Start from the First Place in Tianjin

It is said that the book lover of "Starting from the Guhuo Bird" felt that the work should be written too slowly, so he wrote it himself, and the writing had the flavor of the Guhuo Bird. They are all original Chinese martial arts heroes with unlimited flow titles starting from XX. The order of dungeon arrangement, world background setting and protagonist's character and ability are also similar, and the writing structure is equally capable and powerful. Jinmen corresponds to the Kowloon Walled City, the thirteenth year of Tianbao corresponds to the twentieth year of Wanli, and the pioneering of Siberia corresponds to Aoxiao Nanyang. The Ferryman of the Suffering Boat corresponds to the walking of Yama Buddha, the forty-nine seats of the Council correspond to the ten masters of the Yama Zhaohui, and the six seats of Bisu correspond to the twenty-four fruits of Lin and Dingyou. Draped with old wine corresponds to the Eight Diagrams Li Yan, Shenwu Luo corresponds to Guhuo Bird, the unnamed Miao Daofeng picture corresponds to the unknown Han sword and ring dragon... But what is more suitable for comparison is "The God of the Beginning is Dead", which was published at about the same time. They both revolve around a certain three-thirds of Chinese history, starting from the chivalrous martial arts of the Republic of China and ending with the Anti-Japanese War, and the third copy also goes to the Ming Dynasty. However, the structure of the world is different, and the two behave very differently. Chen Jiu is said to be a martial artist, but in fact he is more like a swordsman. He is brave but strategic, ruthless but not overstepping the bottom line, and has a three-point evil spirit that is rare for martial arts practitioners. The identity of the time traveler in the first copy was very reluctant, but it is actually more logical after removing it. There is no need for the system to give tasks. The protagonist already has the motivation to avenge his master and kick him out of the gym. Later, the enemy will be eradicated after he joins the Japanese. The mission is superfluous. Just complete the mission "Sir, times have changed." Why not? The protagonist has also found a good sponsor. The other two tasks were completed without any deliberate effort. It was too much of a coincidence and the impression was not good. It is obvious that they were forced to imitate the Guhuo Bird but did not digest it sufficiently. The protagonist follows the master's old path and follows the opponent's rules to play in the gym. In fact, the final victory depends on having a financial backer behind him so that the enemy does not dare to do evil again. Here the Japanese are the pig teammates of the enemy. If the enemy does not run away and loses to the protagonist, it can be regarded as a good story of the Yangtze River where the waves behind push the waves ahead. In a plot like kicking a gym, if the enemy refuses to surrender to the Japanese and is defeated by the Japanese, and then the protagonist saves the enemy and kills the Japanese, it will be obviously more satisfying. In Gu Huo Niao, the grievances between the Li family and his son Guan Yantao are less written but more vivid. If you describe the enemy as "low" or "weak", your own victory will actually be compromised. In the first match, the protagonist pretended to be a big dick in the teahouse. He spoke loudly but was suppressed and lost. In the end, he won the opponent by stealing the teacher's secrets, which was not very good at martial arts, and he couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist's rapid rise in strength does not depend on the system, but on picking up a ghost jar. Why didn't you pick it up earlier or later? I stayed in this world for two years and four months and still had mediocre martial arts. Suddenly, I suddenly skyrocketed and was able to kick four families in one day. You must know that Master kicked eight families for three months. Wouldn't it be more reasonable to say that the protagonist was transported to the system when he was released from prison? The second dungeon was suddenly transferred to the strange and mysterious Chang'an plane. The style of the world changed, and so did the style of the protagonist. I can only say that writing really depends on talent. The first volume was obviously better prepared, but the stuck volume is even better. The progress of this volume is visible to the naked eye. I have more stuff, and I can look forward to the future. However, I have learned to be slow in updating, usually once a day. Since the author is a college student, updates may be interrupted due to finals or other reasons. Finally, let's talk about the heroine. This book currently seems to have no heroine. Even if there is a small chance that there will be a heroine in the future, her presence will not be high. After all, Mugenliu's style of painting doesn't go well with multiple female protagonists. If the female protagonist is an ordinary person outside the dungeon, and her relationship with the protagonist is not equal at all, it will be difficult to last. The female protagonist is another team member of equal strength, and it is unlikely that the protagonist will be tolerated. Moreover, in this case, there is basically no need for male supporting characters to exist, and the entire world setting will be very incomplete. If you want to write a complete unlimited flow story, it would be better not to have a female protagonist. So, Chen Jiu liked movies about big stars, but he was unwilling to be her martial arts instructor. The caring and romantic spirit refuses to take it, and the sweet-natured rich lady doesn't like it either. Although he has a good appearance, a strong body and strong bones, he is clean and self-sufficient and maintains his "empathy" for the common people.

