Weird World of Immortality

I think this book is quite good, the only shortcoming is Xiaoliu! ! ! The biggest poisonous point! ! ! In the early stage, I forcibly wanted to be with the male protagonist. It felt like I was reborn and knew that the male protagonist would be very powerful in the future, so I vowed to follow the male protagonist to the death (I guess). Her whole body showed weirdness, and she finally died, but the male protagonist revived her again (which made me happy in vain). This book is good in everything, it is Xiaoliu! !

There is a logical problem in this book that I have never figured out. In such a terrifying world as described at the beginning of the book, the villagers did not learn martial arts to protect themselves if conditions allowed. Instead, they relied on dozens of short-lived people to learn martial arts for a few days to protect the long-lived people. However, when the danger came, the long-lived people could only wait to die or move to the village, or they were lucky enough that the short-lived people could win. If long-lived people had been practicing martial arts since childhood, there would probably be many more masters than there are now, and they would not be like at the beginning of the book, where the protagonist would not be able to defeat something weird in less than a month of practicing martial arts, but would have to wait for death. In the world of this book, human beings are doing their best to weaken their own power and put themselves in dangerous situations. Especially people with long lifespans have no power and no control over the idea of ​​protecting themselves. How strange!

The writing at the beginning is pretty good, but I don't know how to write it but it feels so stiff, and it feels like it's a twist just for the sake of a twist. If you say you like Li Jiuyue, just give her a reasonable reason. Author, when you first created the male protagonist, you were repressed and urgent. After all, lifespan is there, but suddenly there was a turning point because you found out that Li Jiuyue was a woman and you fell in love with her. No, even if you fall in love at first sight on the street, it would be better than this. Still, the early stage shaping of parents and Xiaoliu was quite good. The male protagonist cherished this relationship very much due to lack of it in his previous life. So why did he become a strongman? Aren't you worried about your parents? In such a big environment, shouldn't we protect our loved ones? Besides, I don't understand how Rikishi can help the male protagonist in terms of skills and longevity. I just saw Xiaoliu for a moment of empathy and then abandoned him? It's really baffling

It has been many days since I read it, and I want to come back and express my thoughts on this novel. First of all, the novel is definitely a good novel, with novel subject matter, superb techniques, and profound skills. Apart from the bad ending, this book is already one of the best among the novels I have read in the past 20 years.

Where can success come from without failure? How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain? It's called a weird world, but the protagonist has a smooth journey, getting whatever he wants and whatever he wants. Too perfect will highlight the unreality. In the world, any existence that can stand at the top will not continue to achieve nirvana in failure. How can you know the value of light unless you walk in the darkness yourself. The weird world of cultivating immortals, is he weird? Is it difficult for many people to be stuck in the Taoist realm and the golden body for a lifetime? The normal suppression of the system by the big realm is ruthlessly crushed by the protagonist with one knife after another. Finally, author, do you dare to let the protagonist fail once? Do you dare?

Author, don't you think it's disgusting to suddenly have an extra daughter, let alone have you forgotten the setting of your book? Before the name was changed, it was scary. Now it's weird. I think this is a standard zz fantasy. My daughter was arrested, something like that, and I saved him like a pig's trotter. Are you going to write like this in the future?

I can't stand it anymore after watching 1854. When Wei comes out, he will upgrade to drugs in the later period? ! The battle has started to get interesting. The most important thing is that the mystery of the movie (fog) at the beginning has disappeared, and it has become an ordinary world of cultivation. If the author can't go on, don't force the ending. The mysterious world of cultivation turns into a world of cultivation and turns into a world of drug addiction

I prefer this kind of oriental weird novel to The Lord of Mysteries, and the description of the realm is much better than many such as "Martial Disciple, Martial Saint, and Martial Emperor". The riots in Jingdu are one of the most exciting plots in this book. Among them, Yan Gui returned to seek justice for the innocent people who were used as pawns in Tianliang and assassinated the prince, and Yuan Hui became a "crazy monk" because of the disappointment of the Big Buddha Temple and the Little Buddha Temple.

I think the author should not write emotional lines. I have overlooked the IQ. I am inexplicably attracted to you because you are not writing a cool novel. This book is going to focus on fighting monsters, writing some inexplicable borrowed seeds, etc. This book is going to collapse.

The name is Xiuxian, and the category is Xiuxian, but I read more than 200 chapters, all of which are about warriors' methods.

