Soldier Leon

All I can say is that the author has good ideas and good writing, but he does not have enough intelligence. None of the protagonists and supporting characters in the novel can meet the intelligence standards of normal people. The plot has an inexplicable beginning, an inexplicable development, and an inexplicable end. After a closer look, it makes people feel confused? , Relying on various coincidences to complete the logical self-consistency of the plot. To be honest, it's interesting to read without thinking, but after reading too many chapters at once, I really feel that my intelligence has been insulted.

Sofa sofa, grab the sofa, grab the master's sofa.

After reading it for the second time, I once again lamented that the author was still very imaginative even at that time. The writing is smooth and makes reading very smooth. Highly recommended

From the wizard Abel to the extraordinary David, and now this book, they all follow the same routine. This book is more serious. In order to have a sense of tension, every time the map is changed, someone will hunt down the protagonist, and then the protagonist will return the favor. Mom. It has an unlimited lifespan, so why can't it just level up a little bit? Being constantly being rewarded and being hunted made me tired of reading it. The first two books felt pretty good, but this book kept changing the map in order to promote the plot, which still showed a good side, but in the end, I was still hunted. It's poisonous! When being hunted, he forcibly changed the map. After changing the map, he was exposed for various reasons. Then he happened to meet someone from a higher-level civilization, and even saved him. Then he was taken to a higher-level civilization, and then he was abandoned because of profit. He was hunted, and he jumped from the 2nd level civilization to the 5th level civilization. It is still the same routine. Looking at the current situation, the 5th level civilization will not last long, and he will be hunted again! Convinced! !

If Abel scored 100 points, David scored 80 points, and Leon scored 60 points. The author's level has dropped. Just like the three books Drunk Tiger's Black Iron Castle, Silver Overlord, and Golden Summoner, they are becoming increasingly unsatisfactory~~

Those who talk about hard science fiction suggest that you read Starship Paratroopers of the last century and then decide whether this book is hard science fiction. Isn't this just a leveling and training book with a science fiction cover?

The beginning of this book is really amazing. But later on, the protagonist was severely suppressed, constantly being beaten, and exhausted. This way of writing is actually not a big problem, but it is inappropriate for the times. People nowadays don't like this feeling and it's not cool enough. . Ten years ago, most of the protagonists were ordinary-looking and all kinds of weirdos, but now they are all rich and handsome, which can be seen. . . After reading dozens of chapters, I suddenly felt that it was not interesting anymore. Even if the protagonist comes back with revenge, he is just like a panic-stricken dog. . Too cruel. . .

. . . What does it mean to give the protagonist a good start and then ask the protagonist to give up this start to give a good start but not to let the protagonist use it? Then just kill all the people around the protagonist to get the worst start and bear the blood feud, let's settle it.

It's so tiring to watch, constantly wandering between being chased and fighting back. Can't the protagonist just try to develop himself? It feels like you have to commit suicide everywhere to promote the development of the plot. People are tired of aesthetics, so stop committing suicide everywhere.

See now. To be honest, the protagonist and Claire are no longer possible. Of course these are all my own thoughts. The protagonist returns to Chaweng and is targeted along the way. The first time, Chapter 16, a store selling clothes, three members of the military attacked, attacking a national hero in public. Second time. Chapter 23: Dreiser is attacked and captured on an airship. The third time. Chapter 49 Enoch's attack. There is this paragraph in the original text. (Use your own security authority to open the door, be careful to open the door to the protagonist's house, and save it early.) The fourth time, Chapter 71, the Mondstars come to arrest, they can be arrested just on suspicion, without paying attention to evidence. Chapter 5, Chapter 104, Laile Xingshi leads a military team to capture the protagonist. Arrested five times, he will not give up until he achieves his goal. In Chapter 64, we saw the first mastermind behind the scenes, Professor Koestler, and in Chapter 115, Admiral Neville. Chapter 116: The biggest black hand, Jeffrey Star Master. In Chapter 82, Armand was injured. The original text stated that there was a person in the military who was stronger than Armand, and Leon had to go far away. In Chapter 115, Master Cresting asked who captured Leon. What was Marshal Algernon's conversation? He asked Armand what evidence the Star Master had for saying this, and then he found out that Armand was already at level 17 and was the same as Jeffrey, so he told Neville, didn't he know that the military was arresting Leon? Everyone knew it. Jeffrey is especially interesting. His daughter Claire likes Leon. In Chapter 116, he said that he told the military not to arrest Leon because he didn't want his daughter to be sad. The strongest star masters in two countries cannot protect one person. I have never seen such a hypocritical person. If it is not level 17 Armand, but level 16, I am afraid it will be another story. So Jeffrey is the biggest behind-the-scenes person, something that even the military marshals don't ask about. Neville doesn't have this kind of energy, a person who can force Armand. He says that he is a good person. He doesn't know that Leon has been targeted. He is protecting the protagonist. Do you believe it? So go to hell Claire, she doesn't deserve to be a heroine. How can Confucius repay kindness with directness? If this can be cleared up, the protagonist will return later. Then I really can't stand it. Being patriotic does not mean being an idiot.

Author of three books, 1. Abel running around, 2. David running around, 3. Leon running around...

The author is still following the same formula, that all evil will be repaid. Can you change the way of writing? This way, it will still be a replica of "Supernatural David, Wizard Abel".

This writing... Everywhere you go, you will definitely fall into trouble with the force you belong to, you will definitely be hunted down, and you will definitely be driven to the next force. The plot design is simple and brainless...

The killing of scientists was too casual and was solved simply. What's more important is that this information was completely revealed by the woman. The protagonist didn't even investigate and went straight to kill the scientist with the rank of general. Do you think the protagonist's behavior is logical? You can say that he is very thoughtful. He would just kill the general scientist after receiving information from a person he knows nothing about. You can say that he is brainless. He can kill the opponent by force from among a large number of guards. It is better not to kill him.

This author's books all follow the same routine, and it's boring to read too many of them. There is no heroine, let alone a harem. He kills people at every turn and is extremely narrow-minded.

It's quite interesting, but unfortunately, I initially thought that the protagonist could take the path of the military and become the God-Emperor to penetrate the universe, but in the end he was still a lone wolf. .

After being put on the shelves: practice, invitation, crisis, receipt, breakthrough, escape, receipt, breakthrough, practice, invitation, escape, breakthrough...

Although the routines are similar, it's really refreshing to watch. Come on, author.

Why is the writing becoming more and more clumsy? I still regret it. Isn't it annoying to be chased and killed every day?

Forcibly advancing the plot makes the pig's trotters appear to be mentally retarded.

I always feel that 500 years have passed since the author wrote, and there seems to be no progress in technology. With the technology of 500 years ago, we can easily carry out infiltration operations.

When will the new book be released 🤓

Each of the author's books is very good, with its own original ideas, and can be kept in moderation. If it were a skilled writer and a few maps, he might be able to write tens of millions of words eloquently. The most important thing is that the updates are stable, so you can pursue books with confidence, and writing books also shows your character. Come on, author!

When will I publish a new book? I would like to give the author a little suggestion. The name should be nice. The pet name in this book is too dramatic...

Completed. Became a god. In this book, Leon does not have a wife.

How should I put it? If the author of this book were those water gods, it would easily be 5 million words long.

Why do I feel like this is a mess?

It should be over soon, time flies so fast! Happy New Year to everyone (✪▽✪)

When will the new book be released?😁

This book is not watery at all. Those who don't like water can read it. The writing is quite good.