chapters are really weak, especially the first chapter, which could be completely deleted. Chapters 2-13 have absolutely nothing to do with the protagonist, and if they do, they should be introduced later. This kind of writing style, where you don't see the male lead for over ten chapters, makes the reader feel that it's very weak and there's no sense of immersion.

Nonsense! It's one thing for the protagonist to compete with Old Demon Han for a small opportunity, but if he dares to change the fundamental nature of that opportunity, he can expect Old Demon Han to slap him to death in the future! 😅

I'm making this a pledge: once I saw the "Battle for Destiny" part, I knew this book was going to fall apart. It would have been better not to write the Three Flowers and Five Qi Cultivation Method at all, even though it started falling apart from the beginning with the "golden finger" (cheat code). But this time, it's the readers who are still sticking with it who are going to fall apart.

I've read several dozen chapters so far and have already encountered two obvious flaws: 1. The protagonist goes out with a suspicious old woman without knowing anything about her background, and unsurprisingly, she's easily drugged. 2. When dealing with two rogue cultivators who clearly intend to kill and steal his treasure, the protagonist defeats them but then releases them.

After reading the comments, I lost all desire to continue reading. This is a common problem with novels these days: everyone wants to kill you, even your whole family! But once you're stronger and can easily defeat them, they'll say something like, "My cultivation is stronger, you're too weak, I have no desire to kill you," and let you go easily.