Cyber ​​Fairy Tale

Everything is good, but the author's writing skills are not that strong. There is a lot of nonsense in the early stage, and there is still a lot of nonsense in the later stage. It is also very dull. Although it is not the kind of 100 chapters a day, it is uncomfortable to watch. It feels like a host with a price of more than 100,000 yuan uses a Snapdragon processor.

I read it in one go and it really opened my mind. Prosthetic body alienation produces monsters, system loopholes descend into the material world and become monsters, information-state life forms turn into evil gods, and there are also aliens who are extraterrestrial demons. Binary talismans, customized flying swords, automatic training scripts, genetic modification of Yellow Turban warriors, and the matrix reincarnation system built by the big sect to achieve immortality, etc. The world view presented in the entire book is really amazing. I haven't seen such a dazzling setting in a long time. Write well, author, I support you! 😡

Victor, the old immortal, has boundless magic power. The immortal touches my head, knots my hair and imparts spiritual roots.

The author's sentence fragmentation is not very good. He insisted on adding a comma in many places that did not require sentence breaks. Do you feel that it is difficult to read this paragraph of mine because I am imitating the author's sentences?

It's well written, but a bit lame.

After reading Chapter 124, the overall setting is amazing, and the story cannot withstand scrutiny. The biggest failure is the plot of the Yellow Turban Warriors. First of all, the protagonist knows that this kind of technology is one of the few that can affect the sect's rule. But he didn't mean to hide himself at all. Second, there is no strength to repeatedly jump across both sides of the war to make war fortune. If I were the leader of both sides of the war, I would join forces and kill you first. Why? Everyone has it, which means no one has it, so why should you make this money? And you are not as strong as me. Thirdly, when the sect passed on the moves, the protagonist actually thought it would be good to hand over his skills. Why do you think the sect will let go of an ant that affects its own interests? Rather than being trampled to death? And what if such a precious technology is leaked to a hostile sect by you? So the best choice is to get the technology and kill the protagonist. Then only my family will know this technology. The second is to kill the protagonist and not get the technology, which is acceptable. No matter how I look at it, I can't see a reason for the protagonist to live. Fourth, just in case, I brought Tang Xiaofeng with me. What do you think about this? Can Tang Xiaofeng save you or do you think the sect will use him to threaten you. You have made up your mind to master technology. . . . . . . . .

Are the Mechanics cultivating immortality? They don't understand why they have to practice slowly even if they change the equipment. . . Especially if the whole body is mechanical, raising parts can also help upgrade the parts. Personal opinion. . . 😂😂😂😂

Tang Xiaofeng, what's the use of having friends with this kind of person? His writing is so vicious

The cracker part felt inexplicably intellectual, and suddenly the worldview was downgraded. Neither fish nor fowl

Didn't your elders tell you that you will die quickly if you meddle in other people's business?

All I can say is that creativity is a staple. The writing is a piece of hay. Foreshadowing is a poisonous weed

I just started reading this, and the main character's name appears 55 times in the first chapter. . . I was bored and counted 😰 seriously, hoping that I can use it reasonably. . .

Well, how should I put it? Obviously one of the three chapters mentioned the importance of technology, but I casually taught what I learned to that Tang. I was amazed at the beginning, but later on, book friends, you can read it for yourselves, I won't reveal it😏

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Chapter 48: I can't hold on any longer. Holy Mother, I can't stand it anymore even though I'm thinking so much. I'm speechless. What does life and death have to do with you?

It's a different soup without changing the medicine. The setting is unique and the plot is old-fashioned about cultivating immortals, so it's very awkward to watch. I always feel like something is wrong.

Seeing Chapter 8, this task setting is too childish. If the task failed before, it would be directly punished. Should those who also received the task be compensated? The task must have an audit mechanism to determine the cause of the task failure, share responsibilities, and make corresponding punishments. In the subsequent mutual transfer mission, when the route was clear, the target changed the route without authorization and threatened with the mission. Many people actually compromised? ? ? ? In this case, the employee should have the right to terminate the assignment and demand compensation. If a big sect protects the mission target because of such a thing, it can still survive for a long time. You must know that the mission target is also an ordinary person working for them. All details are unreasonable

The creative setting is very good, but the writing and logic are quite poor, especially the plot connection is very blunt. It's a pity that it's tasteless.

. . . . My whole body is mechanical, and I am still cultivating immortality. Where are my meridians? Where is Dantian? Just rely on your brain to fix it?

It's so boring and boring. I don't know what the main story is, so I just keep doing missions.

Isn't the author short of money? If the Golden Alliance is smashed, I won't be able to collect it.

When will the author come back? It's been so many years

The magic power of Cyber ​​Cultivation is boundless. The author is really imaginative. I don't know how the author came up with the proper names and functions of the things in Cyber ​​Cultivation.

For the time being, I have only read 20 chapters. It's not bad, but it's just that I can see the immaturity and roughness of the writing. The harsh turning point and the broken economic setting are visible to the naked eye. This is only Chapter 20 The advantage is that it has good imagination and novel creativity

It is said that the spiritual energy of the mechanical school is not enough for physical training, but the prosthetic limbs must be replaced to train the woolen body.

Recommended book "I am the Assimilation Fighter", written by myself, a pure science fiction novel, if you are interested, you can take a look at the tags: [Cyberpunk] [Holy Father] [No System] [Stars] ps: If there is any interruption, please delete it.

Brother Chicken's adventure is so interesting

What is the name of the protagonist? We need to remind you a lot, otherwise we may not be able to remember it well.

It would be better if we add some Western knights, magicians, elves and so on.