Shrouding the Heavens: Beginning by Opening the Sixth Secret Realm in Reverse

Are you serious, the author? The mighty men and elders of the Holy Land of Shaking Light keep saying "f*ck". Are you writing about a monk or a lowly gangster?

You should write the protagonist as an orphan, who shouldn't have parents. When I saw the powerful parents, the Holy Lord, a bunch of old fossils, and the cubs that the Imperial Soldiers loved and protected. But worrying about how many bottles of medicine? I don't understand. Seeing two ruthless people oppressing brats, it doesn't make sense, it doesn't make sense. Are these two people so lawless? So is it possible to think so? The ruthless lineage has already dominated the Fluctlight? Holy Lord, is the old fossil the same ruthless person? Otherwise, why would you let those two people go? The author should think more when writing a book and make sense! It doesn't make sense, I'm so angry, I can't stand it! Small comments.

Good guy, at the age of ten, he joined the body of Tianxin and killed the Great Sage. All the emperors share the same enemy, and the emperor's soldiers came to surrender. Is this still the development of Gou in the introduction?

Seeing Gai Jiuyou's appearance, I really can't stand it anymore. I complained about the following points: 1. The setting that Daoyun points can perform attacks at the level of the Great Emperor, Red Dust Immortal, and Immortal King is the biggest failure. Just touch the elixir of immortality to get 10 million Immortal King-level Dao Yun points, and perform 10 Immortal King-level attacks without any sequelae, killing 10 As the Supreme Lord of the Forbidden Lands, why not just level all the Forbidden Lands from the beginning and plunder the resources of all the Forbidden Lands? It is really too poisonous. Second, setting the protagonist to be from the Yaoguang Holy Land, and there is no problem twenty years before Ye Fan arrives in Beidou, but why inexplicably did you move all the plots after twenty years to the twenty-year period? Tomb of the Green Emperor has also fucking opened 3. Another major failure and poisonous point is that the ancient emperor inexplicably had a premonition of the protagonist's arrival, and saw the appearance of the protagonist a long time ago. Both Wu Shi Emperor and Void Emperor had a premonition. The gods of Wu Shi Bell and Void Mirror all know the existence and specialness of the protagonist. Gai Jiuyou saw the portrait of the protagonist on the Starry Sky Ancient Road, what a mess... 4. The combat power is in a mess, Tao Palace Killing Power…Finally, let's talk about the setting of this book which is acceptable: the Sixth Secret Realm is opened in advance, and through the power of the Sixth Secret Realm, one can perfectly control one's own power, can imitate the Tao marks in the void, help the protagonist realize the Tao, and can help the protagonist penetrate the door of potential in the body, thereby opening and fully opening the door of potential in the body in advance, promoting physical evolution, and even re-carving the Yuanling Body, the Innate Taoist Holy Body, etc. Although the existence of the Sixth Secret Realm is a bright spot, this book can still poison people to death.

This book truly makes it possible to marry a ruthless man as a wife and take God Liu as a concubine🙂🙂

The protagonist touches the Nine Dragons Coffin and can't he get the Taoist points of the Immortal Emperor and above?

He was born with such a big difference. He should not hide it and cultivate it well. He should not give resources but collect and protect them like ordinary disciples. This is the first point. The second point is about the opportunity of the imperial weapon. I have been observing it for several years. I don't need to emphasize what the imperial weapon means. Two slayers are fighting for one person, and my father is protecting the way. A disciple who has no resources and wanders around every day

In the second chapter, the author emphasizes that the villain is very awesome, so awesome that he can kill Pig's Foot's family with just one slap. Then the villain suspects that Pig's Foot has an opportunity, so he insists on spending many years to monitor and test Pig's Foot. Why doesn't he just kill Pig's Foot? A normal person would know how to kill by mistake and let go. Whenever the villain encounters something related to pig's feet, his IQ becomes abnormal.

I have read the first ten chapters. The protagonist is a genius, has powerful parents, and has an incompetent father. At the age of five, he lacks basic resources and does not ask his parents for them. He has to pretend to be a slap in the face to attract hatred. The protagonist is only five years old. His birth was really an accident. His powerful parents do not provide resources? Compared with other holy places, it's amazing

Overall it's pretty good, but hitting the King at the Emperor level is like hitting a fly with an atomic bomb. It's a little poisonous. It would be better to change it to the Saint level.