I am a poor man, and the books I have read for so many years are all pirated. This is the second book I have paid to read because I really like it. I am posting this post in the hope that the author will not be affected by malicious book reviews and just keep his own ideas and rhythm. There will be people who like this story. In fact, anyone with some brains can tell that the trolls in book reviews are committed by gangs. There are always just a few points of trolling, which is not only far-fetched, but also very serious. So many words have been written in the book, and you complain that the current chapter is so unsightly that what supports you to see it now? I think that if a normal person reads a book and realizes that it is not their cup of tea, they should immediately change books. Do they still have to spend money to keep reading and being abused? I sincerely hope that the author will not be affected. My ability is limited and I cannot give a reward or anything. I can only say that I will read the original version of this book.

It's a pity that the ending is so rushed, but the world view and suspenseful horror atmosphere created at the beginning of the book are very good, and some funny parts don't feel too abrupt personally, but the ending is too hasty. Overall, this is a good novel! Especially the character creation is quite rich.

Seeing how shameless, cautious, and paranoid about persecution I feel now, I can tolerate it. After all, I am a lifeless person, but the further I go, the more outrageous it becomes. I can't see through the king's deceptions even in the two realms. He plays with all kinds of masters at will, as if everyone else is a waste who relies on pills to level up. , There are several kinds of laws at low levels. Even the Taoist God may not understand the power of the laws, let alone the same level. Only the protagonist has it. The law of heart is an existence that defies heaven. The main thing is to add it at will without paying any price. Do you need to talk about the law of time? You can use the three kitten postures whenever you want, without having to consider whether your own cultivation level can be used. Just use it, and the universe will be in seconds. It feels like the protagonist can now take possession of even the Tongtian realm as his own, not to mention the agnostic level. He can directly step across the body. Forget about finishing the story for the Star Lord. The monks in the world are like ants, trampling on them at will. I don't know if the invincible masters on the ship have been sleeping for too long. They are all manipulated by the protagonist. I really don't know how they cultivated to be invincible. There is no need to upgrade the Taoist mansion or Taoist god. Upgrading is just for longevity and has nothing to do with combat power. The protagonist is invincible. By the way, the Taoist government is about to become the most powerful defensive Taoist government in the universe. It is an existence that cannot be killed no matter how hard it is killed. It is truly immortal and eternal. I persisted in reading a few chapters, but I gave up if it didn't work. I really can't stand it, but the subject matter is really good. Personal opinion

It has a bit of a fairy tale feel. If it is combined with a satirical theme of reality, this book can be called a real literary work. I hope the author can grasp the rhythm later and never ruin this strange idea.

This is a novel with a weird survival atmosphere. The weird setting is very powerful. The first half of the novel is one of the most depressing works I have ever read among many novels. The depressive feeling that is so weird and powerful that it makes human beings despair makes this book different from ordinary novice novels. After a few years, even though many of the plots have been forgotten, the human beings are faced with a powerful and strange sense of despair, and even the protagonist with a golden finger cannot control his own destiny. It still leaves a deep impression. For readers who like horror atmosphere, this is a good work not to be missed. The world view and some weird settings are very thoughtful. It is a rare and good book for readers who like the weird and mysterious type of immortality.

I feel like I can't stand it when I write about Efu, it's so bloody stupid

These systems are so crazy. Just for weirdness, there are You, Resentment, Li Sha, Violence, Killing, Disaster, Nightmare, Quasi-Unknowable Level, Unknowable Level. As for the system of cultivators, as a book fan, I can't even remember it -_-||😭😭

I've given up and don't waste time anymore. The writing in the later part of this book is getting worse and worse. I feel that the author has exhausted all his talents and skills. He is too good at it, rests on his laurels, and follows the setting step by step. The author should still have some ideas, but he is too lazy. Come on.

The Tao is one foot high, and the devil is one foot high. The worldview of this book is hopeless, and weirdness is the protagonist.

As a young man with 8 years of experience in reading novels, this is the first book that I have read to the end. For other books, I either gave up after reading them, or I didn't know when they would be finished after not reading them for a long time. And this is the only book that I have been chasing since I saw it. Not only do I read it every day, but I will definitely read it every two or three days at most. Staying up late to catch up is even more common (after all, Senior Long only updated during the day today in my memory 😒). I have liked this book very much since I saw it. Whether it is the subject matter or other things, it is in line with my appetite. I won't comment on the plot. Anyway, if you like it, you will like it. If you don't like it, just don't watch it. The only bad thing is that the author communicates too little with book friends, and there is not even a book friend group. I hope the author can build one.

The writing at the beginning is pretty good, but after 5-6 chapters, I can't read it. It's a bit verbose, like a market lady bargaining, and there are not many scenes with a ball of garbage hair 😰😰😰

Long Shezhi, I support you. I don't care what others say, but I just think it's well written. I sincerely hope that your future books will become better and better! Full subscription supports you!

