I'm Rubbing the Hearthstone Among Mortals

Chapter 6: Even tell Han Li the capabilities of the system cards... What is the relationship between Han Li and you? Even if father, son and brother break up because of interests, it's really... Ah, I feel so tired.

I read all the chapters in one go today. As a veteran mortal bookworm, I have basically read hundreds of chapters of this book. Now let's talk about my thoughts after reading: 1. The plug-in is too strong and the utilization rate is too low. Although the original plot is just at the beginning of the book, it is understandable, but it can't be too rough! For example, what about the first two bosses, Dr. Mo's human puppetry? Where is Master Jinguang's storage bag? Where is the Ye family treasure that was destroyed in the original plot? Others have a family tree left, so do you? Are there any plot pits? Hidden BOSS Yu Zitong has nothing to dig out? 2. It doesn't matter if you abbreviate part of the branch plot, you can completely let Han Laomo experience it. But you also need to have a plan when deleting characters! For example, Qingwen Taoist was an important figure in the Heisha Sect's copy of the Yue Kingdom Palace. He dropped 1/5 of the Blood Evil Five Elements Pill. From the back to the front, he is the general person in charge of the Black Evil Sect's Tainan Xiaohui! How will the plot be supplemented then? 3. It's not uncommon for fan fiction to write off the protagonist to death, as this paves the way for replaying the plot. But don't you want to jump out of the original plot? If the old devil is written to death, then most of the characters and timelines related to him will no longer be used. If the mortal world is so big, it would be better to rewrite the plot than to open a new book, so why write a fanfic? 4. Goldfinger also specifically mentioned that it has been integrated and updated with the mortal world. These are just a few pictures! Are the mechanical octopuses out? If you want to write about machines, you should rely on puppetry! Please change the names of the plug-ins that are neither fish nor fowl when compared to Xianxia. This is a 40-chapter book, so there are only so many problems for the time being. Mortals have read it for many years, and the plot is blurred. Please forgive me for any mistakes! ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​But once the fairy world came out, I didn't dare to watch it! Just listening to other people mentioning the time of Daozu makes me give up! Is that still a mortal? That is the Second Generation Ancestor's Immortal Cultivation Biography! Completely deny everything in Han Laomo's past! The future is destined! Reincarnation is doomed!

I felt a little tired after reading Chapter 5. I just found the vial and didn't hide it, and asked Han Li to twist the cap. In Chapter 5, he told the truth directly. How much do you trust him? Let's not talk about Han Li's character, how can anyone not be moved if he knows about it? In my opinion, it's just a matter of not grabbing the vial. If you do, you have to keep it a secret. If you can't stand it yourself, why don't you expect others to be reincarnated as soon as possible. For Han Li, who had been robbed of an opportunity, his most important capital was gone. Unless he really had the halo of pig's feet to make up for it with other opportunities, it would be hard to say whether Han Li's qualifications would be able to reach the top level of Qi training in this life, let alone foundation building, and he would basically have nothing to accomplish. If Han Li had a pig's trotter aura, there would be a high probability that the vial would not be picked up by the pig's trotters. So, Pig's Knuckle can either be an ordinary friend to Han Li and slowly pull away from him, or he can be a nanny to help Han Li breastfeed. I think everyone knows what to do. Then it's still the same question, how much does Pig Knuckle trust Han Li, thinking that he won't leak secrets or that he is good at seizing treasures, so he told him the efficacy of the vial? The author's description of Han Li was so fair. Except for asking Zhang Tie to help open the bottle cap at first, people took Zhang Tie very seriously at other times. Just like this, Zhang Tie was killed by the plot, and no one else knew about it from then on. And the skill card, I just went out and used it without understanding it. What if it is a one-time use? No more. Don't tell me that I found it in the system. If you read the original article, you will know that the pig's feet were used without any research at all. After using it, I went to the system to look for it and found that the card was returned. He's also smart enough to think of the machine gun theory. Simply a stick. Without the plug-in, I don't think I could survive as long as the original text. ——The above represents my personal opinion. Don't ask where the flying flowers will go. It will be cold if they stay, and they will be hurt if they fall. Injured in the whereabouts.

After reading five pictures, doesn't the protagonist know how to make elixirs by himself? Do you have to rely on Han Li? Don't you know that it's better to rely on yourself than relying on others? Do you expect Han Li to work for you for the rest of your life?

