The Wonderful Life of Wu Dong Qian Kun

Come on, author, if you put it on the shelves, I will give you a reward

It's a bit depressing. I feel that the main character is still Lin Dong, which is no different from the original work. It's also more frustrating to watch than the original work.

It feels a bit strange to choose sword cultivation. There are only two types of Wudong Qiankun: Yuanli and spiritual power. Where does the system of sword cultivation come from? The sword is just a weapon, and elemental power and spiritual power are the fundamental foundation. Just like when you are talking about the choice of whether to be a boy or a girl at birth, you say that there seems to be no blacksmith in this world. I want to be a blacksmith. Don't you think it's strange?

No, what's the difference between this and the original work? The protagonist is still Lin Dong. He gives me the opportunity and his wife. You, the protagonist, are dispensable. I'm speechless😒

Come on, no matter what you write, just make it a martial arts fan

There's something wrong with you. You've been cultivating for three years before you can reach Earth Yuan. Lin Dong has been cultivating for half a year and you can reach Tian Yuan. What kind of body do you have? It's not good.

In two simple words - rubbish.

The previous plot is so cliche... And Lin Dong's character should be the best among the potato protagonists... I don't understand why I have to fight Lin Dong... I've read a few chapters so far, and it's a bit toxic. Yangyang first, there are still few martial arts fans...

Rubbish novel rubbish rubbish rubbish novel

After reading Chapter 20, the protagonist is too weak as a swordsman in the Earth Yuan Realm. Defeat Lin Dong and bring out the Dragon of Luck, but it's an anticlimax.

What the hell is this writing about? How is it different from nanny writing?

At the beginning, when I saw the physique you wrote, I thought it was very powerful. There are more than 10 pictures and they are still in the Earth Element Realm.

Why, you still want to write a useless story for the protagonist. That Qin Xue is not really going to marry that boy from the Zhang family. Then the protagonist is too aggrieved.

Avoid the pitfalls. First of all, the system has no sense of existence. You can only look at your own panel. I wonder what state I am in and still need to look at the system. I have no idea? Secondly, are you able to do alchemy casually? It's outrageous. You can't write a fanfic without opening a harem and seizing the opportunity. What kind of fanfic can you write? Moreover, it's too holy. Although I like the character of Lin Dong very much, but is it okay for you to go ahead and injure the monster Lin Dong is about to face? And the elixirs are not collected, the poisons are

The author is back! 🤐

Fan fiction is just about the same characters, not the same story.

The books written by the author are basically rubbish, a scumbag

It seems to be a bit depressing. Since my previous life was a middle school boy, why did my personality change drastically after time travel? It seems that I feel uncomfortable.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~