Mecha Warfare: The Return

Forget about eunuchs, there are really no more war stories.

The beginning is quite interesting. I have Luna at home to borrow money and a congressman wife in the seed country. The doctor said that I can only eat soft food from now on because I have a bad stomach, haha. 🙂 This is Yi Zui's third book, I believe his writing skills will definitely improve, so let's have more female protagonists! ✊ There are many favorite female characters in the mecha series. It's not unacceptable to have a single female protagonist, but it feels like a pity.

Yizui, can you please write about Gundam W and Gundam 😃

I want to read pure Gundam novels, but there are so few of them now. Either he has a wrong outlook on life, or he is someone who is spreading the chicken plague...

The first Gundam Seed world was quite well-written, and I followed it every day. However, I no longer had the desire to read the second world. Relatively speaking, I still liked Unlimited Mecha. This novel was just tasteless, and it was a pity to abandon it. After all, this is a Gundam novel, and if you don't pilot the Gundam, it feels like it's missing its soul.

After Yizui Ge dropped "The World of Machine Warfare", I thought he had given up his career as a novelist. It was not until more than a month ago that I found out that he had come back to write "The Return of Machine Warfare", so I added it to my bookshelf. After finishing the first chapter, I directly ordered it and read it. As a I have spent hundreds of dollars to fully subscribe to the genuine version of "Unlimited Robots". I am an old reader and fan. I would like to share my thoughts here. What I say may be a bit unpleasant, but I have absolutely no malicious intent subjectively, so please just treat me as nonsense. If anyone sees it, please give it a look and laugh it off. Art originates from reality, but is higher than reality. It must not be divorced from reality. You can give it a try and write a story by yourself, and then let others read it. As long as the people and things in the story have prototypes in your real life, it will definitely be better than imagining out of thin air, "castles in the sky falling from the sky" style content. For example, the character Runtu portrayed by Mr. Lu Xun in the novel "Hometown" is based on his childhood playmate Zhang Runshui in reality; another example is Sister Xianglin in "Blessing", which is based on his original wife Zhu An in reality; even Ah Q in "The True Story of Ah Q", This character has become a spiritual totem in a certain sense. In reality, the two brothers Xie Agui and Xie Ayou serve as prototypes. It is precisely because the prototype exists in the real world where the author lives. Therefore, when it is portrayed by the literary art of novels and shown to readers, it will give readers a deep sense of identification. It makes people feel that the characters and plot are alive and weighty. In other words: if you, the author, and the characters you write have no empathy, then what you write will be like "a castle in the sky falling from the sky." The words will only make people feel void and have no texture. This is a taboo of all novel authors. Having said the above, come back and look at Yizui. In "Unlimited Robot War", you will occasionally see him mentioning his real life. Before writing the novel, he worked as a teacher and was the father of a lovely girl, but he divorced the girl's mother. If you apply these realities to his novels, you will feel that there are many "castles falling from the sky"-style plots in his novels. For example, in "The Return of Robot War", the protagonist operates through a very strange relationship between characters. In order to maximize the benefits for oneself, he even became the speaker of PLANT; another example is the second world "Macross F" in "Unlimited Robots". The protagonist made the president laugh through "three sentences" and then gave way to himself. These plots made me look confused, the handling of interpersonal relationships, the cruelty of party-to-party opposition, and the balance of interests of all parties. These politically realistic things are simply child's play in Yizui's writing, and the writing has no texture. Why is this happening? That's because Yizui, a person who has never even been a principal in reality, wants his protagonist to be the speaker or even president in the story. This kind of author cannot empathize with the character at all. How can a "castle falling from the sky" style plot impress readers? He committed this taboo as a novelist. The above is the emptiness of the plots in Yizui's works, and then let's talk about the textured parts. The protagonists in Yizui's works often lead his subordinates to fight, or say something to persuade his juniors or subordinates. Although I personally think that some plots are not even interesting, this type of plot still makes me feel very vivid. That is because he has been a teacher in the real world, has led students, and has life prototypes; and in his three movies Among the novels with millions of words in total, the plot that moved me and made me think it was really well written was the story of rescuing Stella and the children from the Alliance in the world of "Mech J" in "Mech War Unlimited", and the subsequent interactions with the children and Lux. Although the text is plain, the plot is very vivid and unusually textured, which makes me think it is very interesting. Why is this happening? That's because Yizui really has a lovely daughter in the real world. Although he and his wife are divorced, he has had the life experience of a family of three living happily together. For him, these things have real real life prototypes to use as reference, not "castles in the sky falling from the sky", so he can write well. Yizui is the only author who writes about the unlimited flow of machine combat in Qidian. I am willing to spend so much money to read the original version of his novel to support him, and I am also a loyal fan of his. So I would like to make a small suggestion, that is, I hope that Yizui will not let the protagonist in his novel use some lofty life experiences or plots. The author himself has no similar experience in real life. How can you write a decent story based on experience? Just write about the protagonist starting from a small person in the new world. By strengthening his combat strength, accumulating military merits, fighting hard battles, and climbing to the peak of life little by little, it will be enough. If you cannot find the empathy of the high-level characters, it will be much easier for the lower-level characters. Don't write some castle-like plots. Also, if Yi Zui really wants to make a living as a novel writer, he must take his works seriously in the future. This is his third novel, and there are still typos in it. "Zai" and "Zai" are still unclear. The most unbearable thing is that if something is wrong, it will be wrong, and it will be deleted after publishing it. What's the point of not changing it in the future? For another example, a "D-class machine" setting suddenly popped up in this novel. Apart from old fans like me, which new reader can understand it? How could such a text that discourages newcomers be written? Has Yizui never thought about fans accepting new ones, so he just keeps resting on his laurels? To put it more importantly, Yizui lacks even the most basic professionalism for his work. How can he succeed if he continues like this! Looking back at this point, I actually felt a little funny that I typed so many words into this crappy post. Maybe as a loyal fan, I feel deeply responsible for Yizui Ai. Finally, let's end this post with a quote from a great man: Where do people's correct thoughts come from? Did it fall from the sky? No. Is it inherent in your own mind? No. People's correct ideas come from social practice.

I even forgot that this book has unlimited flow. It's too long. It's just a plot. If you insist on writing unlimited flow into a fan novel, the novelty of opening the book will be lost.

He didn't even say hello, then there was no sound. He looked like he was dead. Maybe he died from the epidemic before.

I haven't updated it in 22 days. If it's broken, just let me know and wait for the next one.

Entering the palace😵