The Age of Discovery of Elves

Why is this character portrayed in this way? It makes people uncomfortable to watch. After all, the protagonist is a noble, the younger brother of your saint. What qualifications do you have to make fun of her and command the elves to attack innocently for no reason? It makes people think that there is something wrong with this woman. Moreover, in the Age of Discovery, the status of nobles is still relatively high. A commoner can also make fun of and criticize nobles at will 🤔 If there is no class, then what is the distinction between high and low? After all, this is set in medieval Europe, and everyone is not equal today (even in modern times, others will be very angry when encountering this situation😡)

To be honest, I don't have the habit of joining book groups when I read books, so I don't know how to operate a book club, which is a bit of a blind spot in knowledge. Let's collect opinions first. If you want a group, deduct 1 or give a like. If the total number of likes and replies exceeds 50, I will create one.

This book is really dressed in the skin of an elf. I always feel that there is no difference between having an elf and not having an elf.

Collect some names of people and ships. The names need to be more Western-style. You can mention one or two elves you want by the way, but there is no guarantee that they will be 100% adopted. The name of the ship should not be too weird. In addition, because I also play ship B, there is no need to issue ships from the history of World War II. For example, Enterprise Glory or something, I can find it by opening my own shipyard (manual funny)

This book is really a pity. The subject matter is particularly well chosen, but the author is too ambitious and focuses on the great voyage. To be honest, I think most of the readers attracted by this title should focus on the elves, not the voyage. Like me, I want to see the protagonist wandering into the sea, conquering elves, cultivating elves, exploring secret places, encountering mythical beasts, etc. The main tone is hoped to be progressive, rather than the protagonist being suppressed in various ways, and then engaging in various conspiracies, making the thief depressed.

Many people say that the protagonist is humble. Isn't this really because Long Aotian has seen too much? First of all, at the beginning of the article, it is said that the Navy and the old aristocracy are opposing camps (the First Fleet will be excluded from the following article). The protagonist going to the Navy is equivalent to jumping to the enemy camp. In the Navy camp, the title of aristocrat is of little use. So why can a young man who has just switched jobs in the middle of the journey be arrogant and arrogant? Isn't it normal to be a little low-key? Besides, how humble is the protagonist? Was he bullied? After working as an instructor for a few weeks, I started as an officer immediately after boarding the ship. In your eyes, as long as someone doesn't kneel down and lick you, it's called humble? Furthermore, before the time travel, the protagonist was just an ordinary person, a bit of an otaku, and unsociable. The character descriptions in the article are quite accurate. Why do you think that an otaku who time travels can instantly turn into an aristocratic playboy with his nostrils turned upward? Don't impose your own idea of ​​​​being the boss and me being the second child on everyone! Being kind to others never means being humble. On the contrary, people who always want others to kneel down and lick them are really sick inside.

No, as a time traveler, you just decided to follow others so hastily? Have you ever considered starting a big business on your own? And it should be obvious that in a world where strength is important, you don't raise Pokémon? Are you studying steam engine electric motors here? Anyone who is thoughtful can easily destroy all of this with a little effort. It is not worthy of raising Pokémon to make inventions here, so I might as well read other books.

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I'll have one too

Why join the Navy? When can I sail my own boat? Readers may not like it if you give all your treasures to the captain. Since your golden fingers are so versatile, why didn't you train in the same place for several months? Or train with an old captain for a few months, and then go it alone. Maybe the author has this intention, but would you like to speed up the pace here? . When I saw this title, I thought it was a free and easy sailing flow. Why do you keep reading? Just like the academy genre.

The step of haircutting is really like the underworld. If we don't write about some bitter and grudge-filled things, will the protagonist not grow up? The protagonist has the Sharingan, does something have to die in order to grow? If you want to write about the changes in the protagonist's personality, you can let him grow up in the pirate career. If he encounters a small setback or something, the random hair knife is already in the underworld, so this is still a forced hair knife And the general has tried it out, and the protagonist is actually garbage. Will the enemy of the protagonist predict the future and hide outside the island to block him? Isn't this already written to a dead end? Or let's talk about the protagonist conquering Kyogre in the next chapter.