Don't be fooled by the title of the book. Before I clicked on it: I understand, this book is a no-brainer and pretentious. After reading the first chapter: my eyes lit up, Huo! The historical story of the era is coming to my face, this chapter is enough to fill a whole volume This novel does not need three golden chapters, just one chapter is enough

As if he saw a big boss rising up, he decided to conquer the land first, 😌

The young man is chivalrous and makes friends with heroes from all five cities. Liver and gallbladder holes. Hair twitching. Talking. Life and death are the same. A promise is worth a thousand pieces of gold. Push Qiaoyong. Arrogant and indulgent. Cover lightly. Lianfei Yao. Douchengdong. When drinking wine, the spring scenery floats in the cold jar. Sucking in the sea and hanging rainbow. Idle calls of eagles and dogs, white feathers picking eagle bows. The cunning hole is empty. Happy rush. Like a yellow beam dream. Bid Danfeng. The moon is bright. Yanggu canopy. Officials are redundant. Huai Ruan. Falling dust cage. Book series. He Bian is like a cloud. For rough use. Suddenly strange power. Jia agitates. Yuyang Lane. Thinking of Bei Weng. If you don't ask for a long tassel, you will be chosen from the genius. The sword roars to the west wind. I hate climbing mountains and facing water. I send Qixiantong in my hand. Watching the return home. This is from Song Dynasty poet He Zhu's Liuzhou Songtou·Young Chivalry. I think it is very suitable.

Advantages: The school girl gets the bird Disadvantages: I learned all the good and bad ones

The Seventy-Two Transformations of Earthly Fiends, Cuckoo Bird, this book, Playing with Ghosts and Gods, do any book friends have any recommendations for this kind of chivalrous style that allows you to enjoy grudges and grudges? For those who have read The Hard Life of Buddhist Salted Fish, do you have any recommendations for a more tranquil Ren Xia style book?

Chapter 1: "I don't know how to live or die and I am asking for trouble at the starting point"; Chapter 2: "The 18th-rate young author attempts to challenge the original Zhutianliu"; Chapter 3: "The third-rate writer has written some insignificant results"; Chapter 4: "New authors in the Internet literary circle have contributed to Zhutianliu"; Chapter 5: "Little Crocodile's new book has received very good feedback"; Chapter 6: "The great Crocodile King set off a craze at the starting point of his loyalty."

He should be the same at work, and he deserves to be the one who taught him

I made a character correspondence table based on hearsay. Book friends are welcome to correct me. Zuo Fengtu - the prototype should be Ma Fengtu, a famous master of Pigua and Baji during the Republic of China, who wrote the "Hand-Blade Tactics Tutorial" for the Northwest Army There are others that will be updated downstairs.

Who can't be imitated other than imitating Aunt Guniao Gu Gu Gu Gu

I shouldn't recommend this book to my friends. Now that I'm a eunuch, I'll be scolded to death😅

This is my first time drawing a fanfic for my favorite novel! Hope you like it! By the way, I'm looking for some good novels. There's a shortage of books. Brother, cute! ! !