Zhang Tie himself has spiritual roots or three spiritual roots. He has better qualifications than Han Li. When you come here, you don't have spiritual roots 🤫. The key point is that as a time traveler who has seen mortals, he doesn't know that Zhang Tie has spiritual roots. Zhang Tie is Han Li's exclusive bodyguard among mortals 😜

Author, this book is overall very good, but since you replied to let me take a look, I will shamelessly express my opinion. The cheat setting in this book is very innovative, but there are also many problems. First, the cheat is too big. Whether it is the skill of killing people and creating a magic floating dragon, or the skill of magic biscuits, they can be regarded as cheats in other short novels with carding. However, in this book they may only be basic operations. In this case, the subsequent skills will become stronger and stronger. If If it is not controlled, the protagonist may become invincible. For example, if mana biscuits are not restricted (such as cooling time, storage online, manufacturing cooling), they can have unlimited mana. If the golden finger is too high, it will be difficult to write later scenes. Also, although the golden finger is very creative, the author, don't you think that the new mechanical style in the novel of cultivating immortals is a bit awkward? I think most of the people who read mortal fan fiction are the audience for fairy tales. Many people may not accept mechanical style things. For example, I can't imagine what the arms of a mechanical octopus would look like. There is also a problem with the progress of this book. The protagonist has already established the foundation in less than one hundred chapters. At this rate, the foundation may be formed in less than two hundred chapters, and it may be faster in the future. This is too dangerous and easy to become a eunuch. Let's see if most of the mortal fans of those eunuchs are like this. Tell the author my own thoughts, a new way of writing the original copy. For example, the next copy is about Senior Brother Lin sending Dayan Jue. The original work is about Senior Brother Lin accidentally falling into a formation and seizing Han Li's body, and then being killed. The author can write the protagonist as the protagonist who knows the plot and follows Senior Brother Lin to kill people and seize the treasure to avoid accidents, or write a story about taking millet from the fire of everyone in the Qianzhu Sect. To be honest, the author's writing is good, but the pace is too fast, and the emotional scenes are a bit awkward, but the fighting scenes are good, and the plot is innovative, especially the one where Han Li and Nangong Wan die, which is very interesting, with the taste of the impermanence of the world and the even more impermanence of the road to immortality. After the bloody copy was released, the descriptions of the old monster Qiong and all the characters are very delicate. That's all, author, come on, come on, come on!

In view of the increasing number of students who have different opinions on this book recently, I would like to make a special explanation: 1. The style of this book should not be completely similar to ordinary people. The main tone will be lighter than the main tone. The author himself also wants to make it interesting and fun. After all, it's 2021. 2. Mortal fans also expect that the Spirit World chapter will end, so we don't need to consider Han Li's law of time in the Immortal World chapter, otherwise we would still be grabbing the Sky Palm Bottle. (As if it can really be written) 3. This book has no outline and basically follows the plot, but will try to be as rational as possible. 4. Due to the above reasons, there is no original plot. Students who want to see the original plot can leave. 5. Personally, I think it is fun to watch it again from a different perspective without deviating from the original characters or plot.

Hearthstone's transformation cards can be used as skills or passives. Monsters that mortals cultivate as immortals can be collected with follower cards. Hearthstone's legendary cards can obtain corresponding permanent special abilities based on their characteristics. Opinions are for reference only.

It's been more than a month since I stopped updating, and I haven't been willing to delete this book. I just wanted to ask who the author was, or did he let things be delayed?

Let Han Li know about the Heavenly Vase. If you don't learn to make elixirs and let Han Li make elixirs, will all the elixirs be divided equally in the future? Han Li will not think that you don't know how to make elixirs. Why should I only get half of it after working so hard to make elixirs? It won't work if you give less, and even less if you give too much. The benefits are too great. How deep of a relationship can withstand such a test?

Why was there no update yesterday? Is there any update today?

If you are a eunuch, you should at least say something.

Author, I discovered a serious problem today. "The Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" does not appear in the title and introduction of your book. I looked for other mortal fan novels today, and I couldn't find you when I searched for "Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality". Please change the title or introduction, otherwise people like me who search for "Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" will not be able to find you.

Has the author had a good rest? Update soon! 😭

The setting is okay, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch

The writing is very good, why did it suddenly stop updating? Why don't you give me accurate words when writing?

Wipe! As expected, this book is a eunuch again.

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