In fact, after I saw more than 80 pictures and read many comments, I think the author does not have to worry about following the family and choosing one of the two. As a nobleman of that era, you will understand the truth that not all eggs will be put in one basket. Since we are optimistic about this seventh prince, and the family's main offensive force is the seventh prince, we can also allocate a small part of our strength to support the protagonist's preference for the navy. No matter which side wins in the end, this family will definitely survive and is very sure to be a top noble. There is no need to choose one or the other due to the historical trend of the protagonist. Is it possible for the author to arrange it? As for the invention of a steam engine, it's a mess. In fact, with the addition of elves, even if you want to invent something, you can just mention it in one sentence without going into detail. After all, the core of your book's label is Elvish, with a bit of an extraordinary voyage setting. In addition, what you said about fighting for hegemony is a mess. You need to distinguish clearly. With so many details, you need to have a main line. Where can I write in detail. For example, the process of fighting for hegemony, the process of conquering the elves, and the battle process can all be written in detail.            ， ，， ， A brief outline will suffice, anything more detailed will make your article too confusing. Nothing, nothing exciting. The last person watching it was extremely uncomfortable.                                                                                                                                                                                                                               . Comments include the author's explanation. I can roughly understand what the author means. But how to say it? What the author wrote is completely different from what you imagined. In the first sixty or so pictures, I remember sitting down and despising Gou Hao. If you write something like this after you backhand, it will give people the impression that the two people are exactly the same. Finally, it gives us a feeling that the character has collapsed. To be honest, if the author hadn't been replying to other people's questions. It's quite contextual. I even wonder if the author has changed. I won't talk about anything else, but it's a pity anyway. I saw the first fifty pictures and thought it was okay. It's a pretty good novel if it's steady and steady. But what might be said next? Something is wrong. A little bit sick.            ， Is it elves, fighting for hegemony, sailing, or technological updates? All of these things can exist, but they have their own priorities. If it were all about the Lord, then this book would be worthless. It makes people's heads look big. I hope your next book will be better. Slipping away

Personally, I think everyone who reads this book wants to see the majestic sea and Pokémon, right? Although I felt off-topic when I wrote about the Seventh Prince normally, it is understandable at least. At present, I have seen more than 80 chapters, and there is another saint or something, and there are so many people in the characters. As the author, do you want to write about the adventures of the author and his partners, or do you want to write about Pokémon? I hope you can answer it🙄🙄

I would like to give you a suggestion: speed up the pace of this book, stop writing weird things, and just write about elves sailing and hunting for treasures, increasing their strength, and then fighting villains to level up. It feels weird to put those families, technologies, etc. In an elf book. This book is probably going to be difficult to start with. Start high and go low. Work hard for the next book and don't write about things that you can't grasp.

How could the future legendary captain and wavebreaker partner be without it?

I just started chasing it last month. I wanted to keep it up, but it turned out that I couldn't keep it up.

I recommend the author's book "Super Voyage", in which the author combines the old-fashioned aristocracy and the extraordinary very well. Against the background of the wave of capital and the great voyage, everything the protagonist does is remarkable. Now it is on the fantasy list. The author can refer to it. I hope the author will have better results.

As expected, if you have a double book, you will definitely have to give up one book.

Eunuch for a long time

When will you come back and update?

The beginning is too bullshit, the male elf has to be cultivated from scratch

There is a problem. It must be for the great voyage. Who is watching you play ball? It is well written. Nobles discovered the trade in the New World. Common areas are shared by each other. Business Yahoo is about nobles or fighting for power. Who has finished watching cartoons? And elves, I hear elves, you are the water elf. Ermu Xia is the same as the secret agent. This kind of full system, swordsmanship or magic, wouldn't it be wonderful to play ball with you in the vast world?

Is it really the same author? It feels like a big difference,

Even if you order this book, you won't be able to reach disciples 🙄

Why don't I just read a few books at the same time? I don't have any money for the moment. I'll save it first and you'll stop updating when I get back.

After coming out of the cleansing room, I have to rest for at least a month before I can move around!

I am recommending a new book "Job Jumping from Paradise". The Death/Fire/Sea fandom is very arrogant in the introduction, but it also adds unlimited streams and the classification of the universe. Everyone please laugh at it with me

The main character returns to the Holy Mother, which is indeed a failure, so he is afraid that others will not find him.