A Dimensional Journey Beginning with Dragon Raja

Let's review it, the plot of Dragon Clan is indeed very good. But I don't know why you wrote about the God of Death. Normally, when a person dies, his soul becomes a soul, and when his soul dies, he becomes a void. But why do you change your soul again after your soul dies? When a void dies, your soul becomes a soul and is taken away by you. This setting is really funny whether it's the original one or something you added.

I haven't finished reading it yet, so I will give my review here. Qimao Reading is free. The author can write according to his own preferences. He can write whatever he wants. I didn't pay the author. I just read a few advertisements, and there is no connection in terms of interests. From the beginning of reading the book, it is all about knives. When I read the next few chapters, I understood that this book is not about knives for the sake of writing books. If so, you can write an outline and shorten the book to a thousand words. Just have the beginning and end in one chapter. Write a thousand words for "knife". The writing style is OK and the plot is OK. I think the protagonist can also be written to death, all of them, and the whole book will be completed.

I've read half of the Dragon Clan part, so I'll give you a brief review. At the beginning, the extra story introduces the male protagonist's life experience and attempts to establish a character, but it is completely superfluous. The character of the god is also inexplicable, and the character of the god is also abstract. The dragon clan is quite eye-catching at the beginning. It is really novel to write it since the Meineke period. The master and dragon slaying parts are also good. Then in modern times, people began to indulge in self-interest, and the protagonist's character became a selfish, fun-seeking, careless person who labeled a madman. Can you, the author, respect the original work for your self-congratulations? I would say that if you want to kill people, you can kill them casually. You know the plot of the original work and you don't do anything. Do you really think that readers are just reading the self-interest article you wrote? If you wear the Dragon Clan and nothing changes, let me see what you are doing.

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Once you see Xia Mi entering the academy, you can stop watching it. It's a waste of time.

Super Invincible Chubby Oil King Gay Story Suitable for people under 14 years old

After Dragons, it became a staple of graphic novels. 90% Of them were animated novels where the main characters occasionally came out to pretend to be too cool. I skipped several chapters without any problems. Because everything is in the water animation plot

The Dragon Clan is okay, but what are the others78

I skipped about halfway through watching Dragons. The beginning of Dragons was quite novel. After all, I didn't seem to have seen Dragons fanfics written when Angers was young. Then it got worse and worse, until the male protagonist wanted Xia Mi to go to Cassel's place. The male protagonist's premise instantly became a licking dog, so I jumped directly. Demon Slayer is the one that I watched the most, but I ended up skipping to watch it. As for Bleach, I jumped right into it after watching the beginning. The review was shit, and it was so hard to describe Bleach... It's quite funny. When writing about Bleach fandom, you can't see the various abilities and various Zanpakutos that are the highlight of Bleach. The male protagonist just uses the so-called regular abilities to show off. The biggest failure of this book is not the anecdote of the original plot. The biggest failure is the protagonist himself. He is too self-indulgent. This is not how Invincible is written. The fate after Death was even bigger. Even if I skipped reading, I couldn't even read a complete chapter. The character of the male protagonist is so disgusting. To sum up, I don't agree that this book is a fan fiction, but this novel is to give the protagonist a "rule" to have the ability to enjoy himself in various worlds. For example, after entering the Shinigami, we don't write about the zombies of the world, or how to improve and fight the spiritual pressure. We only write about the protagonist using the "rules" ability to show off. As the story goes on, the protagonist suddenly has spiritual pressure that can crush the world. As the story goes on, he suddenly knows everything. As for the process, there is no process. Then the protagonist uses fists in the fighting scenes, and he flashes the golden eyes that represent the dragon clan at every turn, which makes others feel scared. In short, it is all about crushing the original characters and abilities, grinding the original characters' IQs, abilities, and personalities to the ground. The original rule-based abilities are all rubbish. In a word, the protagonist has the supreme law of "destruction and creation", and various sudden abilities are explained by the protagonist's understanding of these two rules. No matter who the protagonist is, they can easily crush them all with their fists. The protagonist's own IQ can only be said to be true. This is not so much a fanfic as it is a self-pleasure article by the author disguised as a fanfic and going through the process. The author probably imagined himself as the protagonist. The protagonist written by the author is the author's own self-pleasure fantasy, rather than creating a real flesh-and-blood protagonist. If you want to read a fanfic, please don't click in. I really don't think this is a fanfic.

Dragons is good to read, but the back part is a mess. You can abandon this book after reading Dragons