The early stage is very interesting, but the struggle for imperial power and beyond are just for fun💩

Congratulations on the completion. Spread flowers🌸 It's a wonderful story. Looking forward to Senior Long's next book. Congratulations on the 1000-point reward. It's a small gesture and it's not respectful 😁

The writing is good. The pace of the book is slow in the early stages and there are a lot of dialogues, so some people may find it a bit long-winded. However, it gradually gets better later on. Overall, it is very interesting. The article is neither too depressing nor too self-liberating.

I have been reading it intermittently for a while. The author's writing style is very good and the diction and the expansion map of wasteland are fascinating. The details of the characters are very good, and the advantages are obvious. At present, the only poisonous point in this book is the child bride Xiao Liu. Anyway, I don't know why he is acting out. Is it true that the description of the younger sister (I don't know if she is the heroine)... Is it true that feelings and family affection are mixed together, or is it a child bride... Is there any plot like that? I heard that there will be forced transfer of skills later, so I jumped over and took a look... It's hard to say that this wave of operations is really 666, and I don't know if this section can be rounded out in the future. This is a magical book, but the character feels like an unknown thing flew into his favorite dish, which is inexplicably disgusting. New book friends can refer to whether the character can accept it when entering the game. These things are not explained at the beginning, including things such as forcibly giving a complete system of exercises to the little one later, plus the physical mutation of the boss teacher to force him to follow the progress of the protagonist.

Is the protagonist over 16 when the book is finished?

I have read all the books from the same period as The Swordsman. The setting is great, the imagination is rich, and it is smooth. The ending feels a bit rushed, but I have written something of my own and is very distinctive. I deserve the award. It is a pity that the new book does not carry forward this point. Come on.

The most awesome thing about this book is that it's full of criticism. What does that mean? It shows that most people are still easily influenced by others. To put it simply, it is a herd mentality. At the beginning of this novel, someone picked up the tempo, causing many people to subconsciously just want to find fault. In the comment area, people talk about poison every day, and most people think it is really poisonous. This is like when Liu Xiang was sprayed as Xiang. It is really baffling when you think about it. , But people are like this, they will subconsciously agree with the public's opinions. In fact, if you think about it, compared with other novels, the poisonous points of the real book are just like a younger brother. Many people criticize this novel for more poisonous points than other novels. Many people immediately come to the comment area to say poisonous things when they see something they don't like. Isn't it influenced by those chapter reviews? In fact, most people give up on a novel and don't comment on it. It's the most common way to just give it a thumbs up! So I call for a fight, don't reply to any comments about poison points, don't be led away by this rhythm! I also call on the author to delete some critical comments in the early stages of the novel. I think this will reduce the number of people who can lead the way!

After reading it, I feel that there are quite a few poisonous points in this novel, but if you don't care about most of them, you can continue reading. I just ignored them and read them. Let's talk about the poisonous points in this novel. First, the theme framework is a bit vague. The name and content of the novel have not been too involved so far. It has been more than a hundred chapters and I still don't know where Xiuxian is. Of course, the author will definitely write about this later. Second, regarding the setting of martial arts training in the book, the book also says that weirdness is very dangerous and has been harming the villagers. In this case, why don't the rulers promote the simplest martial arts training method, which can not only enhance self-defense but also promote development. Moreover, in the world in the author's book, practicing qi does not require anything at all. It only requires a few movements and knowing a few acupuncture points. Moreover, the book also says that there are very few qi-sensing warriors. So why don't practice qi by measuring and piling up if it is so easy. Even if you can't successfully practice Qi, can't you still increase your strength? It can also promote social development and efficiency. Third, why are the types of weirdness not recorded in books and spread? We don't know when weirdness appeared, and the author didn't say it, but after looking at it for so long, I feel that the time when weirdness appeared is not short. It is very likely that it happened with the appearance of people. Has no one compiled the known types of weirdness seen in such a long time into a book and spread it? In that kind of world, fighting against weirdness is no longer a patrol team's business, but a matter for the entire human race. Readers, think about it, would you not record substances that are harmful to you? From the author's book, it seems that only talisman masters know weird things, while ordinary people and even many patrol teams don't know most weird things. Isn't this strange? Fourth, Xiaoliu, mainly because Xiaoliu's identity setting is too poor and appears too much in other novels. It is better to write Xiaoliu as an ordinary woman whom she does not know. If she is the heroine, it will help the reader's emotional investment. If she is not the heroine, it will also make the reader forget quickly. Readers are really tired of reading it. Maybe only some young readers and some niche readers can accept it. If Xiaoliu were the heroine, this would be really poisonous. Only perverts would like her sister's appearance as a heroine, and the author probably wouldn't write it like this. In my personal opinion, if readers find other poisonous points, they are welcome to discuss them, and forget about trolling.