I think this book is as good as the master plot in the original movie. It is very good. Moreover, the author was very particular about the sects he chose. The Phi Hanging Gate, Qi Family Sword, and Japanese Killing were very in line with the background of the era at that time. It's really delicious. If the follow-up can be maintained, it should be the next one, "Guhuo Bird". Of course, the author should not be like him and stop it for so long. It is even worse to stop it!

The ending of the second copy of this book has a pacing problem. It's not satisfying to the end, and the problem is not solved. It's so frustrating that I can't finish it (it's frustrating and annoying to watch). It's like the protagonist left a mess and ran away. You killed Li Longji (not completely) and did not provide a solution. The people of the Tang Dynasty will only become worse. You killed An Lushan at least, which can be regarded as drinking poison to quench thirst. Now it seems that because the protagonist assassinated Li Longji, Li Longji was half dead and lost control of the world. An Lushan took advantage of the situation and raised troops to rebel against the Tang Dynasty. The world was in chaos and the people were in dire straits ever since. I would rather be a peace dog than a troubled person. I killed Li Longji with a knife. The protagonist was happy, but it was the common people who suffered. In the first volume, the protagonist did not assassinate Huo Dianchen for the reputation of his master. He considered the consequences of his actions. The end of this volume is completely mindless and hard-hit. It feels like the author first thought of the ending of this volume with the protagonist assassinating the emperor and being moved by himself, and then filled in the content, but the logic was lost. Of course, An Lushan's rebellion had nothing to do with the protagonist's behavior, but the author's description makes people feel that it was the protagonist's knife that started the troubled times.

Anecdotes and Strange Stories Building Guys, ghosts, heroes, and famous sayings from all over the world, from all over the world, can come to this building to talk about them. Old stories are the basis of new stories. Wall around~~

There is no other meaning, just to see Li Longji being slaughtered and made into a walking corpse. Without Li Longji to suppress An Lushan, the fate of the Colossus is doomed when it dies. So the protagonist is the direct reason why hundreds of millions of people in the Tang Dynasty were massacred and displaced by the barbarians, the national destiny of the Tang Dynasty was cut off, and the barbarians rebelled wildly? Written like this on purpose, the author has something in his butt! Because he sympathizes with the suffering of the people, he brings a hundred times more suffering to the country and the people. Does the author want to express such a profound meaning?

This is life without Gugu🐦, but suffering from Gugu🐦's disease. He deletes his books and leaves, never to be seen again.

The book is a good book. The writing, plot, and characterization are all excellent, but it's not suitable for me. It's a pity.

It has been three years, and there are not many similar works that are not super-supervisory. It is really The Curse of the Cuckoo Bird

We still don't know why this book was discontinued

Come back and continue writing, brother, I can pay for it

Today's two are doubled to four, please refine! 🥺🥺🥺🥺

The writing is quite good. Fortunately, I finally found a good book again. The writing and plot are great! Give the author some personal opinions. One is to find ways to make the protagonist and the enemy almost the same, and then fight back to the extreme. This kind of plot can be possible, but it is best to put it at the climax, otherwise it will be a bit ugly. For example, the martial arts gym in the front does not need to be at its limit, but the final BOSS will be at its limit. Gu Huoniao once persuaded him to quit because the protagonist has always been evenly matched. He tried every means to weaken the protagonist. Why was his soul wrong and his skills unusable? The other is that the author must not learn what he deserves! Don't be like a eunuch but not a eunuch! Good books are not meant to torture people! Become a god when the author puts it on the shelves🤭

Two monthly tickets today are doubled by four, and they will be the same tomorrow! Please improve! 🥺🥺🥺🥺

There are very few authors who write with such care and content. If you stick to it, you will definitely become a master. Sigh, it was so well written. Flesh and blood and connotation

End of Chapter 26 of Volume 1: 915847139

I have read several similar books, including the Cuckoo Bird fanfic, and they are all eunuchs 😅