Weird Survival World

The creativity of this book is still very exciting, but the details are not handled well. Generally speaking, novels similar to Muyouliu have a variety of elements mixed together, making it difficult to write brilliantly. A single element can better describe the plot and give readers a stronger sense of involvement. This book just expresses too much, so that it does not express enough, or it lays a lot of foreshadowing, but there is no sense of hierarchy. Another thing is that the stand-alone feeling is too strong. Is the main plot just to create the protagonist and show the survival and exploration paths of different civilizations? Unfortunately not! So far, it is still the civilization where the protagonist belongs, and the entire civilization's path of survival and exploration is also divided into two factions to compete. This is no problem and is a normal operation. Regarding the golden finger of the protagonist, in the first stage, the protagonist's development is average for the sake of stability due to unknown circumstances. When the competition begins, the development accelerates. Theoretically speaking, the protagonist moves towards an invincible flow. No one can surpass the protagonist in terms of development efficiency. This is okay and there is nothing wrong with it. The protagonist's goal is to reach the end and resurrect his family, which is fine. There are no problems with these, but the overall reading is awkward. I can only say that the sense of separation is too strong and the main line is too weak to be effectively integrated. Generally speaking, you play your game and I play mine. Anyway, I will always win, even if I win, I will lose.

Why do so many people hate that the protagonist has a family? Because in the past, there were too many third-rate authors who had no outline and no plot. After mastering the plot, they still didn't know how to write. So we use relatives, friends and brothers as "plot propellers", but there is no main line? It doesn't matter, the family was kidnapped, dozens of chapters. No idea? My brother is poisoned and I need to find an antidote. There are dozens of chapters of water. No passion? Class reunions, auctions, birthday parties, pretending to be 13 slaps you in the face. This is not the scariest thing, the scariest thing is that the same supporting character is used several times... This is my only criterion for distinguishing third-rate authors from others. Third-rate author: Not to mention the lofty aspects of writing and plot, the writing is perfunctory, full of routines, nothing new, and the same problems are the same. The Ji Dao style is written as the reckless style (it has been exploited many times), Gou Dao is written as the coward style (everyone has to give in), and Shuang Wen wants to abuse it a few times (you think you are very innovative).

This doesn't look good. Author, you should write the original weird genre, or write a supernatural genre like mysterious resurgence.

Are you still opening a new book? The environment is not bad now. Mysteries and Dao tricks are popular. It's time for Senior Long to come out 🙂

? Why don't you make an announcement in Laoshu? . . . . If I hadn't searched for it on a whim, I wouldn't have known about the new book.

You won't write about Weirdness when it becomes popular. The previously popular book about Weirdness is still very rich and interesting in its setting. Although it's a bit broken later on, it doesn't affect it. It's really a good product.

Looking at the starting point, only one or two of the thousands of novels can be read. We must lock these rare authors in a cage for future generations to admire!

Senior Long, I miss you Senior Long, how can I live without your books, 🐉Senior😭😭😭😭😭😭

Senior Long, I am a long-time reader who has practiced horror. I think the general idea of ​​your book is right. It is an original horror genre with unlimited flow, but why can't I read it? Of course it's because it's not scary enough. Remember to scare people first, and upgrade as a supplement. Don't put the cart before the horse. Horror is your core selling point. That's why I can't forget your book. Come on!

Missing person Long Shezhi has not returned yet

After raising it for a while, I came back and found that it was dead. . .

The plot and story are too scattered, and I'm almost finished watching it. There is no excellent script and story. Basically, it's just fighting monsters and upgrading. The ghosts you encounter don't feel oppressive. Isn't the purpose of writing a weird flow to be thrilling? The previous book was well written, but this one is really not. It sounds good. The idea of ​​Small World is new, but it is very boring. I don't know any Small World story that can leave an impression on me. To be honest, I think the protagonist should not get the right to choose for the first time. A weird game has become an invincible game from now on. The weird invincible game is really boring. I can only say that I can barely watch it.

Which book has no one criticized? Popularity is slowly accumulated book by book. I'm very optimistic about your ability to write stories, but you can't get used to being a eunuch.

Did Senior Long change careers or reincarnate?

Is there a group? Didn't Senior Long write at the starting point?

It's been several months and I haven't published a new book. If the production team's donkeys had been stewed,

Come back, it's been 24 years, how many years has it been?

I am not sending a message to say anything, but to let you know that I am still waiting for you, or someone is waiting for you to write a book. When will you be back? Been waiting for you

I'm really convinced that such a good work has been cut. Now no one has to read it. Are you satisfied? I guess the author went back to screwing in again. As someone who advises people to cut books, I wish you to have 3 children in one birth, and all of them will be sons🙄🙄🙄🙄! ! ! ! !

What is the name of the author's new book? It feels like several high-ranking books are a bit similar

Senior Long has exhausted his talents😭😭😭

Alas, Weirdness became a big hit and you stopped writing.

Survival Manual in a Weird World This feels like the latest novel written by Long Shezhi. Compared with Senior Long, he is better at writing weird things. Please appreciate it.

Haven't won the Prison Dragon resurrection match yet?

Let me reply personally, 🍅 Is that Long Buqi the reincarnation of Senior Long? He looks so similar.

The Return of the Prison Dragon 😭, in fact, if Weird was not so hasty, I feel it would be at the level of Glory 1 star +

1: Why do doors have to be gathered together, and treasure chests have to be gathered together? There is only one road that can be easily blocked 2: The transaction price problem is serious, and the imbalance in prices destroys the plot 3: Meeting the players too early, and the plot after the players collide is a bit mindless 4: The protagonist's single-player plot is relatively boring, and it is not interesting to link up with the players

When writing about players traveling through a strange world, it is recommended that they collectively travel to a large map and interact with the indigenous people And it doesn't feel oppressive at all. The protagonist has a plug-in and is as invincible Secondly, even if there is a transaction, it is best not to have items from the original world such as firearms. , Instant noodles, mineral water, mobile phones, etc., It is best to only have the local system that has traveled through the world Secondly, it is too important to take transactions too seriously. To be honest, it is very boring. I think it is better to write original plots honestly. There are too many national time-travel transactions like this, and it is difficult to find it interesting.